2014年高考英语书面表达评分标准.doc

浙江高考英语书面表达评分标准高考英语书面表达评分标准一、评分原则1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于110和多于130的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖所有内容要点。-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）（19-24分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（适当）：（13-18）基本完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（712分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。-语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（1-6分）未完成试题规定的任务。-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。Wring skills: 非常“6+1”完整性：要点全-即内容完整充实，观点明确。层次性：根据内容给文章适度分层，使文章错落有致。连贯性：就是指通过连接词，包括并列连词，从属连词、连接性副词以及非谓语动词短语等语法成分使段与段之间，句与句之间要连贯，以便使文章有很强的节奏感！常用的并列连词：and, or, but, while(而），for ,and so on.常见的从属连词有after, as, when, while, as long as, as soon as ,and so on常见的连接性副词及副词短语有：列举事物的：first, second, third/firstly, secondly, thirdly/also, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, whats more, whats worse，moreover, and so on .下结论的副词及副词短语： in brief, in a word，in a nutshell, all in all, in conclusion ，to sum up, on the whole ,and so on.发表观点的：in my view/in my opinion/personally/As far as I am concerned/As far as I know/As we all know,/As is known to us all, and so on 其它的连接性副词：luckily, unluckily, fortunately, unfortunately, hopefully /generally speaking, in general, meanwhile, however, instead, in other words, and so on 非谓语动词短语:to tell the truth/to be honest一致性：主谓一致、数一致、人称一致、时态一致指出下面的错误：1.lots of traditional festival /hold festival/ give gift /in this years/as a Chinese people2.Parents is hard to afford our education.3.On Mothers Day, do some housework for her, which I think make her pleasant.4.He is our monitor and she has a strong sense of responsibility.5.I didnt agree with the idea, but I am not against it, either.语言的得体性:要求在表达时根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等因素来选择使用恰当的英语语言。 体裁和题材对得体性的要求:不同体裁和题材的文章有不同的用语要求。比如，书面通知中就不适合用“I will tell you a piece of good news.”或“May I have your attention, please?”等句子。这些句子只有在口头通知中才算得体的语句 文化和思想内涵对得体性的要求:只有了解社会、历史、文化、政治及思维习惯等因素对语言的影响，才能使选词更贴切、更得体。Because he was ill, he had to stay at home yesterday. (本句话想要表达的意思是“因为他病了，所以他不得不呆在家里”。汉语思维中常常是先原因，后结果，而英语则刚好相反。所以句子应该改为：He had to stay at home yesterday because he was ill.) Some Chinese English :（注意：以下为汉语思维的英语表达方式，往往被视为不得体语言）1.Parents is hard to afford our education.2.Good good study!3.Long time no see! 4. We two who and who.5.Give you a little colour see see! 6.American Chinese not enough .7. You Give Me Stop! 8 Heart flower angry open 严谨性（细节性问题-体现语言的准确性）：审题；大、小写问题；标点符号问题；书写问题;是否是句子;词性问题（n/v/adj/adv/conj/prep/pron)；改正下面句子中的错误：1.It is no important for young people. 2.I agree it.3.I didnt support it ,but I didnt against it. 4.They can very happy.5.Its not good for our cultural.6.Recently years, they can learn lots of knowleges.7.We should pay attention on our national culture.8.For example, mothers day, fathers day and Christmas Day9.such as Fathers Day, Mothers Day, Christmas Day and so on.10.more and more stronger11.We cant let foreign cultures instead of Chinas culture.12.Recent years. Most young people are interested in foreign festivals.13.I wish that everyone can revive our national culture.尝试使用较高级词汇或较复杂结构:这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：1. Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents. /Last summer I toured New Jersey with my parents2.I cant find any way to solve the problem. /I cant find any solution to the problem.3.Suddenly I had a good idea ./Suddenly I came up with a good idea.这里所说的复杂结构指:从句类-名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句）、形容词性从句、副词性从句；非谓语类；特殊句式类（倒装句、强调句等）1.The environment will not improve until everybody takes care of it.Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.2.My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle. I think he is a genius. My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.3.Yao Ming was born in Shanghai. He has been playing for Huston Rockets .He was injured severely last season.Born in Shanghai, Yao Ming who has been playing for Huston Rockets was injured severely last season. 你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由。(包括所具备的条件)。2014春季范文Dear sir,I hear that our school will welcome some Canadian students to stay with us for or two weeks. Students who want to invite them to stay can take part in it. I want to try.First , my parents and I can speak English well. That benefits us to communicate with each other. Second, our house is big enough for he or she to stay. Furthermore , I live near the Huangpu River. It has a good view of Shanghai.Last but not least , in my home, he or she will enjoy much China culture. My grandpa and grandma are good at handwriting. My grandma also has a good skill in Chinese painting.I think our friendly will give him a both interesting and comfortable experience.Thank you for your reading during your busy work. I hope that you will agree with me . Yours sincerely, Li Hong假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。范文Dear Mum and Dad,How are you doing ?I m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. Whenever I am thinking of this, I cant help feeling grateful to you . It is you who first give me encoutagement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams. I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student. Then, I will strive to be an independent youth. The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.Best regards to you . Yours sincerely, Wang Hua 根据报道东方绿洲(Oriental Greenboat)要更名，有外国人建议用”Discovery Land” “Family Park” 或 “Youth Heaven ”。写出你的看法；或者你自己拟个名字，并陈述理由。范文如下：As is reported, Oriental Greenboat is planning to change its name. Many citizens as well as the foreigners have great interest in giving a new name such as “Discovery Land” “Family Park” or “Youth Heaven”.It suddenly occurs to me that why dont we call it “The World of Discovery ”.Ive got several reasons to account for it.First of all, the word “world” has a more meaningful definition than “park” or “ land”. According to my visit, Oriental Greenboat covers a vast area, and it is more appropriate to call it a “world” rather than a “park”.Secondly, Oriental Greenboat provide the chance to enhance the relationship between family members and promote friendship between the youth. We are give the opportunity to relax and enjoy ,thus discovering what is of great importance in our life. Thirdly , students are involved in many activities there. They come to discover how they should cooperate and overcome the difficulties with their own efforts. This is a world for them to discover how wonderful and able they are!To sum up , I think it would be a wise choice to name it “ The World of Discovery”.