大学英语四级考试1.写作.ppt

大学英语四六级考试 CET4 第一讲Writing主讲人 王惠敏 BriefSelf introduction EducationBackground ForeignEnglishDepartmentofEastChinaNormalUniversityWorkingExperiences FourYearsofCollegeEnglishTeachingCertificates TEM 4 TEM 8 bothoralandwritten Teachers CertificateforHigherEducationCoursesShoulderedforThisTermNewCollegeEnglish4 CollegeEnglish NewEdition 2 作文 15 作文 为短文写作题型 写作的体裁包括议论文 说明文 应用文等 考生在规定的30分钟的时间内完成整个文章的写作过程 而且必须遵守不少于120字和依据所给中文提纲的要求保质保量的完成 写作中存在的主要问题 1 内容太笼统 概括 不够具体 缺乏细节 2 缺乏逻辑性 想到哪写到哪儿 容易跑题 3 缺乏举例 4 写不出内容 缺乏进一步论述 观点不够全面 5 句子结构较单一 用词常用一些简单词汇 如何提高学生的四 六级英语写作水平 以2007年12月大学英语四级考试题中写作部分为例 Part1WritingDirections Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledWhatElectivestoChoose Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow 1 各大学为学生开设了多种多样的选修课2 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课3 以我自己为例 一 审题 审题的环节主要是为了谋篇布局 确定短文的主要段落 即可以展开论述的主题部分 Body 以及确定文章的另外两个次要的段落 IntroductionandConclusion 对于题目给出的三点提纲 1 各大学为学生开设了多种多样的选修课我们可以列举不同的选修课的名称 比如说 Tennis ArtisticGymnastics SelectiveReadingofChineseClassicLiterature BusinessAdministration等等 当然也可以对不同选修课给学生带来的好处进行详细的论述 但是 首先对于选修课的名称翻译可能就是一大难题 2 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课提纲中明显给出 出于各种原因 所以很容易会想出大多数学生是出于个人的兴趣爱好 会去选音乐方面的或体育方面的 还可能为以后就业或深造打基础 选外语或与专业相关的选修课 或出于获取学分同时休闲娱乐的 选一些影视欣赏的课程 3 以我自己为例 一般会考虑成为简单的总结陈述 自己的选择以及原因或所获取的益处 二 列简单提纲 每段只需写出几个关键词即可 这样顺着这些词写就就不会想到哪儿写到哪儿 避免跑题 而且写得内容比较全面 1 陈述目前大学开设选修课的现状 awidevarietyofselectives inuniversities2 原因 interest preparationforthefuturejoborfurtehrstudy earncredits 3 Asforme movieappreciation earncredits aformofentertainment 1 造成污染的原因因 factoriesgiveoffsmokeanddust throwpaper plasticbagscarelessly spitonground2 污染的危害 a airpollution ozonosphere 臭氧层 beingdestroyed breathingdiseaseb waterpollution rivers variousdiseases lowintelligence healthaffectedc people smoodisgreatlyaffected 3 怎样防止污染 shutdownsomefactories improvepeople sconsciousness adoptsomemeasures 列提纲的过程也是一个挖掘思想的过程 根据各段的的主题句 将脑子里出现的想法用最简单的方式写出来 然后再进行筛选 挑出最主要的 去掉次要的 这样能防止写作文时跑题 一个好处是写得内容比较全全面 如果边想边写 很容易写了一大段 结果只写了一个方面 将重要内容拉掉或走题 所以平时练习时就应该养成列提纲的习惯 三 分类法 分类法是写作中常用到的一种方法 与一些过渡词连用可使文章条里清楚 层次分明 例 Whyismarkingupabookindispensabletoreading First itkeepsyouawake Inthesecondplace reading ifitisactive isthinking andthinkingtendstoexpressitselfinwords spokenorwritten Themarkedbookisusuallythethought throughbook Finally writinghelpsyourememberthethoughtsyouhad orthethoughtstheauthorexpressed 分类法常用的过渡词有 firstly secondly thirdly furthermore moreover besides inaddition inthefirstplace inthesecondplace ononehand ontheotherhand lastbutnotleast 最后但并不是最不重要的 等 四 举例法 举例法是通过提供实例来扩展段落的一种方法 用实例进一步阐述 支持主题句中的观点 从而使其得到更为充分和完整的表达 在议论文和说明文中如果缺乏必要的例子 就不能使读者信服 学生写作中的通病就是缺少举例 在论述某一问题时 只是泛泛提几点而不给例子 这样内容就显得很空洞 因此 在能举例的地方尽量给出两三个甚至更多个具有代表性的例子 注意举例一定要简短 否则 文章就成了记叙文 举例后要用一句话来概括此段内容 例1 Themostremarkablethingaboutdaydreamingmaybeitsusefulnessinshapingourfuturelivesaswewantthemtobe IndustrialistHenryJ Kaiserbelievesthatmuchofhissuccesswasduetothepositiveuseofdaydreaming Hemaintainedthat youcanimagineyourfuture FlorenceNightingaledreamedofbecominganurse TheyoungThomasEdisonpicturedhimselfasaninventor Forthesenotableachievers itappearsthattheirDaydreamscametrue 举例使文中论点很有说服力 例2 Theprofessionalentertainers workisnotalwayseasy Everynightinthetheatre actorsandactresseshavetorememberthousandsofwords Everynightinconcerthallandnightclubs musicianstryhardtomakenomistakeswhentheyplaytheirmusic Singersworryaboutsingingtherightnotes Magiciansarenervousaboutmak ingistakes worryingthatonedayamagictrickoracardtrickwillnotwork Perhapscircusclownsandnightclubcomedians however havethehardestjobofall Theyhavetomakepeoplelaugheverydaywithwell toldjokesandfunnyacts No beinganentertainerisnotsuchaneasywaytomakealiving 五 因果分析法 因果分析通常用以解释与论证某一观点或现象 用以讨论和分析某事发生的原因和各种原因导致的结果等 有的作文已给出结果让分析原因 如图表作文多数已给出数据和结果 让分析造成这种现象的原因 而有的则给出原因让分析结果 一个结果往往是由不同的原因所造成的 一个原因也会导致不同的结果 许多学生只从一个或两个方面来分析 所以显得内容空洞 因此 在分析原因或结果时应避免只从一个角度来分析 而应从不同的角度进行分析 Long distancerunningeverydaycansignificantlychangearunner slife style Firstly ifoneinsistsonrunningforsometime he llfindhehasmoreenergyandcandomorethings Thedayswillgrowlongerbecauseoflesssleepneeded Secondly thebodywillbecomethinner smoother firmer Thirdly runningalsoproducesaHealthfulfeelingofpleasant excitement whichcomesfromadherencetoastrictroutineandtheimprovedphysicalcondition So runningmakesonefeelgood abouthimselfandabouttheworld 此段从精力 身体和心情三个方面分析了坚持长跑所带来的良好结果 六 比较与对照 比较和对照也是常见的一种写作方法 比较是对人或事物之间的相同进行分析 对比是对人或事物之间的不同点进行比较 不过 这两种方法也不能截然分开 比较和对照有两种写作方法 如果内容较少 可将比较或对照的事物分开描述 先写一方的全部细节 再写另一方 如果内容多 则可逐点进行 比较与对比常用的过渡词有 similarly likewise inthesameway onthecontrary while whereas ontheonehand ontheotherhand incontrast等 七 定义法 定义法是对一种事物的含义 本质 特征和范畴做确切而简要说明的方法 它可使读者对事物的特点有更深的了解 如 Astothedefinitionof winning alotofthingscometomymind towinthefirstprizeinacontestis win ning tosuccessfullydefeatenemiesis winning tomakegreatachievementsafterpainstakingeffortscanalsobecalled winning Generallyspeaking winning maybedefinedasattainingapersonalgoalorarrivingataprede termineddestination 在展开段落时 人们还常用以上提到的两种和两种以上结合的方式 如分类和举例相结合 分类和因果分析相结合的方式 八 句式 在写作中 另一个很重要的方面是句式的变化 许多学生只会用简单句和从句 而不会用现在分词短语 过去分词短语 不定式短语 介词短语等 而这些句式会给作文增添光彩 如 1 AsfortheFlatEarththeory IbelieveIcouldrefuteit 介词短语 2 AgainsttheOvalEarthman thefirstcardIcanplayistheanalogyofthesunandmoon 介词短语 3 Tosavehis honor hehadtodothethingsthathedidnotwantto 不定式短语 4 Bettieheldhim tearsstreamingdownherface 现在分词短语 5 Whencastonthemoonduringeclipse itappearstobetheshadowofaroundobject 过去分词短语 6 Shewassomethingmore apersonlikeme capableoffearandhurtandfailure 形容词短语 7 Itwasalong slowjourneythatalmostendedindisaster It强调句型 在这两段中 有宾语从句 定语从句 主语从句 介词短语及过去分词短语等结构 各种句型的结合使文章简洁 生动 英语课本是写作的基础 在大学英语精读和泛读课本中 只要详细阅读就可找到很多好的地道的表达法和结构 如果能将这些句型记住并掌握其用法 并能模仿篇章的组织结构 用词时 尽量用在大学学过的词汇来代替中学时学过的简单词汇 我相信学生的写作就会有较大的长进 四级作文预测 1 论说文例1 BuyingorBorrowingBooks 1 有些人认为书应该借来看 2 有些人认为书应该买来看 3 你的选择 Bookscanarmuswithknowledgeandinformationweneedtomakesuccessoflife Therearegenerallytwowaysinwhichwecanhaveaccesstobooks borrowingorbuying Whilemillionsareborrowingbooks Istillthinkbuyingthembestsuitsmeandgivesmethegreatestpleasure Manypeoplechoosetoborrowbooks Foronething borrowingbookscansaveushugeamountsofmoney Foranother ifweborrowbooksfromthelibraryorfriends wenormallyhavedeadlinetofinishthem Andconsequentlywecanreadmorebooksinalimitedtime justasafamousChinesesayinggoes bookscannotbereadunlessborrowed Ibelievethatadvantagesforbuyingbooksaremoreobviousandcompelling Firstly wecankeepthebooksaslongaswewish Secondly wecantakewhatevernotesonthemarginofthepagesofthebooks Finally theprocessofselectingandkeepingbookscanbeagreatfun 例2 论电话与写信WillPhonesKillLetterWriting 1 许多人都认为人电话将取代写信 你认为呢 2 请列举能支持你观点的论据3 给一个简短的结论WillPhonesKillLetterWriting Today morethaneverbefore wedependontheexpediencybroughtaboutbysuchmoderndevicesasphones Asaresult whenwefeeltheneedtocommunicatewithfriends insteadofpickingupthepentosetdowntoseriouswriting wepickupthephone Indeed wespeaksomuchandwritesolittlethatsomepeoplebegintosuspectthatphoneswillkillletterwriting Howeverwidelyuseditistoday thephonewillnottaketheplaceofletter forbothphoneandletterwritinghaverespectivefunctionstoperform Thereareatleasttworeasons asfarasIamconcerned whythiswillnothappen Foronething althoughphonesadmittedlyhavealreadytakenovermanyrolestraditionallyplayedbytheletter therearecertainareassuchascommercialtransactionsandlegalcorrespondence inwhichblackandwhitesincerityandconfirmationisstillamust Foranother innowaycanaquickphoneconversationconveyandaccomplishasmuchasadeliberate wellwordedletterdoes Forinstance thereseemstobenobetterdevicethanletterwritingtoexpressdeep heart felt profoundlove afactunderlinedbytheenormouslovelettersofgreatmenandwomen Asweknow inthe1960 s therehadbeensomuchtalkthatTVwouldkillnewspapers Andithasneverhappened Todayweareinasimilarsituation Wecanbecertain forthereasonsdiscussedabove thatletterwritingisirreplaceable A stayingathomeB travelingC doingsocialinvestigationD otherwaysFromthetwocharts wecanseethatinthepasttenyearsthestudentswhogotravelinganddosocialinvestigationsduringvacationshaveincreasedgreatlywhilethosewhostayathomehavedecreasedalot Thereareseveralreasonsforthechanges Firstly withthedevelopmentofeconomy manypeoplehavebecomebetteroff Studentscangetfinancialsupportfromtheirparentsfortraveling Secondly tourismhasgreatlydevelopedoverthepasttenyears Manynewscenicspotshavebeenbuiltandexploited Inaddition thestudentstodayareexpectedandencouragedtoparticipateinfacingtherealworld Inthiswaytheycanobtainthenecessaryexperiencesrequiredwhentheygojob huntingupongraduation Fromthechangesinthecharts wecanpredictthatmoreandmorecollegestudentswillmaketheirvacationsinterestingandworthwhilebygoingtotheoutsideworldinsteadofstayingathome Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowritealetter SupposeyouareJill WritealettertoyourfriendLiFang Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesituationgivenbelowinChinese 假设你的好朋友李芳是大学四年级学生 正在考虑是考研究生继续深造还是大学毕业后就踏上工作岗位 请给她写封信表明你的态度 DearFang Iunderstandthatyouareinadilemma Althoughsomanygraduatesareeagertosetfeetontheirwork liferoad therearestillsomewhoprefertostarttheirnewlifeaftergaininganotherdegreetomakebetterpreparationforenteringsociety Inmyopinion thelatteraremoreadmirable Youaregoodatallyourcoursetheseyears soifyoudoliketospendanothertwoorthreeyearsoncampus youshouldsticktoit Intoday ssociety theachievementandstatusyoucangetandthedevotionyoucanmakearenodoubtinproportiontoyoureducationalbackgroundanddegrees coupledwiththeeffortsyouputinthem Ifyouwanttostridetoyourdestinationsmoresmoothlyandeasily whynotheadforthefurtherstudycourageously Whicheveryouchoose Ifirmlybelieveyourindustrywillensureyoursuccess Afterall itisyouwhohavethefinallysayonthefinalchoice Bestwishes Yourssincerely Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic MyViewonthepost graduateCraze Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline giveninChinese below 1目前考研究生形成热潮 2我认为这股热潮的原因是 MyViewonthePost graduateCrazeEveryyear millionofcollegestudentswillsitinforthepost graduateentranceexamination Moreandmorestudentshaveregardedthepursuingofamasterdegreeasanindispensablepartoftheireducation Whatistoaccountfortheirenthusiasmforapost graduatediploma First itisthedemandofthetime Inanageofknowledgeupdatingandinformationexplosion whatyouhavelearnedincollegecanhardlymeetthedemandofsociety Talentsofhighqualitywhoareequippedwiththelatestknowledgeandskillwillbeneededmorethanever Thatiswhymanystudentswillfurthertheirstudies Second weallrecognizethatthemoreeducationyouhave themorelikelyyouaretosucceed Comparedwiththosewithoutamasterdegree masterswillenjoymorepreferentialtreatment forexample bettersalaries moreopportunitiesforpromotionandtraining Apost graduatedegreecanguaranteeamorepromisingcareer Lastbutnotleast withthegraduationofalargenumberofcollegestudents competitionforjobsbecomesmoreandmorefierce Onewaytogainsomeadvantageoverothersistohaveahigherdegree Nowondermillionsofstudentswillconsiderpursuingapost graduatedegree Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic FascinatingChina Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesituationgivenbelowinChinese 一位外国朋友第一次来中国 他想让你介绍两三样极具中国特色的事物 可以是风俗文化等 你会向他介绍什么 如何介绍 FascinationinChinaChina oneofthecradlesofhumancivilization possessessomanytreasureswithChinesecharacteristicsthatnumerousforeignfriendscometovisither Thefirstplacetogotois theGreatWall whichisthesymbolofChinaandoneofthesevenwondersintheworld What smore itissaidtobetheonlyconstructionthatcanbeseenfromtheouterspace Intheimperialperiods itwasusedindefenseofthedynasties Sinceliberation ithasbecomeaplaceofinterest Thereisafamoussaying HewhodoesnotreachtheGreatWallisn tatrueman ChinaishometoPanda ananimalwithonlytwocolors whiteandblack butverycute It sournationaltreasure oftenfunctioningasafriendlydiplomat Terracotta claywarriorsunearthedinXi an afamousancientcity weresculpturedinQinDynasty thefirstdynastyofChina WhenformerU S PresidentClintoncametoChina hevisitedterracotta sfirst Theabovementionedarejustawaveofthesea Ifyouwanttoknowmoreaboutthisancientnation comeandbeourguest 四六级作文模板 1 对比选择型热点追踪2 问题解决型3 观点论证型4 图表说明型5 应用文6 万能模版 一 对比选择型热点追踪 Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastowhetherstudentsshouldstudyabroadornot Somepeopleareoftheviewthattheyouthsshouldgooverseasforfurtherstudyifpossible whileotherstakeanoppositestand firmlybelievingthatitisofnonecessityforstudentstostudyinaforeigncountry Thosepeoplewhomaintainthatitisgoodforstudentstogoabroadforfurtherstudybelievethatdiverseculturebackgroundcanbroadenstudents horizon Theyalsoclaimthatoverseasstudycanshapestudents personalitybecausetheyareforcedtodealwithallkindsofdifficultiesbythemselves Nevertheless theotherpeoplewhocontendthatdomesticeducationisgoodenoughforstudentsarguethatoureducationalqualityhasbeengreatlyimprovedduringthepastdecade Theyalsopointoutthatdomesticeducationisconvenientandeconomical AsfarasIamconcerned theformeropinionholdsmoreweight Foronething itcanstrengthenthelearners abilitiestounderstandandcommunicatewithpeoplefromothercultures Foranother thedevelopedcountriesstillhavealotadvancedknowledgewhichisworthourstudy Whenallthefactorsareexamined wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthatstudyingabroadifpossibleisadvisable 二 问题解决型 实例 HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview 面试在求职过程中的作用 面试成功的因素 仪表 举止谈吐 能力 专业知识 自信 实事求是 HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation MyViewonFakeCommodities 模板 Withthedevelopment improvementof 铺垫 某一问题 Itisnecessarythat 关注解决 引出的问题很必要 Ontheonehand 理由一 Ontheotherhand 理由二 Therefore howto 承上启下句 要解决的问题 isworthpayingattention Firstly 办法一 Secondly 办法二 Forexample 举例解释解决办法二 Thirdly 办法三 Inotherwords 阐明解决办法三 Infact thewaysto 解决问题的办法多种多样 arecountless It stimethat 强调解决问题时不可待 真题演练 HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview Withthedevelopmentofjobmarket jobinterviewplaysanimportantroleinjob hunting Itisnecessarythatweshouldlearnsometrickstoperformbetterinajobinterview Ontheonehand ajobinterviewoffersintervieweesandinterviewersrespectivelyachancetoknoweachotherwithinaveryshorttime Ontheotherhand excellentperformanceinaninterviewwillenabletheintervieweestoexertagoodimpressionontheinterviewerandfinallywinthejob Therefore howtosucceedinjobinterviewisworthpayingattention Firstly intervieweesshoulddressneatlyandproperly Secondly intervieweesshouldbeconfident Forexample whenaskedaboutprofessionalquestions intervieweesshouldgiveaclearanddefiniteanswer Thirdly intervieweesshouldhavesomeknowledgeaboutthecompanyandthepositiontheyapplyfor Inotherwords intervieweesshouldpreparethemselvessomethingabouttheinterviewinadvancesoastoshowthattheyattachvitalimportancetothejob Infact thewaystosucceedinajobinterviewarecountless It stimethatwelaidstressoninterviewbecauseit sthefirststepofourworkexperience 热点追踪TheDamageofPublicFacilities1 公共设施破坏严重的问题亟待解决 2 解决办法有哪些 3 你的看法 TheDamageofPublicFacilitiesWiththeimprovementoflivingstandard moreandmorepublicfacilities suchaspublictelephoneboothsandATMshavebeeninstalledinthestreets Itisnecessarythatwehavetopayattentiontothedamageofthesepublicfacilities Ontheonehand somepeopleusethemwithoutcare whichleadstoinconveniencetoothers Ontheotherhand thedamagedpublicfacilitiesstainthebeautyofthecity Therefore howtopreventpublicfacilitiesfrombeingdamagedisworthpayingattention Firstly publicfacilitiesshouldbemadeofhardmaterialssoastobemoredurable Secondly somedevicesshouldbeadoptedtoprotectthemfrombeingdamaged Forexample likecars wecaninstallalarmdevicesinpublicfacilities Thirdly frommypointofview itisessentialthatwecivilizeourcitizenstobehavemorally Inotherwords weshouldtellthecitizensthatitisshamefultodestroypublicfacilities Infact thewaystoreducethedamageofpublicfacilitiesarecountless It stimethatwetookmosteffectiveonestoprotectthem 三 观点论证型 实例 Itpaystobehonest Don thesitatetosay No PracticeMakesPerfect 模板 Itistruethat 指出普遍存在的观点 However 谈不同的观点 Ithink 提出自己的观点 即文章的论点 过渡句 转 观点的论证 根据情况选择具体的词 canbelistedasfollows Firstly 论证理由一 Secondly 论证理由二 Forexample 举例具体说明理由二 Thirdly 论证理由三 Acaseinpointisthat 举例具体说明理由三 Itgoeswithoutsayingthat 转折句 提出执行该观点时应注意的事 Thereisnodoubtthat 得出结论 Inconclusion 总结全文 真题演练 ItPaystobeHonest Itistruethatmostofusvaluehonestyhighly However nowadaysweoftenconfrontconfidencecrisissuchascheating overcharging fakecommoditiesandsoon Ithinkthatweshouldbehonestbecausebeinghonestisnotonlybeneficialtoourselvesbutalsotoothersandthewholesociety Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows Firstly onlyhonestpeoplecanbetrulyrespectedbytheothersandcanmakemorefriendsoveralongperiodoftime Secondly honesty whichisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesepeople canmakeourlifeeasierandmoreharmonious Forexample consumerswillnotbeafraidofbeingoverchargedifdealersarehonest andthusdealerscanwinovermorecustomers Thirdly honestycanmakeoursocietymorestable AcaseinpointisthatSingapore asocietyfeaturingtrustworthinessandintegrity hasacomparativelylowcriminalrate Itgoeswithoutsayingthatbeinghonestisofgreatbenefittoboththecommunityandindividuals Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldfosterthespiritofhonesty Inconclusion layingstressonhonestywillbecomethepublicmoralsinoursociety 四 图表说明型 模板 概括性词语最近出 的总体 hasbecomeacommonpartofpeople slife And 题目要求讨论的具体 hasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern Whatimpressesusmostis 的具体表 Thereasons 或 带来的结果 为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫 arevaried Amongthevariousreasons 原因一 playsanimportantpart Thatistosay 具体说明原因一 Whatismore 原因二 Forexample 举例说明原因二 Whentalkingabout 作者要讨论的 作者的看法 Ontheonehand 支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面 Ontheotherhand 支持看法的理由二或说明看法的第二个方面 Inbrief 总结 热点追踪 CheatinginExams1 学生作弊 越来越严重 2 作弊的原因 3 如何杜绝作弊 CheatinginExamsTryingtodefeatthecheathasbecomeacommonpartofpeople slife Andcheatinginexamsoncampushasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern Andcheatinginexamsoncampushasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern Whatamazesusmostisthatmanymethodsareadoptedbystudents Thereasonsforcheatinginexamsarevaried Amongthevariousreasons togethigherscoresorscholarshipsplaysanimportantpart That stosay somestudentsareundergreatpressurefromtheirparentsortheyfeartofallbehindothers sotheytogethighscoresinexams Whatismore somestudentsjustplaythetimeawayandwanttopasstheexamswithoutefforts Forexample theyspendthewholenightplayingPCgamesbutfallasleepintheclass Whentalkingabouthowtodealwithcheatinginexams Ithinkeducationandpunishmentmightwork Ontheonehand weshouldexplaintheharmofcheatingtothestudents Ontheotherhand punishmentorpenaltyshouldbegiventothosewhohavebeenfoundcheating Inbrief weshouldtryourbesttoputanendtocheating 五 应用文 A 批评 抱怨 投诉信 Dear Mynameis 姓名 Iam 身份 Iventuretowriteyoualetterabout 表述抱怨内容 Thefocusofthecomplaintis 抱怨内容的核心点 Foronething 抱怨内容的一个方面 Foranother 另一方面 Honestlyspeaking 客观评论 But 抱怨产生的原因之一 Besides 抱怨产生的原因之二 Allinall thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement 总结说明所抱怨 或事物还有很大改进空间 Idohope 表达本人的愿望 Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration 信件结尾常用语 SincerelyYours Signature 真题演练 假如你是李明 请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信 内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量 价格 环境 服务等 可以是表扬 可以是批评建议 也可以兼而有之 ALettertothePrincipalDearPrincipal MynameisLiMing Iamaseniorjuniorstudentofthecivilengineeringschoolinthisuniversity Iventuretowriteyoualetteraboutthecanteenserviceoncampus whichhasgivenrisetomanycomplaintsamongstudents Thefocusofthecomplaintisthepoorqualityofthefood Foronething thericeishard thesteamedbreadsareusuallysoldcoldandvegetablesareoftenovercooked Foranother thepricesofthefoodsaresurprisinglyhigh Honestlyspeaking thediningenvironmenthasbeenimprovedsincelastyear Buttherearestillnotenoughspaceandseatsforustohaveourmealsthere Besides theattitudeofthecanteenstaffisnothospitableatall Allinall thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement Idohopewewillnotsufferanotheryear Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration Sincerelyyours LiMing B 建议信模板Dear Iamdelightedtolearnthat 写信的原因 It 引出作者的建议 Inmyopinion 表达建议内容 Ontheonehand 提出建议的理由一 Ontheotherhand 建议的理由二 Astothe 具体到某一方面的建议内容 Isuggest If 供被建议人选择的条件 Itisunnecessaryforyouto 建议内容的另一方面 Inaddition 其它的建议 Iamsure 对建议内容的评价 Pleaseinformme 对建议内容所做的承诺 Iamlookingforwardto 表达本人的愿望 SincerelyYours Signature 真题演练 Directions Forthispart youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter SupposeyouareZhangYing WritealettertoXiaoWang aschoolmateofyourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringtheweeklongholiday Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese 1 表示欢迎 2 提出对度假安排的建议 3 提醒应该注意事 ALettertoaSchoolmateDearWang Iamdelightedtolea