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书面表达(满分书面表达(满分25分)分)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教)。给外教MrJenkins写信,请她帮你修改写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(所附材料的文字和格式(format)。)。注意:注意:1.词数词数100左右左右;2.可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。DearMSJenkins,ImLiHuafromEnglishwritingclass.Imwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Imapplyingforapart-timejobinaforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatIveused.Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butIdbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.Pleasefindmyapplicationletterandresumeintheattachment(附件(附件).Thankyouforyourkindness!(102Words)Yours,LiHUa佳作欣赏佳作欣赏-2016高考全国高考全国I卷作文范文卷作文范文1 佳作欣赏-2016高考全国I卷作文范文12016高考全国高考全国I卷作文范文卷作文范文鉴赏。鉴赏。=用词的地道用词的地道=句式的高级句式的高级=句句之间的衔接句句之间的衔接经典累积经典累积我知道你很忙,但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并我知道你很忙,但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并作出必要的改变我会很感激。作出必要的改变我会很感激。然而,并且,但是然而,并且,但是askforyourhelp;applyfor;makechangesIknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butIdbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.however-and-;but;22016高考全国I卷作文范文鉴赏。经典累积我知道你很忙,但如Writing写出优质句子,写出优质句子,突破作文高分突破作文高分3Writing3 学习目标学习目标1.能够鉴赏范文,掌握文中有用能够鉴赏范文,掌握文中有用的句型和好的表达形式。的句型和好的表达形式。2.通过合作讲解:通过合作讲解:能够写出正确的简单句能够写出正确的简单句能够创作出精彩高档句能够创作出精彩高档句3.掌握如何评价一份作文。掌握如何评价一份作文。4 学习目标4 第二步:找出修饰成分,第二步:找出修饰成分,添加修饰成分。添加修饰成分。第一步:找出句子主干,第一步:找出句子主干,翻译句子主干。翻译句子主干。5怎样译出地道的简单句?第二步:找出修饰成分,第一步:找出句子例句:例句:为了逃避挨骂,那个淘气的男为了逃避挨骂,那个淘气的男孩没关水龙头就跑了。孩没关水龙头就跑了。第一步:找出句子主干,第一步:找出句子主干,翻译句子主干。翻译句子主干。男男孩孩跑了跑了 注意:时态和语态注意:时态和语态Theboyranaway.6例句:第一步:找出句子主干,=Thatnaughtyboyranaway.=Thatnaughtyboyranawaywithoutturningoffthewater.=Inordertoescapebeingscolded,thenaughtyboyranawaywithoutturningoffthewater.为了逃避挨骂,那个淘气的为了逃避挨骂,那个淘气的男孩男孩没关水龙头就没关水龙头就跑了跑了。第二步:找出修饰成分,第二步:找出修饰成分,添加修饰成分添加修饰成分7=That naughty boy ran away.=技技 巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇可以衡量英语水平词汇可以衡量英语水平丰富的句式可以使文章增丰富的句式可以使文章增色生辉色生辉 。恰当的连接词,恰当的连接词,使文章有使文章有“英语味英语味”,上下衔接自然。,上下衔接自然。如何写出精彩的高档句子如何写出精彩的高档句子突破书面表达的高分?突破书面表达的高分?2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式8 技 巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接1.短语优先:短语优先:我们想要和平。我们想要和平。她决定好好学习。她决定好好学习。We look forward to/call on peace.一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇Wewantpeace.Shedecidedtostudyhard.She was determined to devote herself to studying.91.短语优先:We look forward to/ca2.弃旧取新弃旧取新:There is a temple on top of the mountain.There is a clean river in the city一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇A clean river winds through the city.On top of the mountain stands a temple.102.弃旧取新:一、怎样使用较高级词汇A clean ri1.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.2.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.3.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.4.Whatwecandoistostudyhard.5.Theteachersuggestedthatweshouldpayattentiontogrammar.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇A good idea suddenly occurred to me.Youll have no trouble finding my house.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.What we can do is to devote ourselves to study.The teacher gave us a suggestion that we should attach great importance to grammar.111.Suddenly I thought of a goo1.感叹句感叹句How happy I was when I received your letter!2.倒装句倒装句 Not only can it help you to form the good habit of studying English but also it can improve your writing ability and skills.3.省略句省略句 While walking the dog,I witnessed a car accident.二二.如何使用较丰富的句式如何使用较丰富的句式 121.感叹句 二.如何使用较丰富的句式 14.it做形式主语或宾语做形式主语或宾语Itisofgreatbenefittokeepdiarieseveryday.5.定语从句定语从句Inmysparetime,IregularlytakepartintheEnglishcorner,whereIcanexpressmyselffreely.6.名词性从句名词性从句WhatisthemostimportantisthatIoftensurfonanEnglishwebsite-EnjoyReading.134.it做形式主语或宾语136.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomuch.(使用名词性从句)(使用名词性从句)7.Hedidntrealizethetruthuntilhecameback.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)8.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)9.Whenyourealizetheimportanceofforeignlanguages,youcanlearnthemwell.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)10.Helayonthegroundandhiseyeswerefixedontheceiling.(使用(使用with复合结构)复合结构)What surprises him is that the little girl knows so much.二、二、怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式 It was not until he came back that he realized the truth.She walked out of the lab,followed by many students.Only when you realize the importance of foreign languages can you learn them well.He lay on the ground with his eyes fixed on the ceiling.146.To his surprise,the little 11.His mother lost work and his father was put into prison.三、怎样巧妙使用关联词三、怎样巧妙使用关联词His mother lost work,and to make things worse,his father was put into prison.15 11.His mother lost work and 可以使文章衔接紧凑,有可以使文章衔接紧凑,有“英语味英语味”的一些关联词的一些关联词(1)表示对比的连接词表示对比的连接词:onthecontrary(2)表示时间的连接词表示时间的连接词:inthemeanwhile,afterwards,eventually,intheend,(3)表示顺序的连接词表示顺序的连接词:firstofall,tobeginwith,lastbutnottheleast(4)表示递进的连接词表示递进的连接词:whatismore,inaddition(5)表示原因的连接词表示原因的连接词:dueto,thanksto,owingto(6)用于总结的连接词用于总结的连接词:onthewhole,inaword,inbrief,(7)表达个人观点的短语表达个人观点的短语:AsfarasImconcerned,inonesopinion/view三、怎样巧妙使用关联词三、怎样巧妙使用关联词16 三、怎样巧妙使用关联词16可以使文章衔接紧凑,有可以使文章衔接紧凑,有“英语味英语味”的一些关联词的一些关联词(1)正相反正相反(2)在此期间在此期间(3)后来后来(4)起初,首先起初,首先(5)另外,还有另外,还有(6)因为,由于,多亏因为,由于,多亏(7)从整体上来说从整体上来说(8)以我之见以我之见onthecontraryinthemeanwhileafterwardsfirstofall,tobeginwithwhatismore,inadditiondueto,thanksto,owingtoonthewhole,AsfarasImconcerned,inonesopinion/view17可以使文章衔接紧凑,有“英语味”的一些关联词on the c
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