高三英语一轮复习 第6讲 运用高级词汇与句式 打造作文亮点课件 新人教版.ppt

走向高考 英语 路漫漫其修远兮吾将上下而求索 人教版 课标卷地区 高考总复习 写作素能培养 第三部分 第六讲运用高级词汇与句式 打造作文亮点 第三部分 写作时 高级词汇与高级句式 如能运用贴切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处 也会为你的作文增添色彩 赢得阅卷老师的青睐 一 使用高级词汇1 标新立异写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩 别人有可能想不到的词汇 恰当地求新求异 AsfarasI mconcerned parents muchprotectionwilldomoreharmthangoodtochildren sfuturedevelopment AsfarasI mconcerned parents limitlessprotectionwilldomoreharmthangoodtochildren sfuturedevelopment Ireceivedyouremaillastweek butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam whichisimportantforme soIdidn treplytoyouwithoutdelay Ireceivedyouremaillastweek butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam whichisvitalforme soIdidn treplytoyouwithoutdelay 2 短语优先多使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 Toachieveone sdream onemusttrytoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach Toachieveone sdream onemustmakegreateffortstoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach What smore wecanpouroutthetroublesweface andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects What smore wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects 3 避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词 必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替 Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语 1 Weallhavethesamechance 2 Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend 3 Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous 4 Hedidn tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass 5 We lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus 6 Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses 答案 1 possess2 endless3 putupwith4 turnedadeafearto5 promote6 challenging 二 使用高级句式 让句子靓起来1 恰当使用被动语态 WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2015 AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2015 I mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas I mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas 2 使用强调句 Asasayinggoes thelittlethingmattersmost Asasayinggoes itisthelittlethingthatmattersmost Ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward It sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward 3 使用倒装句 Thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy Ididn trealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativewaysuntilthen NotuntilthendidIrealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativeways 4 使用省略句 Ifitisso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Ifso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 5 使用感叹句 Itisaverysplendidmoment Howsplendidamomentitis Iamveryworriedabouthiscondition HowworriedIamabouthiscondition 6 使用with复合结构 Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim andwecanseesweatonhisface Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim withsweatonhisface Asthesocietydevelopsrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer 7 使用虚拟语气 Itishightimeforbothchildrenandparentstotakeactiontomakesmallchanges Itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstookactiontomakesmallchanges Imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp Withoutyourhelp Iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar 用较高级句式转换下列句子1 Aboveall wemustdosomethingtostoppollution 被动语态 2 IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool 强调句 3 Wedon tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth 倒装句 4 Ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 省略句 5 Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday 感叹句 6 Becausetherewastoomuchnoise Icouldn tgoonstudying with复合结构 答案 1 Aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution 2 ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish 3 Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 Ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 5 Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday 6 Withthenoisegoingon Icouldn tgoonstudying 三 如何写好therebe句型1 Therebe句型的基本意义 某地有某物Thereisanincreaseofabout10percent comparedwithlastyear 与去年相比较 大约增加了百分之十 名师点拨由于受汉语影响 有些同学在使用这个句型时常常把be误用成have的某种形式 下午将有一场演讲 Thereisgoingtohavealecturethisafternoon Thereisgoingtobealecturethisafternoon 2 Wheretherebe therebe 哪里有 哪里就有 Asthedetailedanalysesabovehaveshownus wherethereislife thereishope 正如上面详尽的论述所示 活着就有希望 3 Therebe 名词 分词短语Therearethreefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows 有三个因素促成了下面的观点 名师点拨在这一句型中 有些同学常常把分词误用成动词原形 有些学生支持这个主意 Therearesomestudentssupporttheidea Therearesomestudentssupportingtheidea Somestudentssupporttheidea 4 Therebe nodoubt nodenying noneed nosense nouse that 毫无疑问 不可否认 没有必要 没有意义 没有用 Thereisnosenseinwaitingherewithoutknowingwhenhewillcomeback 在这里傻等却不知道他什么时候回来 一点意义都没有 5 Therebe的非谓语形式therebeing 动词 ing形式 theretobe 不定式形式 Therebeingnobus wehadtowalkhome 由于没有公交车 我们不得不步行回家 翻译句子1 不可否认 我们的环境质量已经每况愈下 2 我们盼望着有个晚会来庆祝即将到来的新年 答案 1 Thereisnodenyingthatthequalityofourenvironmenthasgonefrombadtoworse 2 WeexpecttheretobeapartytocelebratethecomingNewYear 四 如何使用其他的一些高级表达形式让文章更精彩1 用such总结全文Suchisourlivelycity whichyouarewelcometovisitwheneveratyourconvenience 这就是我们这座充满活力的城市 只要您方便 随时欢迎来参观 2 使用cannot toomuch表示强调Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过 3 使用比喻等修辞方法Asisknowntousall vocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage justlikebricksinabuilding 大家都知道 词汇是语言学习的重要组成部分 就像一座大楼的基石 4 使用not but 句型Somepeopledon tliketheirjobsnotbecausethey relazybutbecausetheirjobsaresmall 一些人不喜欢他们的工作不是因为他们懒 而是因为他们的工作太渺小了 5 使用否定句Thelawisthelaw Nobodyhasanyexcusetobreakit 法律就是法律 任何人没有任何借口违反法律 6 使用双重否定Despitemanyobviousadvantagesofbicycle itisnotwithoutitsproblem 尽管自行车有许多明显的优点 它仍然存在一些问题 翻译句子1 任何语言都无法表达我对你们及时帮助的真心感谢 2 学好英语并不是一件苦差事而是一件快乐的事情 3 我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过 答案 1 Nowordcanexpressmywhole heartedthanksforyourtimelyhelp 2 ItisnotahardshipbutapleasuretolearnEnglishwell 3 Wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmenttoomuch 句型转换1 Wecansuccessfullybuildaneconomizedsocietyonlyinthisway 倒装 2 Hehadhardlyreachedthestationwhenthetrainleft 倒装 3 Icannotonlykeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamilythroughmycell butalsoalmostallinformationcanbegatheredontheInternet 倒装 4 Ididn ttakehisadvice soIfailedintheexam 虚拟语气 5 BecauseIwasillthatday Ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 虚拟语气 6 Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 被动语态 7 Theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout 倒装句 强调句 答案 1 Onlyinthiswaycanwesuccessfullybuildaneconomizedsociety 2 Hardlyhadhereachedthestationwhenthetrainleft 3 NotonlycanIkeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamilythroughmycell butalsoalmostallinformationcanbegatheredontheInternet 4 IfIhadtakenhisadvice Iwouldn thavefailedintheexam 5 Iwasillthatday otherwiseIwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting 6 Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students 7 Notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting Itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 佳句习作请按以下内容要点写一篇短文 尽可能多地使用高级句式 1 众所周知 世界人口在一天天增长 因此需要大量的新鲜用水 2 随着工业的快速发展 产生了很多有毒的气体和废水 结果导致了水污染 尽管水是新的 但却不能再运用 3 这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性 确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了 不要再污染用水 否则 我们就不能再在这个地球上生存 那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊 4 只有充足的水源 世界才能蓬勃发展 参考范文Asisknowntoall theworldpopulationisgrowingdaybyday Soenoughfreshwaterisneededtofeedsuchalargepopulation What smore withindustrydevelopingrapidly poisonousgasesandwatersareproduced consequentlyresultinginthepollutionofwater Thoughfresh agoodamountofwatercannolongerbeused Onlythendidwerealizetheimportanceoffreshwater Soit shightimethatwehumanbeingstookactiontoprotectwaterresource Stoppollutingwater otherwisewewouldn tbelivingintheworld Whataterriblescenewewouldbefacedwith Onlywithfreshwatercantheworldbeprosperous