短文改错公开课课件.ppt

1 welcome 德才高级中学王刚 2 短文改错 Howtodo Proof reading 3 Task1 Task2 Task3 Ourtasks theexerciseandsecrete theskillsofdoingproof reading theinformationanddemandinoutline 4 高考短文改错专题 一 对短文改错的要求高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发现 纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力 以及考察考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力 5 二 近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计 6 三 近三年高考短文改错考点分布表 考查点 试卷 7 1 Wearegoingtohaveameetingonnextweek 4 Thebossmadeworkerstowork10hoursaday Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns 3 HeisfondoflikeEnglish 2 Heismoretallerthanme 5 Hemarriedwithabeautifulgirl 8 总结 1 时间状语前是否多了介词 2 形容词 副词比较级前是否多了相似词 3 固定搭配中是否多了词 4 不定式前是否多了应该省的to 5 及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词 一 多词 9 Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns 1 Imetstudentyesterday 2 Heislookingamissingbook 3 Hewantshavearest a for 4 Hepraisedbytheteacherseveraltimes to was 5 I mlookingforwardyourletter to 10 总结 1 名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词 2 不及物动词是否缺介词 3 不定式是否漏了to 4 被动语态是否缺少了助动词be 5 习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词 二 缺词 11 1 Itistimeofmetowalkmydog for Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns 3 Passedthebookstore hestoppedtobuyabook 4 HeaswellashissisterareaLeaguemember read Passing is 5 Mypronunciationwasterribly 6 Idon tknowthattheydon tliketotalkwithme 7 Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse their 2 Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass 8 Sheissmilingatmebutnoddingatme terrible why and 12 总结 1 介词是否误用 2 动词的时态 语态是否误用 3 非谓语动词是否误用 4 主谓是否一致 5 判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用 三 错词 6 从句中关联词是否误用 7 代词是否误用 8 连词是否误用 13 做题要求 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 14 Passage1 2009年浙江卷 OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend atruckcametoastopbesidesus Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough Istoodthereandcouldn tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful Themaninsisted soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn 15 OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend atruckcametoastopbesidesus Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough Istoodthereandcouldn tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful Passage1 friends beside an was 16 Themaninsisted soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn but Passage1 gratefully someone somebody to expecting 17 短文改错口诀 动词形 名词数 注意是形和副 非谓动词细辨别 习惯用法要记住 句子成分多分析 逻辑错误需关注 删加各次心有数 改完一定要读读 18 Passage22009海南卷 Asiswellknow whenseniorstudentsgraduatefromschool mostoftheirtextbooksarethrowingaway whicharestillingoodcondition Whatawasteofit Iquiteagreetothesuggestionweshouldrecyclethesetextbooks Foronething recyclingtextbookscansavealotofnaturematerials whichareusedtomakingtextbooks Foranother seniorstudentsmayhaveplentyofusefulnotesinthepages Theyareverymuchhelpfultothosetextbooksusers what smost thecostofthebookswillunloadsomeburdenofthefamiliesofthestudents ActuallyinAustraliaandanyothercountries recyclingtextbooksarepopularanditgivesusagoodexample 19 Passage2 Asiswellknow whenseniorstudentsgraduatefromschool mostoftheirtextbooksarethrowingaway whicharestillingoodcondition Whatawasteofit Iquiteagreetothesuggestionweshouldrecyclethesetextbooks Foronething recyclingtextbookscansavealotofnaturematerials whichareusedtomakingtextbooks known thrown that natural make 20 Passage2 Foranother seniorstudentsmayhaveplentyofusefulnotesinthepages Theyareverymuchhelpfultothosetextbooksusers What smost thecostofthebookswillunloadsomeburdenofthefamiliesofthestudents ActuallyinAustraliaandanyothercountries recyclingtextbooksarepopularanditgivesusagoodexample more is on some 21 短文改错应注意的问题 四不改 即 标点符号不改 大小写不改 词序错误不改 不是不改 而是按错词或少词来改 在纲外生词不改 文中出现带汉语注释的词 在句中不可能用错 规范做题方法 要严格按照示范 即用规定的符号去改错 不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示 换词 去词和加词三者不可混淆 Don tforget 22 Practicemakesperfect 谚 熟能生巧 Inasmalltownwheretherelivedtwobrotherswhomwereverylazy Oneday beforethemotherwentouttoaneveningparty sheaskedabouthertwosonsgivethehouseagoodcleaning Butbeforethemotherlefttheroom theelderbrothersaidtohisyoungerbrother Tom whenmothercameback youwillsayIhavebeenillandIcangetoutofbed theyoungerbrothersagreed OK andwhenmotherturnsbackyouwillsayIhavegonetocallforadoctorforme 23 Inasmalltownwheretherelivedtwobrotherswhomwereverylazy Oneday beforethemotherwentouttoaneveningparty sheaskedabouthertwosonsgivethehouseagoodcleaning Butbeforethemotherlefttheroom theelderbrothersaidtohisyoungerbrother Tom whenmothercameback youwillsayIhavebeenillandIcangetoutofbed theyoungerbrothersagreed OK andwhenmotherturnsbackyouwillsayIhavegonetocallforadoctorforme who that to after comes can t brother but you 24 Homework Whatdidyoulearnfromthislesson 25 Thankyou 26 Goodbye