建议信-作文-课件

Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li HuaDearPeter,1How to write a letter for adviceHowtowritealetterforadvi2如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全卷整洁美观，书写端正全卷整洁美观，书写端正要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化3写作攻略写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写作攻略4常用常用句式句式A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter,I am sorry to know that 2I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter3.I am writing to you for the purpose of-4.You have asked me for my advice with onand Ill try to make some suggestions.5.I am writing to express my views concerning.常用句式A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)5B.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2.I would like to suggest/recommend that3.If I were you,I would4.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.5.I suggest that 6.You would better do/not do 7.You may consider doing first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile,whats moreB.表达建议（body）6C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouw7篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。篇章结构及内容：8Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主引出主题题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to .Then,it also helps to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .(此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建的句式提出建议议)As to ,I suggest (有有时时根根据据需需要要具具体体到到某某一一反反面面).In addition,(其其他他建建议议).Im sure (预预测测可可能能的的结结果果，给给对对方方以以行行动动的信心和决心的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDearBob,9Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion(以以我我拙拙见见),you would be wise to take the following actions:_.I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Dear_,10假假如如你你朋朋友友JimJim是是多多年年的的烟烟民民，现现身身体体不不适适，所所以以你你想想写写一一封封给给他他建建议议他他戒烟。戒烟。Task 1假如你朋友Jim是多年的烟民，现身体不适，所以你想写一封给他111.首段：写信的目的Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.1.首段：写信的目的Afterreadingyourl122.主体：关于如何戒烟的建议主题句+建议：意志；参与有益活动,远离烟友2.主体：关于如何戒烟的建议主题句132.关于如何戒烟的建议主题句：Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.Abouthowtostopsmoking,hereareafewsuggestions.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.2.关于如何戒烟的建议主题句：14Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.建议信-作文-课件153.结尾IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.3.结尾Ihopeyoullfindthese16DearJim，Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.DearJim，17Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.yourssincerely,XXX18假假如如你你是是营营养养师师Mr.Mr.LiLi,李李华华向向你你写写信信咨咨询询有有关如何保持健康的建议：关如何保持健康的建议：1.健康的重要性健康的重要性2.如何保持健康如何保持健康Task 2假如你是营养师Mr.Li,李华向你写信咨询有关如何保持健康19 Dear Li hua,How nice to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.I would like to give you some advice.As the proverb says,“No one knows the value of health until he loses it”.In other words,nothing is more important than health.Good health is beneficial to your work and study.But how to keep healthy?Here I want to give you some advice.First,you should have a regular life:go to bed and get up early.Second,keep a healthy and balanced diet:eat more vegetables and fruits and other food full of energy and fiber;eat as little sugar and oily food as possible.Dont eat food which has gone bad.Third,get rid of the bad habits such as smoking,drinking or staying up too late.Physical exercise can make your body strong,so we should exercise every day.In a word,health is more valuable than anything else.We should do everything we can to keep us healthy.yours,DearLihua,20Dear Li hua,How nice to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.I would like to give you some advice.As we all know,health is very important for everyone.Without health,its more difficult for us to enjoy a happy life.However,in our life,not everyone can have a healthy lifestyle.To be healthy,we should take proper exercise and have a balanced diet.Besides,having a scientific timetable is also very necessary.In addition,wed better develop some good habits in our daily life and keep away from alcohol and drugs.Whats more,as students,we should not be addicted to addictive computer games,which will distract us from study.In a word,its a good idea for us to keep fit.Only in this way can we live a positive life.yours,DearLihua,21 Dear Li hua,How nice to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.I would like to give you some advice.As we know,we teenagers grow very fast,so we need plenty of nutritious foods,such as fish fruit and vegetables.You should not eat too much meat or too many sweets.Also,you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time.For example,you can play basketball or swim after school.Whats more,having enough sleep is very important.So I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late Only in this way,can you keep fit.yours,DearLihua,22HomeworkHomework23 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学242.抽烟的危害主题句+危害1234.Asweallknow,smokingdoesgreatharmtohumanbeings.Firstly,smokingcausesmanyillnessessuchascough,heartdiseaseandthemostseriousillness-lungcancer.Meanwhilesmokingisawasteofmoney.Besides,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.2.抽烟的危害主题句+危害1234.25