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Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry李仕才单元主题写作十一本单元主要谈论某件事情对我们的影响以及我们的感受，要求同学们能够正确使用一般过去时谈论生活中某件事情的经过以及自己的感受；能够用一般现在时评价某件事的利与弊，并发表自己的看法。本单元常见的作文话题：描述生活中一次让自己开心或伤心的经历；评价一件事情的利与弊，并发表自己的看法。下面我们就结合实例加以分析。 典型例题今天上午你经历了两件难忘的事情。请以“Learning to Forgive Others”为题，参照下面表格内容写一篇英语短文，简要描述事情的经过，并谈一下你的感悟。词数： 80100词(已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。事情经过你的心情你的感悟妈妈起晚了，没做早饭，而且昨天忘了洗你的校服了。上学路上，你骑车撞倒了一位老人。老人说：“我没事，孩子，以后要小心些。”Learning to Forgive OthersI will always remember what happened to me this morning._ 思路点拨 (一)审题目1本文要求使用一般过去时描述过去发生的事情，并能表达出自己的情感态度。2要包括提示的全部内容，要条理清晰，层次分明。3通篇写作以第一人称为主。(二)列提纲叙述过程事情一妈妈起晚了；没做早饭；没洗校服。1get up late2I had to3I found that4Later, I knewthat情感态度1It made me unhappy.2I felt sorry事情二上学路上撞倒老人。1knock down2be hard on sb.3I thought4be careful next time5Whats more情感态度1would be hard on me.2I was very moved.总体感受我们应该相互理解；只要人人献出一点爱，世界将会变得更美好。(understand each other, as long as, more beautiful) 基础写作根据汉语提示完成下面的短文。Learning to Forgive OthersI will always remember what happened to me this morning. When I 1._(起床) this morning, I found my mother didnt 2._(做早饭) for me because she got up late. So I had to go to school without breakfast. And when I was going to put on my school uniform, I found my mother forgot to wash it. 3._(这让我感到不高兴). Later, I knew my mother didnt sleep well at night because of her headache. 4._(我感到很抱歉). 5._(而且), when I went to school by bike, I knocked down an old man. I thought he would be hard on me, but he said, “Never mind. 6._(下次要小心)！” I was very moved.From these two things I know we should 7._(学会相互理解). Society is like a big family. 8._(只要) everyone gives a little love, the world will become much more beautiful.在你的学校生活中，你经历过很多次背诵、课堂答问、各种考试和比赛(学科比赛、体育比赛、文艺比赛、演讲比赛)。在所有这些当中，你最难忘的是哪一次？为什么？这种经历带给你什么启示？请用英语写一篇80词左右的文章，向学校英语报投稿。详解详析单元主题写作十一写作指导基础写作1got up2.make breakfast3It made me unhappy4I felt sorry for her5Whats more6Be careful next time7learn to understand each other8As long as写作实战One possible version：An Unforgettable English Speech ContestDuring my middle school study, I have taken part in many matches, but I never forget an English speech contest. When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest, I didnt think much of it. There were many excellent students in our class. Besides me, several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest. Luckily, the English teacher asked me to take it. I was worried about it very much. I was eager to get it, but I was afraid to fail. With the help of my English teacher and more than a weeks hard work, I won first prize in our school.After that, I worked harder. I think I can succeed if I try my best to do everything. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do you think so?
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