2021中考英语作文评分标准

2021中考英语作文评分标准英语作文评分标准评分原则：1. 总分15分，按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档（7-9分）。2. 评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.总词数不足的，可在本题总得分中扣去1分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1分），内容9分（其中要点5分，语意连贯4分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（4分），词数（1分）。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。【各档次的给分范围和要求】第一档（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标点错误。第二档（10-12分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。第三档（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。第四档（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。第五档（0-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。【说明】1、要点可用不同方式表达。2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。凡不写任何内容，抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。2021河南中考英语作文预测（一）1每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次蜕变。内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么？3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。Iusedtobeanaughtyboyandmymotherusedtobeangrywithme.NowIdliketosayIvechangedalot.Infact,Itisbecauseofmymothersdiaries.OnedayIsawmymothersdiarybookbyaccidentwhileIwaslookingformynotebook.Iwassurprisedandbegantoreadmymothersdiaries.Inherdiaries,she1showedherdeeploveforme.ShealsoexpressedherdisappointmentwhenImademistakes.ShesaidshelovedmesomuchandshebelievedIcouldbeagoodboy.Icouldnthelpcryingafterreadingmymothersdiaries.Sincethatday,Ihavechangedalot.Iworkhardandsharesomehousework.Illtrytounderstandmymothersfeelings.2.最近，你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了自己的看法，他们认为：1.认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康，是幸福2.有时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福。3.你同意同学们的看法，你认为当你做你也会感到幸福。要求：第三要点的内容需用三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Happinessisforeveryone.Somestudentsthinkhappinesscomesfromstudyinghardattheirlessons.Theirparentsarealwaystakinggoodcareoftheirlifeandtheirhealth.Theyfeelhappy.Somestudentssaywhentheydosomethingwrong,peoplearoundthemwillhelpthemtocorrectit.Theybelievethisishappiness.Iagreewiththem.IlovemyfriendscongratulatingmewhenIenjoysuccess.WhenIdosomethingkindtoothers,likecongratulatingthem,Ifeelhappy,too.Whenwethinkofthesethings,werealizethathappinessisallaroundus.3. “安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以“Keepingsafe(athome/atschool/ontheroad)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容包括：(1)Isitimportanttokeepsafe.?(2)Whydoyouthinkso?,(3)Howcanyoubesafe.?KeepingsafeatschoolItsimportantforustokeepsafeatschoolanditwillmakeusstudybetterandlivemorehappily.Inordertokeepsafeatschool,wemustdolikethese.First,beinorderwhenwearegoingupstairsordownstairs.Second,makesuretobesafewhenwearedoingsports.Trynottobehurt.Third,knowaboutsomeknowledgeofsafety.Itshelpfultous.Ifwefollowtheadvice,wellmakeourselvessafeatschool.4. 醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。现许多人不遵守交通规则，仍酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责任象后因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和很多家庭带来伤害果建为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁更多严格的规则议和制度出台提示词：酒后驾车drunkdriving不负责的irresponsible交通事故trafficaccident对造成伤害doharmtoEveryoneshouldobeythetrafficrules.Yettherearestillmanypeopledrunkdriving.Itsirresponsible（不负责任的）notonlytothedriversthemselvesbutalsotheothers.Manydriversdriveveryfastinthestreet,oreveninthecrowdedtrafficwhiletheyaredrunk.Drunkdriverscausedalotofaccidents.Thousandsofpeoplewerekilledandmanymorewereinjuredeveryyear.Inordertokeepthepublicsafe,weshouldntdrunkdrive.Wemustobeythetrafficrules.Ifyoudrinktoomuch,youshouldntdrivebyyourself.Youdbettertakeataxioraskothersforhelp.Thegovernmentissupposedtomakemoreseriousrulesandlawsassoonaspossible.5.KeepHealthyEveryonewantstokeephealthytoday,especiallyourstudents.Butwedontpayattentiontoourhealth.Someofthemgotoschoolwithoutbreakfastinthemorning.SomestudentsandpupilsplaycomputergamesorwatchTVallday,especiallyatweekends.Manyboysthinkitiscooltodrinkorsmoke.Itisimportantforustohavegoodhabits.Weshouldeatbreakfasteverymorning.WecanwatchTVorplaygamesforashorttime,thenhavearest.Wealsocantakepartinsomeclubs.Ithinkitisnecessaryforustokeephealthy.6. 以“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool（我想为学校做一件事）为题写篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdontthinkso.Ourteachersaid,doneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatestopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?7. 全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.对调查结果进行描述；2表明自己的看法并提出建议；3词数在80左右。提示词：doasurveyabout（做一个有关的调查）3%ofthestudents（百分之三的学生）Asurveyaboutsmokersinamiddleschooltellsthatalthough90%ofallstudentsneversmoke,3%ofthemoftensmokeand7%sometimesdo.Inotherwords,10%ofthestudentssmoke.Thatsterrible.Asweknow,smokingisharmfultoourhealth.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplelosetheirlivesbecauseofit.Smokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsowastesmoney.Because,afiremaybecausedbycigaretteends.Itsapitytolearnthatoneendsindeathbysmoking.Inshort,smokingissodangerousthatweshouldkeepawayfromit.8. 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要3跟老师学比自己学好可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西容易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息请您根据以上提示，以IsaTrainingClassofFamilyTeacherNecessary?为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。参考词汇：巩固strengthen；IsaTrainingClassorFamilyTeacherNecessary?Moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregoingtoallkindsoftrainingclassesorhavingfamilyteachersattheweekend.Therearetwodifferentviewpointsaboutit.【参考范文】IsaTrainingClassorFamilyTeacherNecessary?Moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregoingtoallkindsoftrainingclassesorhavingfamilyteachersatweekend.Therearetwodifferentviewpointsaboutit.Somethinksitnecessary.Firstly,itsmoreeffectivetostudywithateacherthanbythemselves.Secondly,itcanstrengthenwhatwelearntinclass.Besides,theycanlearnalotmore.Othersthinkitunnecessary.Foronething,studentscaneasilyformthehabitofdependence.Foranother,studentsneedtimetorelaxfromtimetotime.Inmyopinion,whetheratrainingclassorfamilyteacherisneededjustdepends.Ifyouarereallyveryweakatorinterestedinacertainsubject,maybeitsOKforyou.Butbesuretochooseagoodandsuitableclassorteacher,otherwiseitwouldbeawasteoftimeandmoney.9. 最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论。有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。观点原因同意不完全同意1教会如何生活过分溺爱2指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观3教会富有爱心希望值过高要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；2、词数110左右；3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。【参考范文】Recently,wehavehadadiscussioninourclassaboutwhetherparentsareourbestteachers.Somestudentsagreetothepointbecausetheythinkparentshelptopointouttheirmistakesintheirlives.Theyteachthemalotabouthowtoliveameaningfullife.Whatsmore,parentslovehelpstoteachthemhowtoloveothers.Soparentsare4theirmostimportantteachers.However,notallofusholdthesameviews.Somethinkthattheirparentsgivethemtoomuchlove,andtheyaretooeagertopassontheirvaluesandintereststothem.Moreover,theirparentssometimesexpecttoomuchofthem,whichmakesthemfeeltheirgoalstoodifficulttoreach.Inmyopinion,parentsareourimportantteachers.Butparentsshouldalsotrytounderstandtheirchildrenmoreandlimitthegenerationgap.10. 新农村-ANewVillageYesterdaywewenttovisitavillage.Onourwaytothevillage,weweregladtoseealotofnicerice,vegetablesandfruitinthefields.Alsowesawnewschools,factoriesandbuildings.Wegotawarmwelcomeatthevillage.Somefarmersinvitedustotheirhouses.Theyhadmovedtothenewbuildings.Theirlivingroomwaslargeandbright.Inittherewereallkindsofnewfurniture.NearlyeveryfamilyhadcolorTVsets,fridges,washingmachinesandsomeofthemevenhaveboughtmotorbikes.Everyonehadasmileontheirfaces.Itwassaidthatsomeguestsfromaforeigncountrywouldcometovisitit.7/8Wewereverygladtofindthefarmerslifehadchangedalot.Wehopetheirlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.11. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；我的压力是什么；我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80100；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintodaysworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Thatsall.Thankyou!参考范文:LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintodaysworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscantgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.Imalwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsoftrainingclassesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.Thatsall.Thankyou!12. 你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点?围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。58/8