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专题检测卷(三十五) 短文改错(建议用时: 40分钟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。1(2013宝鸡模拟)Dear Worried, I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestion. First of all, dont be disappointing. Many students find difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you can do the following thing: First, doing some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to making some sentences with them. Second, read so much as possible. There are many things that cant be learnt at a time. You must see them in books for many times. Then youll be able to use them correct. So, in order to write good, you must learn to read much. Finally, youd better recite some good passages. Good luck to you in your writing. Yours, Li Hua2(2013兰州模拟)Canada is second largest country with the largest number of lakes in the world. It has a population of about 35 millions and the majority of people lives in the central part of the country. Canada is high developed in economy. Fishing and forestry are of great important in the eastern part. In case of falling ill, people usually go to a clinic instead of a hospital, so its very expensive to seeing a doctor there. Therefore almost everyone buys healthy insurance. Right now most of international students chose to study in the east, which the tuition is relatively low. 3(2013大连模拟)Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in a water hole about five meter outside a bar. Allen stopped curiously. All people passing over the man who was fishing regarded him like a foolish man. Therefore, Allen said kindly to fish-catcher, “Hello, will you please do me a favor and have a drink with me in the bar? ”The man gladly received his invitation. After buying the man several cups of soft drinks, Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I know how much fish you have caught this morning? ”“You are the number 8, ”said the man humorous. 4(2013哈尔滨模拟)Dear British friends, Welcome to Beijing. Im very pleased to tell you some arrangements during your stay in Beijing. Our headmaster Mr. Smith were to meet you on Monday morning and she will say something about our school. You will be shown off the lab building and the library in the afternoon. On Tuesday the students of both countries are to visit the Great Wall, about that Mr. Zhang will tell some extreme interesting stories. In the evening we are going to have a party in Room 402. The Chinese and the English students will give nice performance at the party, show their cultures respectively. At 9: 45 a. m. on Wednesday youll leave Xian by the train. I hope you would have a good time here. Thank you. 答案解析1. 答案：Dear Worried，I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestion. First of suggestionsall, dont be disappointing. Many students find difficult to write well. In my disappointed itopinion, if you want to improve your writing，you can do the following thing: First，thingsdoing some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them anddothen try to making some sentences with them. Second, read so much as possible. make asThere are many things that cant be learnt at a time. You must see them in books for many times. Then youll be able to use them correct. So, in order to write good，correctly wellyou must learn to read much. Finally，youd better recite some good passages. Good luck to you in your writing. Yours, Li Hua1. 【解析】将第一句中的suggestion改为suggestions。前面有some。2. 【解析】将第二句中的disappointing改为disappointed。主语是人，指不要灰心。3. 【解析】在第三句中的find后面加it。it作形式宾语，不定式是真正宾语。4. 【解析】将第四句中的thing改为things。下面提到几件事情。5. 【解析】将第五句中的doing改为do。构成祈使句。6. 【解析】将第六句中的 making改为make。try to do sth. 尽力做某事。7. 【解析】将第七句中的 so改为as。as. . . as possible固定词组。8. 【解析】将第九句中的for去掉。many times直接作状语。9. 【解析】将第十句中的correct改为correctly。修饰动词use用副词。10. 【解析】将第十一句中的good改为well。修饰动词write用副词。2. 答案：Canada is second largest country with the largest number of lakes in thetheworld. It has a population of about 35 millions and the majority of people livesmillion livein the central part of the countryCanada is high developed in economy. Fishing highlyand forestry are of great important in the eastern part. In case of falling ill, peopleimportanceusually go to a clinic instead of a hospital, so its very expensive to seeing a doctor because seethere. Therefore almost everyone buys healthy insurance. Right now most of healthinternational students chose to study in the east, which the tuition is relatively low. where1. 【解析】在第一句中的second前面加the。序数词前面用冠词。2. 【解析】将第二句中的millions改为million。前面有具体数词，不用复数。3. 【解析】将第二句中的lives改为live。the majority of+复数名词，谓语用复数。4. 【解析】将第三句中的high改为highly。修饰形容词developed，用副词。5. 【解析】将第四句中的important改为importance。be of+抽象名词。6. 【解析】将第五句中的so改为because。这里是原因状语从句。7. 【解析】将第五句中的seeing改为see。it is+adj. +to do sth. 。8. 【解析】将第六句中的healthy改为health。名词作定语。9. 【解析】将第七句中的of去掉。most直接修饰名词，作定语。10. 【解析】将第七句中的which改为where。前面是地点名词，从句中缺少地点状语，故用where引导定语从句。3. 答案：Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in a water hole about fivefishingmeter outside a bar. Allen stopped curiously. All people passing over或over themeters byman who was fishing regarded him like a foolish man. Therefore, Allen said kindly as Howeverto fish-catcher, “Hello, will you please do me a favor and have a drink with methein the bar? ”The man gladly received his invitation. After buying the man several acceptedcups of soft drinks, Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I know how weremuch fish you have caught this morning? ”“You are the number 8, ” said the manmanyhumoroushumorously1. 【解析】将第一句中的fished改为fishing。see+宾语+doing，表示看见正在做。2. 【解析】将第一句中的 meter改为meters。前面有five。3. 【解析】将第三句中的over改为by或者去掉。从旁边经过。4. 【解析】将第三句中的like改为as。regard. . . as认为是。5. 【解析】将第四句中的Therefore改为However。这里表示然而的意思。6. 【解析】在第四句中的fish-catcher前面加the。特指那个人。7. 【解析】将第五句中的received改为accepted。表示主观上的接受用accept。8. 【解析】将第六句中的 are改为were。指刚才的事情。9. 【解析】将第七句中的much改为many。fish当几条鱼讲时是可数名词。10. 【解析】将第八句中的humorous改为humorously。修饰动词said用副词。4. 答案：Dear British friends, Welcome to Beijing. Im very pleased to tell you some arrangements during your stay in Beijing. Our headmaster Mr. Smith were to meet you on Monday morning and she willis hesay something about our school. You will be shown off the lab building and thearound/over/roundlibrary in the afternoon. On Tuesday the students of both countries are to visit theGreat Wall, about that Mr. Zhang will tell some extreme interesting stories. In thewhich extremelyevening we are going to have a party in Room 402. The Chinese and the Englishstudents will give nice performance at the party, show their cultures respectively.performances showingAt 9: 45 a. m. on Wednesday youll leave Xian by the train. forI hope you would have a good time here. Thank you. will1. 【解析】将第三句中的were改为is。主语是Mr. Smith，单数，并且本文基本时态是一般现在时。2. 【解析】将第三句中的she改为he。指代前面的Mr. Smith。3. 【解析】将第四句中的off改为around/over/round。show. . . around/over/round带领某人参观。4. 【解析】将第五句中的that改为which。此处介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。5. 【解析】将第五句中的extreme改为extremely。修饰形容词interesting用副词。6. 【解析】将第七句中的performance改为performances。前面主语是复数，指学生们的表演。7. 【解析】将第七句中的show改为showing。v. -ing形式作伴随状语。8. 【解析】在第八句中的leave后面加for。leave for动身去。9. 【解析】将第八句中的the去掉。by train乘火车。10. 【解析】将第九句中的would改为will。一般将来时。
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