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Should mums work outside?对比型观点文章一 问题导入提笔三问：_注意点：_二 错因导思1.审题不清：最后一点应写你对话题的看法_2.时态错误：客观描述各种观点应用_！3.文章条理性：_4.个人观点太冗长5.表达错误(1)Our class have held a discussion about _(2)against 词性_, 组成句子要_(3)because 引导的是_,不能单独构成一句改错: If mums work outside, there will be no one cooks the meals.35% students against the opinion.三 交流学习Discuss with your partners and rewrite the structure of this article on your notebook.四 变式导练According to the given information, write the structure of this article.最近，你班就 “课间是否要播放音乐” 展开讨论. 请根据下表信息写一篇短文,陈述讨论结果及你个人看法,建议.大多数同学认为部分同学认为个人看法能活跃气氛,使大脑得到放松,减轻学习的疲劳,使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备,能给大家带来快乐.课间时间太短,播放音乐达不到预期效果,课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音.参考范文：Recently we have had a discussion about whether mums should work outside. The opinions were divided among us./ Different students have different opinions. The result is as follows.65% of the students think mums should work outside. Here are the reasons. First, mums have the right to work outside. Second, they not only bring in more money, but also feel proud of their success in work. Third, they are good for society.However, 35% of the students hold a different view. They think that mums shouldnt work outside because there will be no one around to do housework, such as cooking the meals and cleaning the house. Whats more, it is too expensive to get someone else to do the housework.As far as Im concerned, we should respect mums choices. Whether they want to work outside or not, we are supposed to support them.最后一段还可以写出你的明确观点，如：From my point of view, mums can work outside. Mums are able to do what they want. They can do housework in their free time. Also, we can help mums to do the housework, which will help us to improve our ability.对比型观点作文框架 例1Para.1 Recently we have had a heated discussion about whether mums should work outside. Different people hold different opinions. The results are as follows. 或 The result is as follows.（结果如下）Para.2 65% of our class hold the opinion that mums should work outside. Firstly, Secondly, finally, Para.3 However, 35% of us have a different opinion. They think mums shouldnt work outside. First, Besides, In addition, Whats more, Para.4 In my opinion, = In my view, = As far as I am concerned, = From my point of view,例2Para.1 Recently we have had a heated discussion about whether music should be played during thebreak. Different people hold different opinions. The results are as follows.Para.2 Most of the students hold the opinion that music should be played during the break. Firstly, Secondly, finally, Para.3 However, some students have a different opinion. They think music shouldnt be played during the break. First, Besides, In addition, Whats more, Para.4 In my opinion, = In my view, = As far as I am concerned, = From my point of view,
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