中考英语作文高分技巧ppt课件

中考英语书面表达应对技巧中考英语书面表达应对技巧中考英语书面表达应对技巧中考英语书面表达应对技巧将过程变得美丽将过程变得美丽让结果更加辉煌让结果更加辉煌中考英语书面表达应对技巧中考英语书面表达应对技巧 初中生写作初中生写作“六大病症六大病症”：1)1)审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；2)2)单词拼写错误；单词拼写错误；frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet 3)3)动词缺失；动词缺失；Eg:I happy I can go to Peking.Eg:I happy I can go to Peking.初中生写作初中生写作“六大病症六大病症”：3)动词动词4 4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）Eg:All people have their own dream.Eg:All people have their own dream.He said he wants to have a good rest.He said he wants to have a good rest.5 5）中式英语（）中式英语（ChinglishChinglish）Eg:I very like sports.Eg:I very like sports.6)综合性错误。综合性错误。包括包括单词大小写单词大小写、标点符号标点符号以及以及形容词副词形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。等。中考英语作文评分标准中考英语作文评分标准满分档（满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（分）：长度符合要求（80-90字），书写规范，字），书写规范，涵盖所有要涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。第五档（第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。较丰富有少量语法错误。第四档（第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有涵盖要点（有2要点得给要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词汇分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。不够丰富，有一些语法错误。第三档第三档(6-8分分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整要点不完整（只有（只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。第二档（第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。猜测出作文意图。第一档（第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。（白卷（白卷0分）分）中考英语作文评分标准中考英语作文评分标准满分档（满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（分）：长度符合要求（80中考英语高分作文的特点1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。2、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。3、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。4、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。5、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。中考英语高分作文的特点中考英语高分作文的特点1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，二、中考英语高分作文的特点二、中考英语高分作文的特点6、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。8、要点齐全。9、首尾呼应，自然成一体。10、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。二、中考英语高分作文的特点二、中考英语高分作文的特点6、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有中考英语写作高分“秘笈”要点齐全过渡自然首尾相呼分段提行连词增色名句添光长短得当高分有望中考英语写作高分中考英语写作高分“秘笈秘笈”要点齐全要点齐全过渡自然过渡自然如何如何逐步培养和提逐步培养和提升升英语写作能力？英语写作能力？如何逐步培养和提升英语写作能力？如何逐步培养和提升英语写作能力？二二 写作能力的引导写作能力的引导 词汇短语词汇短语句子句子篇章篇章二二写作能力的引导词汇短语写作能力的引导词汇短语句子句子篇篇词汇是学生用英语表达思想词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时同时也是写作的基础和源泉。也是写作的基础和源泉。词汇短语词汇短语词汇是学生用英语表达思想词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时词汇短同时词汇短1.词汇的词汇的巧妙记忆巧妙记忆。（childrenren;belielieve)2.加强中考加强中考课标词汇、短语课标词汇、短语的听默写。的听默写。3.鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用“积积积积累累累累”本本本本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。词汇短语词汇短语“攻关秘笈攻关秘笈”1.词汇的巧妙记忆。词汇的巧妙记忆。（children;beli4.4.鼓励学生使用鼓励学生使用“高端高端”的词汇。的词汇。=endless/oceansofPlayingtoomuchcomputerisbadforourstudy.=getsinthewayof=haveabadinfluenceonEg:Iamveryinterestedinpopmusic.I have lots of homework to do every day.=show/takegreatinterestin=endless/oceansofPlayingtoo词不离句，词不离句，完整、准确、完整、准确、新颖、丰富新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好的句式表达是一篇好文章的必备条件。文章的必备条件。句子句子词不离句，完整、准确、词不离句，完整、准确、句子句子1.1.帮助学生掌握认清帮助学生掌握认清“五大五大”基本句式。基本句式。2.2.加强中考相关话题加强中考相关话题必备佳句必备佳句的的朗读朗读、听写听写、背背诵、仿写诵、仿写、句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累。3.3.让学生在让学生在“多样多样”的句式变换中不断积攒实战的句式变换中不断积攒实战经验。经验。有效的句式教学有效的句式教学有效的句式教学有效的句式教学3.“3.“多样多样”的句式变换的句式变换句子句子1）合并）合并为简单句；句；Eg:Mybrotherhelpedmeinmaths.Imadegreatprogress.Imadegreatprogressinmathswiththehelpofmybrother.2）学会使用感）学会使用感叹句；句；It is necessary to help others.How necessary it is to help others！3.“多样多样”的句式变换的句式变换句子句子1）合并为简单句；）合并为简单句；2）学会使）学会使3)善用复合句；善用复合句；a.We need to help people.The people are in trouble.We need to help the people who are in trouble.b.We know that more and more students like pop songs.As we all know,more and more students like pop songs.4）巧妙使用）巧妙使用强强调句；句；We can achieve our dreams by working hard.Onlybyworkinghard,canweachieveourdreams.3)善用复合句；善用复合句；4）巧妙使用强调句；）巧妙使用强调句；5)积累丰富的累丰富的谚语(一周两至三句）一周两至三句）英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强文章的说服力和感染力。文章的说服力和感染力。Asthesayinggoes,“.”1)锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.2)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateourmindonourstudies.其他谚语其他谚语:1.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.2.Practicemakesperfect.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.5.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.6.AllroadsleadtoRome.7.Everycoinhastwosides.5)积累丰富的谚语积累丰富的谚语(一周两至三句）一周两至三句）Asthesayi词不离句，句不离篇。词不离句，句不离篇。能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语法法,谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。篇章篇章词不离句，句不离篇。词不离句，句不离篇。篇章篇章如何运用已有的如何运用已有的“遣词造遣词造句句”能力在写作实践中学能力在写作实践中学会会“谋篇布局谋篇布局”“战无不胜战无不胜”呢？呢？如何运用已有的如何运用已有的“遣词造句遣词造句”能力在写作实践中学会能力在写作实践中学会“谋篇谋篇1）表并列补充并列补充关系的：Whatismore，Besides，2)表示转折关系的过渡词：but,yet,however3)表示时间关系的过渡词：first,second,third,andthen,finally,after,before,afterafewdays,atlast,atthattime,later,inthepast,immediately,inthemeanwhile,when,while,then,afterthat4)表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to),far(from),inthefrontof,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,totheright,totheleft,ononeside,ontheothersideof,outside1）表并列补充关系的：）表并列补充关系的：Whatismore，Besid5)表示比较关系的过渡词：表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway,justlike,justas6)表示对照关系的过渡词：表示对照关系的过渡词：but,still,yet,however,ontheotherhand,inspiteof,eventhough7)表示递进关系的过渡词：表示递进关系的过渡词：also,and,then,too,inaddition,moreover,again8)表示因果关系的过渡词：表示因果关系的过渡词：because,since,then,thus,so,therefore,asaresult9)表示解释说明的过渡词：表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample,infact,inthiscase,for,actuallyShecameinspiteofhercold.Forcealaughinspiteofpain.Wemetsomefriendsandotherpeopleinaddition.Icanhelpyou.Moreover,youshouldrelyonyourself.5)表示比较关系的过渡词：表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway,10)表示强调的过渡词：表示强调的过渡词：infact,indeed,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,mostimportant11)表示目的的过渡词：表示目的的过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderthat,soasto,inorderto,12)表示列举的过渡词：表示列举的过渡词：forexample,suchas13)表示总结性的过渡词：表示总结性的过渡词：inconclusion,finally,atlast,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,allinall,inaword,generallyspeakingHehashisfaults,but,allinall,heisagoodhelper.10)表示强调的过渡词：表示强调的过渡词：infact,indeed,英语写作中用好英语写作中用好“四心四心”1.精心精心审题，沉着写稿审题，沉着写稿2.耐心耐心修改，提炼句子修改，提炼句子3.细心细心检查检查,消灭错误消灭错误4.虚心虚心抄写，一丝不苟。抄写，一丝不苟。英语写作中用好英语写作中用好“四心四心”1.精心审题，沉着写稿精心审题，沉着写稿议论文写作技巧议论文写作技巧议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明自表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文有三要素有三要素,即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是:观点观点正确正确,认真概括认真概括,有实际意义有实际意义;论据的基本要求是论据的基本要求是:真实可靠真实可靠,充分典型充分典型;论证的基本要求是论证的基本要求是:推理必须符合逻辑。推理必须符合逻辑。英语议论文的结构一般较为固定英语议论文的结构一般较为固定,通常包括以下三部分通常包括以下三部分:1.在导语部分提出需要议论的议题在导语部分提出需要议论的议题;2.在正文部分对所提出的问题进行议论在正文部分对所提出的问题进行议论;3.在结论部分对以上的讨论进行总结和归纳。在结论部分对以上的讨论进行总结和归纳。议论文写作技巧议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论议论文写作技巧议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,letsseesomeexamplesShallwesendchildrentostudyabroad?Withmoreandmorepeoplebecomingrichinrecentyears,itisanewtendencyforthemtosendtheirchildrentostudyabroad.ButIdontthinkitisagoodidea.Firstofall,childrenaretooyoungtolookafterthemselves.Second,thelanguagebarrierisaseriousproblem.Manychildrenarenotproficientintheforeignlanguagebeforegoingabroad.Asaresult,theyhavedifficultyinunderstandingwhatthenativespeakersaretalkingabout.Third,theymaygetintotroublewhendealingwithvarioussituationsforlackofknowledgeofthecustomsinthestrangeland.Furthermore,thecostoflivingismuchhigherthanthatinourcountry,whichmightcauseaheavyburdentothefamily.Inconclusion,therearemoredisadvantagesinsendingchildrentostudyabroad.So,wedbetternotdoit.letsseesomeexamplesShLearnToRespectOurParentsNowadays,more and more families have only one child.As most of the students today are the only child in the family,they often regard themselves as the center of the family and become selfish,without caring too much about their parents.LearnToRespectOu So we should learn to respect our parents.Firstly,we are supposed to remember our parents birthday and express our best wishes to them.Secondly,we should say hello to our parents when we see them returning home.Thirdly,we are supposed to tell our parents where we go when we leave home.Soweshouldlearnto In a word,respecting parents is our Chinas traditional values.No matter how old we are,its necessary for us to respect our parents.Inaword,respectingOn the one hand,computer has many advantages.It can help people finish work quickly.And it also can help people to do more and more work.Its not noly a good way for students to receive education but also its very convenient for people to communicate with others by using computers.Ontheonehand,computOn the other hand,it has some disadvantages.Computer can work out difficult math problems that students cant.But it may make them be lacking in thinking.And if you often work with computer,maybe you will get sick.Some people surf the Internet all day,they waste much time and have no time to care for the real people.Ontheotherhand,itSo we should have a right way to deal with the greatest invention computer.Soweshouldhavear常见例文常见例文My Favorite Places Many people have favorite places they like to go to when they are feeling sad or bored.I also have favorite places that I go to as often as I can.Here are the three places that I like most.First of all,I like the zoo.The animals are amazing because some are so cute and some are so ugly!I like to pet(宠宠)them,feed them and watch them perform.Museums are cool places,too.They have good exhibits(陈陈列品列品)and fascinating displays(吸引人的展品吸引人的展品).I like the works of art(艺术品艺术品)there.Some museums teach me a lot about history and science.From dinosaurs to robots,I love them all.Finally,theme parks are my favourite place.I think the roller coasters are the best.Its fun to scream and getscared.These places always cheer me up(快活）快活）.I try to go to each of my favorite places once a year.I am going to find more favorite places to go to when I grow up.MyFavoritePlacesMany作文走向预测及参考范文1.1.最近，老师布置了一道作业，就最近，老师布置了一道作业，就“Can parents be friends?”Can parents be friends?”这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查的结果：这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查的结果：45%45%的同学可能父母的同学可能父母太忙，没有时间关心他们。太忙，没有时间关心他们。55%55%的同学可能在家里，父母常常和他们谈心，像的同学可能在家里，父母常常和他们谈心，像朋友一样。你的观点朋友一样。你的观点?请根据以上调查数据，写一份请根据以上调查数据，写一份8080词左右的调查报告。报告的开头已给出。词左右的调查报告。报告的开头已给出。I recently surveyed(调查调查)my classmates about their views(观点观点)on whether parents can be friends.According to the survey,45%of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as theyre always too busy to show their concern.On the other hand,55%of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends at home.In my opinion,its just natural for parents and children to be friends so long as they trust each other,the parents often talk with their children and know how to share.作文走向预测及参考范文作文走向预测及参考范文1.最近，老师布置了一道最近，老师布置了一道2.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的明，你们学校的“EnglishGarden”正在举办主题为正在举办主题为“付付出即是收获出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.80100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。总词数。Giving is Receiving My name is Li Ming.I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help clean up my house.I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month.I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up.I read stories and sing songs for them.I also help people in trouble.I think giving is receiving.Helping others is helping ourselves.Do you agree with me?2.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明3.假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助有困难向谁求助”（Whomdoyouturntowhenintrouble?）的调查活动，调查结果如下。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。）的调查活动，调查结果如下。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。求助对象：同学、朋友，求助对象：同学、朋友，58%，年龄相仿，容易理解交流。老师家长，年龄相仿，容易理解交流。老师家长，30%，有爱心、，有爱心、有经验、可以有经验、可以信任。无，信任。无，12%，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。注意：注意：1内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。贯，可适当增加内容。2词数：词数：90词左右。词左右。Dear editor,Im a student.We have made a survey“Who do you turn to when in trouble?”Here are the results.Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as theyre almost of the same age,so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily.Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much.They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves.They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others.They have few friends.In my opinion,when in trouble wed better ask our teachers,parent,friends or classmates for help.YoursLiHua3.假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助有困难向谁求助”（4、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割的一部分，尽早解决台湾问题，实现祖国的完全统一，是中华儿女的共同期盼。假定你们正举行“我心中的台湾”主题班会，请你根据提示写篇短文。1：台湾是中国的一部分2：我所知道的台湾（地理位置、人口或其他资讯）3：台湾与祖国大陆的民间交往（走亲访友、商业往来、兴办工厂等）4：愿望。词语准备：TaiwanIsland,Taiwanese,themainland,manykindsof,beautiful,relative,shop,factory,lie.Visit,build,run.There is but one China and Taiwan is part of China.Taiwan,the biggest island,lies to the southeast of Fujian Province.The weather there is warm and wet.So many plants grow very well.The fruit there are really delicious,like bananas,oranges and so on.It has a popolation of 23.000.000.Taiwan produces many kinds of products,especially seafood.It is a very beautiful island.Riyuetan Pool AND Mount Ali are very famous places of interest,Now many Taiwanese come to the mainland,they visit their relatives and friends,and some of them build factores and run shops,I love Taiwan very much and I hope I can visit Taiwan some day.China is getting stronger and stronger.All the people hope Taiwan can come back quickly.Im sure Taiwan will come back in the future.4、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割的一部分，尽早解决台湾问题、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割的一部分，尽早解决台湾问题5.阳光运动工程阳光运动工程(Sunshinesportsprogram)DearJane,Thankyouforyourlastletteraskingaboutoursunshinesportsprogram.NowItellyousomesportsinourschool.Manystudentsdoingsportsonehoureveryday.Differentstudentshavedifferentinterests.Someboyslikeplayingfootball,becausetheyloveit.Mostgirlslikeshopping,becausetheythinkitrelaxing.ButmostboyslikeplayingChineseKongfu,becausetheybelieveitcanhelptheykeephealthy.Andsomegirlslikedancing,becausetheywanttokeepfit.Ithinkthesunshinesportsprogramisveryimportantforus.Becausethestudyofstudentsveryhard.Sportscanalsoletbrainshaveagoodrestsothatourstudywillbemoreeffective.Anditcanhelpyourelax.5.阳光运动工程阳光运动工程(Sunshinesportsprogr7.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以LessPressure,BetterLife为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括：同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；我的压力是什么；我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。参考范文:LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintodaysworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscantgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.Imalwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsoftrainingclassesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.Thatsall.Thankyou!7.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为为 Less Pressure,Better LifeHello,boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students cant get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.Im always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.Thats all.Thank you!LessPres8.幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是请以请以Myhappiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确,字迹工整，字迹工整，8090词。词。Happinessisimportantinourlife.Infact,happinessisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Iwillneverforgetonething.Once,Ihadabadmarkatamathtest.Iwasshyandafraidtomeetmyparents.ButwhenIgotbackhomelate,myparentsknewwhathappened,theysaidtome:“Itdoesntmatter,mychild.Rememberwellbealwaysbesideyouwhenyouneedhelp.Webelieveyoucanbebetternexttime.Nevergiveup!”Iwasmovedandmadeupmymindtoworkharderandharder.Ifeelhappy.WheneverIamintrouble,Icanfeelmyparentslove.Iwanttobeagoodchildformyparents.8.幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸