历年高考英语满分作文.docx

2012高考英语满分作文（上海）描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：详细描述用餐的情况简要表述你对这次午餐的感受这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。范文：The instant the bell indicating the end of the last class rang, out of the classroom poured all students but one。Unlike my peers, I was in no hurry to make a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroom for homework. I arrived at the canteen when massive queue had formed. Waiting for my turn patiently, I smelled the aroma of the appetizing food. Greasy as some dishes might be, the wide range of food prepared by the school was superior in nutritional value to that foundelsewhere.The typical schedule of a high school eras extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch break is a rare time when overworked students can wind down and enjoy the pleasure provided by the flavorful food. I make it a point to pamper my taste buds by savoring every little bit of taste in food. What I usually like to do over lunch is have a mindless conversation with a couple of students who have also learnt to smell the roses along the bone breaking journey through high school. We rounded off our lunch with a dessert, refreshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the food but my attitude towards life that affords me pleasure and empowers me in facing up to various challenges.(219words)一、语法解构现在分词作定语 the bell indicating the end of the last class rang倒装句(1)out of the classroom poured all students but one(2)Greasy as some dishes might be不定式 I was in no hurry to make arum for the school canteen状语从句 I arrived at the canteen when massive queue had formed.在分词作状语 Waiting for my turn patiently。二【网络综合 - 高考英语作文】以下是无忧考网为大家整理的2015年高考英语作文预测：减负之后的文章，供大家参考阅读！【减负之后】减负后，你有了更多的可自由支配的时间。请写一篇短文，记述你上周末的活动及感受。内容需包括：1. 你和父母或你和同学(朋友)的一次外出活动;2. 你的自主学习活动;3. 你的感受。注意：1.不可逐条翻译;2.词数不少于100词。【参考范文】Since our learning burden was reduced, we have had much more time to enjoy ourselves and develop our own abilities.Last Saturday, I, together with my friends Zhang Ming and Li Hua, went to the bookstore. We had intended to buy some books to be used as extra homework. But we found that there were so many wonderful books, such as Chicken Soup for the Soul, that we just could not bear to put them down. At last after much mental struggle, we each bought 5 books, including 3 different copies of Chicken Soup for the Soul, so that we could exchange after reading.Of course I did not forget my academic study. After I finished my homework, I previewed what to be learned in the next week. I also went online to get some information about what I did not understand in my studies, from which I gained a lot of knowledge.In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.2011年高考英语满分作文及名师评析作文题目假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1词数：100左右：2参考词汇：房租Tent(n.).Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以which，引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。Dear Bob,Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and therere three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then IU be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes !Yours, Li Hua满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob,How are you these days?Im so glad to know that youll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now Ive found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. Its just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope youll like it. If not, Ill try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。Dear Bob,Im so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. Ive already found you a house near our school. Id like to tell you something about it.You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope youll enjoy staying here!Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。Dear Bob,Im glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september. Ive found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua