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CollegeStudents JobHunting大学生就业问题 Inrecentyears collegestudentsfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetajob Itsoundsstrangesinceyoungcollegestudentsareusuallyintelligent well educatedphenomenon aspirantandeagertobringtheirtalentintofullplay Thenwhatunderliesthestrangephenomenon Thereareseveralreasonsforthis Tobeginwith nowadayscollegestudentsaimtoohigh Alltheywantare good jobswhichcouldoffergoodsalary comfortableworkingconditions highsocialstatusamongothers Consequently mostcollegestudentsareunwillingtoacceptvacantjobstheyconsidernot good enough Anotherreasonisthatthereisabiggapbetweenthemajorssomestudentsstudyinschoolandthedemandsofvacantjobs Socompaniesthinksomestudentsarenotfitforthejobs 表示列举的连词 first second third firstly secondly thirdly first next then inthefirstplace inthesecondplace foronething foranotherthing tobeginwith what smore toconclude Tosumup 表示原因的连词 because since as nowthat 表示结果的连词 so therefore thus hence accordingly consequently asaresult 表示对照的连词 onthecontrary incontrast bycontrast incomparison bycomparison conversely 表示让步和转折的连词 however nevertheless nonetheless still though yet inspiteof atanyrate inanycase whoever whatever 表示时间顺序的连词 when while as after before since until assoonas once 表示目的的连词 sothat inorderthat 表示总结的连词 Inaword Insum Inconclusion EducationPays 2012 12真题 Theabovebarchartclearlyshowsuseducationpaysin2010 Weseethatunemploymentrateofthosewithhighereducationbackgroundismuchlowerthanthosewithlowereducationdegree Forinstance theunemploymentrateofcollegestudentswithnodegreeisashighas14 9 whilethatofthosewithdoctoraldegreeisonly1 9 图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表主题 第二句说明数据所呈现的特点 趋势 第3 4句引用两个数据来说明这一特点 切勿将所用数据例出 且数据表达方法正确 Thefollowingreason inmyopinion isthemostimportantonetoaccountforthisphenomenon Comparedwiththosewithcomparativelylowereducationdegree peoplewhohavereceivedhighereducationpossessconsiderablywiderknowledge moreremarkablelearningandresearchability greaterinnovationandmostofall resourcefulsocialnetwork allofwhichmakethemmorequalifiedandcompetentfortheirtask Thus theyarelesslikelytolosetheirjobs Thisphenomenontellsusthateducationisaworthyinvestment Therefore educationinvestmentshouldbestrengthenedwhilewe ascollegestudents shouldstudyhardertoavoidunemployment 交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一 1990年6月考查过HowtosolvetheproblemofHeavyTraffic 1994年1月考题TheWorldIsGettingSmallerandSmaller也与交通有关 近年来 随着私家车的日益增多 城市交通拥堵凸显 出行难越来越成为人们关注的焦点 Asweknow trafficaccidentsarebecomingmoreandmoreseriousinChangsha Everyyearanincreasingnumberofpeopleinvolvedinthemareinjured andevenkilled which ofcourse hasarousedwidespreadconcernofthepublic Taketheabovechartasanexample In2010 fromJulytoJanuary 183peoplewereinjuredintrafficaccidentsand41peoplelosttheirlivesinthem Takingacarefullookatthem you llfindthattrafficaccidentsinChangshahavebeenincreasingallthetime InJuly therewereonly20peopleinjured whileinDecember theinjuredwentupto49 Asforthedead inJuly therewereonly3 butinDecember therewere14 Thisisa367 increase TrafficAccidentsInChangsha Theincreaseoftrafficaccidentsisnotonlyathreattopeople slife butalsoshowsthetrafficsystemproblemsinChangsha Itisurgentfortheauthoritiesrelatedtobringitundercontrol trafficProblems交通问题 Thereisnodoubtthattrafficcongestionbecomesagrowingworryfortheresidentsofmosturbanareas Everyday especiallyinrushhours theroadsarecrowdedwithvehicles Peoplehavetospendmuchtimeontheirwayhomeortoworkandevenmightgetinvolvedinanaccident Thisproblemhascausedmuchtroubleinmanybigcities Themaincausesforthetrafficproblemscanbeattributedtothefollowingfactors First withtheexplosion growthofthepopulationinthecities moreandmorepeoplehavetocommutebybusorcar whilethetransportfacilitiescan tmeettheneedsoftheincreasingpopulation Forexample manyroadsandstreetsareoldandnarrow Besides somedriversandpedestriansdonotobeythetrafficregulations whichaddstotheseriousnessofthetrafficproblems Onesolutiontothetrafficproblemistoconstructmoreroadsandtrafficbridgesandopenupmorebuslines Butconsideringtheintensivelanduseindowntownareas thegovernmentshouldfurtherdevelopthesuburbandthecountrysideespeciallyforthenewindustrialenterprisesandlivingquarterssoastoreducethedensepopulationandconsequentlytheheavytrafficinthecities MotorcyclesandCityTraffic1 近年来中国城市中的摩托车2 摩托车的优点和缺点3 我对我国城市中摩托车发展前景的看法 Nowadays motorcyclesarepopulararoundus TheyhavebecomeanimportantmeansoftransportinChinesecities Comparedwiththebikeandthecar themotorcyclehasitsownadvantages First itisquiteflexible Whenthereisatrafficjam itcangothroughthecarsthatareheldupinthestreet Besides itdoesn tconsumemuchpetrol Mostimportantofall itcancarryanotherpersonattheback Buteverycoinhastwosides Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent Tobeginwith it sverycomplicatedtogetqualifiedfurridingamotorcycle You llhavetogothroughaseriesofprocedurestogetaridinglicense Furthermore themaintenanceisexpensive Worstofall itcostsabigsumofmoneytopayfurthelicenseplate especiallyinbigcities Inconclusion ithasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects However iftheauthoritiesconcernedsimplifytheproceduresandreducethecostofthelicenseplate themotorcyclewillbeacceptedbymorepeople HowtoDealwithSub health Withthemodernizationoftheworld people sstandardoflivinghasimprovedalot Thenthereappearsastateofsub healthamongpeoplewhichposeanewthreattothem Therearesometypicalsymptomsforpeoplewhoareinastateofsub health Firstofall thosewhosufferfromitoftenhaveaheadacheorbackache Secondly theyfeellikehavingarestfrequently Whatupsetsusmostisthat thesituationisspreadingcountrywide Asaresult moreandmoreworkersinbigcitiesareharassedbyit withapercentageof75inBeijing 72inShanghaiand70inGuangzhourespectively Thenhowcanwesolvethisproblemeffectively Expertssuggestthatthebestwaytokeepushealthyistodoexercises Itisalsoveryimportantthatpeopleshouldformagoodlivinghabit forexample gettingupearlyandgoingtosleepearly Onlydoingsocanwekeepushealthy Advertisements广告 Withthedevelopmentofmaterialprosperity advertisementshavebecomemoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife Advertisementsgivelatestinformationaboutproducts Iftherewerenoadvertising consumerscouldnotknowaboutgoodsintheirlocalshops Advertisinghelpsselltoabiggermarket Therefore asmoregoodsaresoldtheyarecheaper Advertisementsalsoprovidemoneyfornewspapers magazines radiosandTVstations etc Buttherearealsosomeopinionsagainstadvertising Somepeoplethinkthatadvertisementsdonotgivemuchinformationbutonlytrytopersuadeyoutobuy Theycreateademandforgoodsthatarenotreallyneeded Besides advertisingaddstothecostofgoods Furthermore theyareuglytolookatandspoiltheenvironments Actually everycoinhastwosides Advertisingiswithoutexception Butintoday sworld advertisingisnotonlynecessarybutalsohelpful