高考英语专题限时集训短文改错(Ⅱ)（附答案和解释）+中学作文：不朽的，是心

高考英语专题限时集训短文改错()（附答案和解释）+中学作文：不朽的，是心专题限时集训(二十七) 短文改错()(对应学生用书第 142 页)A(2017湖北省八校联考)It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later.I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father，but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.【答案】 It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walkwalked into my new high school. After registeredregistering in the classroom，thea volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates，two of whichwhom arrived later.I got to know my new roommateroommates immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father，butyet/but he had to leave tofor home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after memyself and live independently.Not until then did I know my senior high school life had realreally begun.第一处：walkwalked。考查动词时态。根据“It was on a warm autumn day”可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。第二处：registeredregistering。考查动名词。after 是介词，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故用动名词形式。第三处：thea。考查冠词。volunteer 是可数名词，且第一次在文中出现，故用不定冠词修饰。第四处：whichwhom。考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，应用 whom 引导非限定性定语从句，在从句中作介词 of 的宾语，修饰先行词 five roommates。第五处：roommateroommates。考查名词复数。由上文的“I had five roommates”可知，室友不止一个，故用复数形式。第六处：删除 but 或将 but 改为 yet。考查连词。在英语中，although 和 but 不能同时出现在一个句子中，故删除 but。也可将 but 改为 yet。补充：此处也可将 Although 删掉，但是语意上没有修改 but 好。第七处：leave 后的 to 改为 for。考查介词。leave for 意为“前往”，为固定词组，符合语境。第八处：memyself。考查代词。与句子主语 I 呼应，应用反身代词，意为“照顾好自己”。第九处：then 后加 did。考查倒装句。not until 置于句首时，常采用部分倒装，即把助动词放在主语之前。由时间状语 then和下文的时态可知，此处用一般过去时，故用 did。第十处：realreally。考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故将real 改为 really。B 【导学号：52384089】(2017洛阳市第一次统一考试)My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be，however he never fails to show her care and consideration.Once I broke a neighbor window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately.When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened.I could only tell him a truth.Instead of scold，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen.How luckily I am to have such a good father!【答案】 My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be，however he never fails to show herhis care and consideration.Once I broke a neighborneighbors window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately.When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what hashad happened.I could only tell him athe truth.Instead of scoldscolding，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health andbut he also teaches me whathow to be a good citizen.How luckilylucky I am to have such a good father!第一处：删除 however。考查连词。在 as 引导的让步状语从句中，表语放句首时，从句倒装，分析句子结构可知，however 多余。第二处：herhis。考查代词。与上文人称代词 he 保持一致，可知，此处应用形容词性物主代词 his。第三处：neighborneighbors。考查名词所有格形式。此处用名词所有格形式作定语，修饰名词 window。第四处：hashad。考查动词时态。与 asked 呼应可知，此处应用过去完成时，表示过去的过去。第五处：athe。考查冠词。tell the truth 为固定词组搭配，符合语境，故用定冠词 the。第六处：scoldscolding。考查动名词。介词后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故用动名词 scolding 作介词 of 的宾语。第七处：our 前加 to。考查介词。apologize to sb.意为“向某人道歉”，为固定词组搭配，故用介词 to。第八处：andbut。考查连词，not only.but also.意为“不但而且”，为固定结构，故用连词 but。第九处：whathow。考查疑问词。与 teaches 呼应可知，此处表示方式，故用 how。第十处：luckilylucky。考查形容词。与 I am 呼应可知，此处应用形容词 lucky 作表语。C 【导学号：52384090】(2017福州市五校联考)Boys and girls，May I have your fully attention, please? I have announcement to make.To welcome our friends in the United States，the Student Union was going to hold a party on Saturday evening，February 20.As never，the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building.They will begin at 7 pm.There will be music，dancing，singing or exchange of gifts.Will everyone please to bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to pack it up，sign your name and writing a few words of good wishes.Dont miss the party，where I believe we will have a lot of funs.Everyone is welcome.Thats all.Thank you.【答案】 Boys and girls，May I have your fullyfull attention, please? I have an announcement to make.To welcome our friends infrom the United States，the Student Union wasis going to hold a party on Saturday evening，February 20.As neverever，the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building.TheyIt will begin at 7 pm.There will be music，dancing，singing orand exchange of gifts.Will everyone please to bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to pack it up，sign your name and writingwrite a few words of good wishes.Dont miss the party，where I believe we will have a lot of funsfun.Everyone is welcome.Thats all.Thank you.第一处：fullyfull。考查形容词。修饰名词要用形容词，故用 full。第二处：announcement 前加 an。考查冠词。announcement 表示“通告、公告”时是可数名词，且此处第一次提到，表示泛指，故应加上不定冠词；announcement 的读音以元音音素开头，故用 an。第三处：infrom。考查介词。根据语境可知，此处表示欢迎来自美国的朋友，而不是欢迎在美国的朋友。第四处：wasis。考查时态。这里说的是从现在看将要发生的事情，不能用过去将来时，应用一般将来时。第五处：neverever。考查行文逻辑。此处表示“像之前一样，像往常一样”，故用 ever。第六处：TheyIt。考查代词。此处指代前面的 the party，故用 It。第七处：orand。考查连词。根据句意以及下文提到的让大家准备礼品可知，此处表示并列关系而非选择关系，故用 and。第八处：删除 bring 前的 to。考查情态动词。情态动词后应用动词原形，故 to 多余。第九处：writingwrite。考查固定搭配。此处应用动词原形write 与 pack，sign 并列。第十处：funsfun。考查名词。fun 为不可数名词，没有复数形式。D(2017广东省七校联合体联考)I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing，the capital city of our country，come true during the National Day holidays this year.In October 1st，I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents，there we watched the flag raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly，I sang the national anthem，feeling extremely exciting.Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction，like the Great Wall.Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very proudly.I thought of the old saying that“One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”Although I was tired，but I really had a good time.【答案】 I like travelling and my dream of visitvisiting Beijing，the capital city of our country，comecame true during the National Day holidays this year.InOn October 1st，I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents，therewhere we watched the flag raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly，I sang the national anthem，feeling extremely excitingexcited.Then we went to some other famous tourist attractionattractions，like the Great Wall.Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very proudlyproud.I thought of the old saying that“One who failfails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”Although I was tired，but/butyet I really had a good time.第一处：visitvisiting。考查动名词。of 为介词，后接动名词作宾语。第二处：come 改为 came。考查动词的时态。根据该句中的“this year”可知，该处讲述的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。第三处：InOn。考查介词。介词 on 表示在具体的某一天。第四处：therewhere。考查定语从句。根据语境可知，此处应用 where 引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词 Tiananmen Square。第五处：flag 前面加上 the。考查定冠词。根据语境可知，这里的 flag 表特指，故用定冠词。第六处：excitingexcited。考查形容词。该句主语为 I，修饰人，应用形容词 excited，表示“激动的，兴奋的”。第七处：attractionattractions。考查名词的数。attraction 作“吸引人的事物”讲时，为可数名词，根据该句中的 some 可知，此处指多个旅游景点，故用复数形式。第八处：proudlyproud。考查形容词。该句中的感官动词felt 用作系动词，后接形容词。第九处：failfails。考查动词的时态和主谓一致。该句陈述的是一般情况，故用一般现在时；该句主语为 One，为第三人称单数，故用 fails。第十处：删除 but 或 but 改为 yet。although 不能和 but 连用，能和 yet 连用。补充：此处也可删除 Although，但是语意上没有修改 but 好。E(2017福州市综合质量检测)Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless homeworks.However, some interested activities indeed contribute to reduce the pressure.Last week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized the activity in which each class shoot a short movie.Our class chose a story setting in World War ，that showed the preciousness of peace.I think this process was a good lesson that taught to me how to strike a balance between studying or relaxation.Now I am determined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.【答案】 Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless homeworkshomework.However, some interestedinteresting activities indeed contribute to reducereducing the pressure.Last week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized thean activity in which each class shootshot a short movie.Our class chose a story settingset in World War ，thatwhich showed the preciousness of peace.I think this process was a good lesson that taught to me how to strike a balance between studying orand relaxation.Now I am more determined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.第一处：homeworkshomework。考查名词。homework 为不可数名词，没有复数形式。 第二处：interestedinteresting。考查形容词。interesting 修饰物，意为“有趣的”；根据该句中的名词activities 可知答案；interested 修饰人，意为“感兴趣的”。第三处：reducereducing。考查动名词。该句中短语“contribute to”中的 to 为介词，后接动名词。第四处：thean。考查不定冠词。根据语境可知，该处泛指“一次活动”，故用不定冠词。第五处：shootshot。考查动词的时态。根据该句的时间状语“Last week”可知，该句陈述的事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。第六处：settingset。考查过去分词。a story 和 set 之间为动宾关系，表示“以二战为背景的故事”，故用过去分词作后置定语。第七处：thatwhich。考查关系代词。分析该句结构可知，该句为非限制性定语从句，关系词指代前面的 a story，在从句中作主语，故用 which。第八处：删除 to。考查固定用法。teach 为及物动词，后直接加宾语，不需要接 to。teach sb.sth.为固定用法，意为“教某人”。第九处：or 改为 and。考查连词。该处表示在学习和放松之间取得平衡。between.and.意为“在和之间”。第十处：在 am 后加 more。考查比较级。根据该句中的 than 可知，该处应用比较级。F(2017石家庄市教学质量检测二)With the development of science and technology，intelligent robots will be wide used in the future. At home，robots will help people do some housework and taking care of the elderly，babies and patients.In addition to these task，robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people.In factories，robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.Robots will change our future life by many ways，what will make it more colorful and comfortable.Therefore，we shouldnt depend on intelligent robots too much，for they were made to help humans rather than replace us.As helpers of we humans，robots should be used properly.【答案】 With the development of science and technology，intelligent robots will be widewidely used in the future. At home，robots will help people do some housework and takingtake care of the elderly，babies and p atients.In addition to these tasktasks，robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people.In factories，robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs to avoid accidents.Robots will change our future life byin many ways，whatwhich will make it more colorful and comfortable.ThereforeHowever，we shouldnt depend on intelligent robots too much，for they wereare made to help humans rather than replace us.As helpers of weus humans，robots should be used properly.第一处：widewidely。考查副词。修饰动词，故用副词。wide 也可作副词，意为“尽可能广地”，不符合语境。第二处：takingtake。考查固定用法。根据该句中的“help people do some housework and”可知，此处应用原形；help sb.(to) do sth.为固定用法。第三处：tasktasks。考查名词的数。task 为可数名词，根据该词前的 these 可知，应用复数形式。第四处：删除 the。考查冠词。play chess 为固定用法，意为“下象棋”；棋类名词前不用冠词。第五处：jobs 后加 to。考查动词不定式。在工厂里，机器人将被用于执行危险任务，以避免事故。分析句子结构可知，应用动词不定式表目的。第六处：byin。考查介词。in many ways 意为“在很多方面”。第七处：whatwhich。考查关系代词。分析该句结构可知，该句为非限制性定语从句，且先行词为 ways，故用 which 引导该定语从句。第八处：ThereforeHowever。考查副词。上句说，机器人将改变我们未来的生活，使我们的生活多彩而舒适；该句说，我们不能过度依赖智能机器人；据此可知，两句间为转折关系，故用 However。第九处：wereare。考查动词的时态。机器人是被用来帮助人类的，而不是来代替人类的。该句陈述的是客观事实，故用一般现在时。第十处：weus。考查代词。of 后接宾语，故用宾格 us。中学作文：不朽的，是心初涉人间，总觉得世间很大，人生很长，生活很美。认为时间无穷无尽，人不会生老病死，花不会凋谢开放。小时候，妈妈很爱我。记得第一次听世上只有妈妈好，热泪盈眶 没有母亲的海子将会怎样啊，不敢想象。他们都还年轻，也算是风华正茂了吧。一起旅游，一起学习，当然，还有照料我长大。我们一起找寻着诗和远方。日色很慢，早晨冒着热气的豆浆，都爱意满满。生活大抵就是这样了吧，简简单单的小美好。波澜总是在不经意间涌出水面。爸妈开始争吵，为了我；爸妈开始忙碌，为了我。白发新生，在黑发丛中蹿出，格外醒目，格外刺眼。“孩子上学，要存好钱”“你少出去喝酒，多陪陪孩子不好吗？”硬生生地被拽出梦境，面对现实，他们都不再年轻、有活力，依然是中年人了，而我，不觉间步入青春，开始了我五彩斑斓的生活。原来季节会更替，原来美好会消逝，原理青春会逃走。长大了，爸妈很爱我。现在是我的青春，爸妈的书生意气已朽了。她徘徊于生计之间，洗衣、做饭、照顾孩子；他困顿于责任之间，赚钱、养家、奉献自我。夜间，她总会端着热牛奶、甜点，喂饱我的空虚。看我狼吞虎咽，她微微笑着，眼角的皱纹被灯光照亮。“慢点吃，学习辛苦了吧”，而她，日渐消瘦。每每此时，我总会想起，前一天我刚与她吵过，三天前我任性走出家门我处于争芳斗艳的青春，而你，早已是风烛残年，何苦管着我，彼此都不快活？！但是，要管的。每个人都有青春，都是磕绊这走来，谁又想子女再在自己跌过的地方再倒？现在，爸妈很爱自己的孩子。母亲已然步入中年，外婆外公已是暮年，而母亲在他们心中，仍是个孩子。每次探亲，外婆总会烧一大桌子好菜，从不会亏待了我们。俄日盖年师，他们仅是白粥拌红糖，草草下饭。这几年，外婆好像老得更快了，烧的菜口感日益差了，而母亲，笑意盈盈地享用。在神采飞扬的年纪，我们总自欺欺人地认为青春像自然一样长存不朽，然，逝者如斯，而未尝往也，终有一日，青春活力会逝去。盖将自其不变者而观之，则“青春”又是不朽的。海枯石烂，年轻的心与爱不朽。