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会计学1CET作文讲解包括要求趋势评分作文讲解包括要求趋势评分(png fn)样板顺序高分词汇句型样板顺序高分词汇句型第一页,共108页。第2页/共108页第1页/共108页第二页,共108页。第3页/共108页第2页/共108页第三页,共108页。第4页/共108页第3页/共108页第四页,共108页。第5页/共108页第4页/共108页第五页,共108页。第6页/共108页第5页/共108页第六页,共108页。作文)作文)第7页/共108页第6页/共108页第七页,共108页。Women in the Modern World Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In today,many women have a work.They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories.There are many women in govener also.They lead other people comtral,and make out plans.There are many women scientist also.They event new things to improve our life.With the changes in their social role,womens position in the family has been improved as well.In ancient,womens position in family is pity.They had to looks after their children,did every how husband ordered her to do.But now it is changed.They are equal to her husband.They have the right of speaking of idea,discussion things with her husband,do what she wants to do.In spite of these changes,the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.We also should realize,womens likerty are limited.For example,many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men.Everyone should do their best to change this condition.Im sure,the liberation of women would be increased.第8页/共108页第7页/共108页第八页,共108页。评分(png fn)样卷(1)5 5分分基本切题,表达基本切题,表达(biod)不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多严不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多严重错误。重错误。第9页/共108页第8页/共108页第九页,共108页。Women are playing an increasing important part in society today.More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children.Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field.As we know,many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as Chinese Womens Volleyball Team.With the changes in their social role,womans position in the family has been improved as well.Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places.Husbands and wife are equal now.They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.In spite of these changes,the liberation of women has not been completely realized.Also in some places,women are considered being“things”belong to men.They have little chance to find jobs.They dont get equal pay for equal job.This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.Women in the Modern World第10页/共108页第9页/共108页第十页,共108页。评分(png fn)样卷(2)11 11分分切题,思想表达清楚,连贯切题,思想表达清楚,连贯(lingun)。有个别句子结。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误第11页/共108页第10页/共108页第十一页,共108页。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before.For example,some women are not secretary in the office,instead,they become manager of a company.With the changes in their social role,womans position in the family has been improved as well.In the world today,more and more women have their own jobs.They get their own salary,and become more independent from their husband.With the economic situation improved,their family position is improving.In spite of these changes,the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home,and do some works or do some shopping.They only want their wife to be a housewife,but not a manager of a company.Women in the Modern World第12页/共108页第11页/共108页第十二页,共108页。评分(png fn)样卷(3)8 8分分基本切题基本切题(qit),思想表达尚清楚,基本连贯,有个别严重的语,思想表达尚清楚,基本连贯,有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当,但可以理解。言错误及用词不当,但可以理解。第13页/共108页第12页/共108页第十三页,共108页。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In many countries,more and more women are acting as workers,farmers,scientists and even leaders.We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role,womens position in the family has been improved as well.Husband and wife are now equal in the family.They cope with problems of daily life together,and share happiness with each other.Also,you can hardly find out that in todays families,women are being busy with dinners,whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs,reading newspapers.In spite of these changes,the liberation of woman has not been completely realized.We also should realize that womens liberty is limited.For example,many factories want men as their employees and the chance of women is slimer than men.Everyone should do their best to change this condition.Im sure the liberation of women would be reached.Women in the Modern World第14页/共108页第13页/共108页第十四页,共108页。评分(png fn)样卷(4)14 14分分切题,文章通顺,语言规范。句法有一定变化,用词适当。有个切题,文章通顺,语言规范。句法有一定变化,用词适当。有个别小错,但不影响别小错,但不影响(yngxing)理解。理解。第15页/共108页第14页/共108页第十五页,共108页。第16页/共108页第15页/共108页第十六页,共108页。第17页/共108页第16页/共108页第十七页,共108页。第18页/共108页第17页/共108页第十八页,共108页。第19页/共108页第18页/共108页第十九页,共108页。第20页/共108页第19页/共108页第二十页,共108页。第21页/共108页第20页/共108页第二十一页,共108页。第22页/共108页第21页/共108页第二十二页,共108页。第23页/共108页第22页/共108页第二十三页,共108页。第24页/共108页第23页/共108页第二十四页,共108页。第25页/共108页第24页/共108页第二十五页,共108页。第26页/共108页第25页/共108页第二十六页,共108页。第27页/共108页第26页/共108页第二十七页,共108页。第28页/共108页第27页/共108页第二十八页,共108页。第29页/共108页第28页/共108页第二十九页,共108页。第30页/共108页第29页/共108页第三十页,共108页。第31页/共108页第30页/共108页第三十一页,共108页。第32页/共108页第31页/共108页第三十二页,共108页。第33页/共108页第32页/共108页第三十三页,共108页。第34页/共108页第33页/共108页第三十四页,共108页。decreased by nearly 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