高三英语作文公开课

英语书面表达英语书面表达English Composition WritingEnglish Composition Writing一.Writing skills How to improving you writing年份命题方式体裁题材主题2006图画应用文书信介绍你校图书馆2007文字材料应用文书信描述你理想中的笔友的条件2008文字材料应用文书信给动物园工作人员写信关于大熊猫琳琳2009文字材料应用文留言条给房东留言2010文字材料应用文书信通知Smith女士来做英语比赛评委2011文字材料应用文书信给Learning Center 写信寻求帮助 高考作文回放主要特点记叙记叙为主为主稍加稍加议论议论旁带旁带说明说明What makes a good essay?A topic paragraphSome supporting paragraphsA concluding paragraph正确使用有关连接词顺序：顺序：first then later in the end eventually since then to start with转折：转折：but yet however while nevertheless on the contrary递进：递进：whats more in addition furthermore因果：因果：because as since as a result owing to thanks to让步：让步：though even if even though as in spite of despite条件：条件：if unless on condition that as long as suppose 列举：列举：for example such as as follows take for example总结：总结：in short in conclusion in a word in brief on the whole用适当的连接词填空1.He was tired,he went to bed.2.He made a promise,he didnt keep it3.I agree to the plan.the building of the factory will provide people with different jobs,it can save a lot of money,it wont do much harm to the environmentsobutTo begin withSecondlyFinally一个好的段落要有丰富的句式1.感叹句感叹句2.倒装句倒装句3.强调句强调句4.省略句省略句5.With 结构结构6.定语从句定语从句7.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句8.各种状语从句各种状语从句利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采1.感叹句感叹句 e.g.How disappointed he was!2.强调句强调句 e.g.It was the young boy that helped the old man.3.倒装句倒装句 e.g.Only in this way can we solve the problem.4.省略句省略句 e.g.Come to me if necessary5.定语从句定语从句 e.g.The book which was borrowed from the library has been returned.6.名词性从句名词性从句 e.g.Thats what I should do.Practice 怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性使用名词性从句）从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)3.If you work hard,you will make rapid progress.(祈使句祈使句+and）4.I wont believe what he says.(no matter what状语从句）状语从句）5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用使用V-ing形式）形式）6.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.Work hard and you will make a rapid progress.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Singing and laughing,they went back to schoolWe all think highly of him书面表达例1 Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village!This village is very small.It has nearly100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since1978.People here are richer than beforeNow it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 stories.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village!This village Is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has beendeveloping very fast.People herelive a much better life than before.Now It is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was verysmall and most children couldntafford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has4 stories is the most beautiful one inThe village.All the school-age children study here.whats more,they enjoy free education.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.从什么方面来从什么方面来评价作文价作文structureIs the essay divided into parts?Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point?languageDoes the writer use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary?Are there any good sentence patterns?二.书面表达六步法审 抓扩 连改抄书面表达六步法一.审题认真读题然后找出基本要素5W1H 何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事书面表达六步法二.抓要点 确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态，语态及搭配的副词，介词等。What happened?书面表达六步法三.扩展成句 形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词.Who did what?书面表达六步法 四.连句成文 词与词搭配 句与句相连 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五.查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六六.誊写誊写卷面整洁不一定加分卷面整洁不一定加分,卷面潦草一定要扣分卷面潦草一定要扣分!书 信方法指导目前，随着对英语学习的实用性，生活性要求的加强，书信已经成了一目前，随着对英语学习的实用性，生活性要求的加强，书信已经成了一个热门题材的考查形式，常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现，话题内容也个热门题材的考查形式，常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现，话题内容也紧紧围绕学生的生活实际，此类考查形式绝不是简单的对要点逐条翻译紧紧围绕学生的生活实际，此类考查形式绝不是简单的对要点逐条翻译而是将所给的几个要点科学合理的组织成通顺的语句，形成亮点鲜明的而是将所给的几个要点科学合理的组织成通顺的语句，形成亮点鲜明的高分作文。高分作文。常见的写作格式如下：第一段，文章开头：称呼（通常已给出）。第二常见的写作格式如下：第一段，文章开头：称呼（通常已给出）。第二段，寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：寒暄句段，寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：寒暄句+主题句。第三段，根据提纲主题句。第三段，根据提纲扩展主题段落扩展主题段落:主题句主题句+扩展句扩展句1+扩展句扩展句2+扩展句扩展句3.第四段，表明自己的第四段，表明自己的观点，并结束书信主题段落：在最后要他谈自己的看法。第五段，寒暄观点，并结束书信主题段落：在最后要他谈自己的看法。第五段，寒暄句句+落款。落款。练习热点命题作文假如你是李华，你的英国朋友来信向你咨询如何才假如你是李华，你的英国朋友来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你根据下列要点写回信。能学好中文，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：1.参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊，电视；看中文书刊，电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。TopicDear ,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ./Im gladto write the letter to you on .Here are a few suggestions for yourreference.First,it is important to .As you will ,Then,it also helps if you .Besides,it should be a good idea to .Because .You can also .Im sure that .Please next time/in the future.Sincerely yours,Signature结结 论论审题，抓点审题，抓点造句，成文造句，成文改错，誊写改错，誊写背诵精彩范文背诵精彩范文