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高考作文高考作文考纲要求准确的使用语法和词汇：精准精准使用一定句型、词汇句型、词汇，清楚，连贯地清楚，连贯地表达自己的意思；具体要求1.内容要涵盖所有的要点涵盖所有的要点；2.不写无关的不写无关的内容；3.避免出现句子结构、时态、语态等大错误句子结构、时态、语态等大错误；4.有效有效地使用使用语句与语句之间的连接词连接词，使文章结构紧凑，逻辑通顺合理，顺其自然；5.高级结构。词汇、句型。词汇、句型。注意事项1.书写工整，力争美观；2.词数：+/-20字3.内容要点和语法内容要点和语法是评分的最重要依据；特别是内容要点。如果如果一篇文章要点不到位要点不到位，语法再好、词汇、句式再高级，都不可能是不可能是高分作文！高分作文！4.审题：审要点；要点；审时态；时态；审要点与要点之要点与要点之间的关系间的关系。高级词汇1.对词汇进行必要的替换！important变成significant/of greatimportance/of great significance change变成transform2.高级句型结构 It句型 名词性从句 非限制性定语从句 分词结构 with结构 倒装句 （详见讲义）（详见讲义）题材突破从体裁来分从体裁来分:一、书信类（应用文应用文）感谢信建议信道歉信邀请信求职信投诉信申请信推荐信二、演讲稿三、通知四、谚语警句（开放类议论文）五、观点论证（开放类议论文）六、记叙文从题型来分：从题型来分：一、提纲类二、漫画类三、图表类书信类无论哪种类型的书信，无论题目中有任何要求，都要注意以下几点:1.明确自己的写作目的2.清晰、准确地陈述事实3.使用符合该种书信的语言4.要在一开始就定下写作基调，开头就明确地表达自己的感情，说明写信的原因说明写信的原因。要将所讲述的事情与你写信的对象联系起来与你写信的对象联系起来，把要点依照逻辑顺序联系要点依照逻辑顺序联系起来。有技巧的把文有技巧的把文字背景加到信中去字背景加到信中去。作文一：近年来，华北的一些城市频繁出现（华北的一些城市频繁出现（smog）天气，引起了人们对空气质量的广泛关注。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友你的美国笔友David对目前中对目前中国出现的雾霾天气也很关注国出现的雾霾天气也很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。要点如下：要点如下：1、感谢他的关注；2、简述雾霾天气给人们的身体和生活带来的不便和危害；3、谈谈你的感想。本作文是属于有提纲的半开放是式作文，其中雾霾带来的影响与你的感想是开放的，怎么写，因人而异。分析要点：分析要点：1.回信2.感谢对方对雾霾的关注；3.雾霾对人们身体和生活带来的影响。什么影响？4.我的感想？文字背景：1.中国许多地方都出现了雾霾；2；引起了人们(我)的关注；生活方面：交通堵塞；交通事故；身体方面：咳嗽；甚至肺癌等等倡导环境保护！怎么保护？分几段？第一段写什么？第二段写什么？分几段？第一段写什么？第二段写什么？选择词汇；选择句型！注意时态！选择词汇；选择句型！注意时态！Im glad to receive your letter!Ive learnt that.Thanks for your concern.sb be concerned/worried about.smog strikes some cities and areas of China.sth bring.to sb traffic jam;road accidents;bad coughs;lung cancers,and so on.我的感想部分，第二段我的感想部分，第二段可以用到的句型：As we all know,It is universally acknowledged that.It is widely accepted that.environment;protect;protection;environment-friendly;air-friendlydrive less;take public transportations;only when.can we.第三段：第三段：looking forward to your reply;share.with.your idears最后一步，确定句子与句子之间的关系，有最后一步，确定句子与句子之间的关系，有必要的话要使用一些关联词。必要的话要使用一些关联词。Dear David,Im glad/more than glad to receive your letter.连词成句；连句成段；连段成篇连词成句；连句成段；连段成篇Ive learnt that you are concerned about the smogthat/which frequently strikes some cities and areas of China.Im also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to peoples health such as traffic jam,road accidents,bad coughs and even lung cancers and so on.Thanks for your concern.As is known to all,good environment comes from careful protection.So we should do what we can toprotect it.I believe a small step can make a difference.Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products.Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have a blue sky.Looking forward to hearing from you and sharing your good ideas with me.作文训练一：作文训练一：是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled realease）,即直接传递给另外一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英语写信申请参加。内容应包括：1.选择一种分享方式；2.简述做出该选择的理由；3.希望了解更多信息。Dear Sir/Madam,Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide.审题：要点：1.写信目的：申请参加.2.两种书籍分享方式：3.我选择的方式；原因（好处）是.?4.请求给予更多的信息词汇：I am writing to apply for the opportunity to.Youve introduced two ways.wild release;controlled releaseI prefer.;.is/wins my favor.Because.I would be appreciated/grateful if you could provide.Dear Sir/Madam,Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to take part in it for the simple reason thatI love reading and I own a large number of books.Youve introduced two ways to share books.One is wild release and the other is controlled release.Of the two,the latter wins my favor.By means of controlled release,I need to deliver books directly to other participants.Not only are books shared in this waybut it can build a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information,I would be very grateful.Looking forward to your reply.作文训练二：作文训练二：假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris取得联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。（1）自我介绍；（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；（3）询问对方的其他需求。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。Dear Chris,How are you doing?审题：审题：要点：1.自我介绍；2.捐赠图书类型（关于哪些方面的）?捐赠图书册数：多少？用途（目的）？3.今年去参加夏令营的时候将书带过去；4.询问其他需求。词汇：词汇：chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High schoolwill donate/give away some books to Chinese classlanguage learning;Chinese history;Chinese poetry,and so on.300/400.hope to;when.take part in.;summer camp;in July this year;take.along with.Dear Chris,How are you doing？Im Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School.Our school will donate some books to the Chineseclass in your school.We will give away different types of books which include language learning,Chinese history,Chinese poetry,and others.There are,in total,300 books.We hope that these books will help the students to learn Chinese better.By the way,when we go to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year,we will take the books along with us.If there is something else we can do for you,please contact us in time.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.作文训练三作文训练三：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1.该人物是谁；2.该人物的主要贡献；3.该人物对你的影响。Dear Jim,Its a great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the last Qing Dynasty.He,in his book,Haiguotuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.作文练习四：作文练习四：假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photograph club）将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1.主题：环境保护；2.展览时间；3.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photograpy Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.标准范文标准范文 I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more and more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to .Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li HuaDear Peter,How is everything going?Here is some exciting news for you.An international High School Student Photography Show is to be held by the photography club in our school.I am writing to invite you to join it.The show,whose theme is environmental protection,is designed for middle school students.It aims at encouraging people to fight air pollution and live a green life.All the students who are good at photography are welcome to participate.The entries are scheduled to be on display from June 26 to June 28 in the exhibition hall.If you are interested in it,满分作文满分作文 please send your photos to intlphotoshow before June 10.The winner will be announced on the last day.I do hope that you can join us.Looking forward to your eraly reply.Yours,Li Hua.Dear Peter,I am writing to tell you that an Inernational High School Student Photograhpy Exhibition will be held by the photography club in our school.I would like to invite you to share your photos with us.I remember you are fond of taking photos.Some of the photos that you sent me impressed me deeply.I think it is time for you to show your talent.The theme of the exhibition is environmental protection,and according to the schedule,all the photos collected will be exhibited from June 25 to June 30.If you are 满分作文满分作文interested,please send your fvorite photos related to this theme to before June 18.Look forward to your participation.Yours,Li Hua.作文训练五：作文训练五：假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生于你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。1.回顾双方交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；2，谈谈收获或感想；3.表达祝愿与期望。注意：1.词数不少于100,2.可适当加入细节，时内容充实、行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。标准范文：Dear friends,How time flies!It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program,which has benefited all of us.During the past two weeks,we have studied and lived together,which has enabled us to know each other better.Doing the same sports on the playgroud gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.What impress us most are your art skills,in which you guys have showed outstanding talent.I believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.Finally,on behalf of all the students in our school,I wish you all a safe and happy journey back home.I do hope that there will be more programs like this in the coming future.Thank you.Dear friends,How time flies!The exchange program,which lasts two weeks,has come to an end.However,what matters most is the friendship we have developed during the two weeks.And thanks to you guys,we have learned a lot of English culture and customs.We have spent two happy weeks together,comparing notes over language study and helping each other get familiar with one anothers life.All this will be a good memory for us to look back on.满分作文满分作文 Thank you again for all that you have taught us.I am looking forward to a chance to pay you a visit in the coming future.Thank you.Dear friends,How time flies!Two weeks,during which we have spent a wonderful time,really feels so short.Its really hard to say goodbye.Thanks to the exchange program,we have studied and lived together for two weeks,which provides us with a great chance to know more about English culture as well as school life there.And thanks to the heated but friendly competitions,we have learned that friendship comes first and competition second.I feel greatly honored to give you a speech.May you all have a good journey back home.And I wish there would be more such wondeful and beneficial programs in the future.Thank you.信息隐藏类假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院（Confucius Institute）学习，你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗歌（poetry）比赛中获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。注意：词数100左右 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。祝贺信的格式祝贺信的格式常用语Congratulations e true.How happy I am to hear.I have learned with delight that you.I would like to express my congratulations on.I feel very happy for you(r).is quite exciting news!I know this is surely owing to.It is a reward that you richly deserve for your.Please accept.套用句式练习我很高兴你梦想成真。我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺。请接受我最诚挚的问候。我希望你的未来是灿烂的。I feel very happy for your dreams coming ture.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.Please accept my warmest regrads.I wish you a bright future./I hope your future will be glorious.给佳作挑挑错Dear Henry,I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations your admission into Biology Department of Peking University as a graduation.As your close friend,I just want you to know what lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I was at your admission.In my views,you work hard and besides that,you are a very intelligence person.This admission is a reward where you richly deserve.I am sure you willmake a greater progress in your study and obtain a brightly future in your life.I wish you greater success in your school career and I am look forward to good news from you soon.Best wishes!Yours Li HuaDear Lucy,Im pleased to learn youve just won the first prize in the Chinese competition held in your institute.Im writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.It came as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture,especially Chinese poetry,and youve been studying in the local Confucius Institute for years.Im so proud to see all your efforts have paid off.I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country.Wish you greater pogress in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours sincerely,Li HuaDear Mr.Smith,How is everything?Our class is planning to cycle the West Lake to watch the dragon boat race on May 30,when the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated nationwide.Well gather at our school gate at 8 am.Id like to invite you to go with us and experience this unique Chinese culture.The dragon boat race,originally held in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan,has now become a common practice and developed into a sport.Im sure it will be exciting and enjoyable.Your presence will certainly add to our pleasure.Do come and have fun.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua假定你是李华，你的班级决定组织同学们5月30日端午节（the Dargon Boat Festival）一起骑自行车去西湖观看龙舟比赛。请你给外教Smith先生写封邮件，邀请他上午8：00在学校门口集合，一同前往，感受中国传统文化。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。邀请信常用句型：邀请信常用句型：We are throwing a surprise party for.Wed like to invite you to.我们将为.举办惊喜派对。我们想邀请你.Weve having/planning.on.(date)and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.我们将于.(日期)举行.(活动)，如果你能来参加就太好。Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.活动细节如下。I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.如果你能接受我的邀请，我会非常感激。We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.如果方便的话，我们希望你能接受我们的邀请。Wed appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.如果方便的话，我们希望你能接受我的邀请。Im sure you will have a good time./Im sure it will be exciting and enjoyable.我确信你会玩得开心。Your presence will certainly add to our pleasure.你的出席一定会增添我们的欢乐。Do come and have fun.一定要来玩。假定你是李华，应约为某英文网站写一则简讯，报道你校刚刚结束的中文诗词大赛（Chinese Poetry Contest）,内容包括:1.目的（鼓励学习诗词文化）；2.形式（朗读、背诵）；3.结果。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。p经常不断地学习,你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量pStudyConstantly,AndYouWillKnowEverything.TheMoreYouKnow,TheMorePowerfulYouWillBe学习总结结束语当你尽了自己的最大努力时，失败也是伟大的，所以不要放弃，坚持就是正确的。When You Do Your Best,Failure Is Great,So DonT Give Up,Stick To The End演讲人：XXXXXX 时 间：XX年XX月XX日