旅游景点介绍写作指导与范文.ppt

景点介绍类作文写作指导,介绍旅游景点1.整体介绍：地理位置、历史背景、来此旅游的必要性。2.介绍地方特色：风景名胜、人文。3.衣食住行方面的信息。1.语言要生动形象2.语言表达多样化3.时态：一般现在时,必备词汇,1人口2面积3气候4政治5经济6文化7教育8交通9自然资源10名胜,populationareaclimatepoliticseconomycultureeducationtransportationnaturalresourcesaplaceofinterest/touristattractions,必备词汇,11景色12壮观的13历史珍宝14方便的15坐落于16因.而闻名17富有/盛产18具有.的历史19有.的人口20.占地.的面积,scenerymagnificenthistoricaltreasureconvenientbelocated/situatedinbeknown/famousforberichinhaveahistoryofhaveapopulationofcoveranareaof.,常见错误(句子表达)1.ShaolinTempleatthefootofSongshanmountain.2.ShaolinTempleinDengfengcityofHenanprovince.病句问题：无谓语动词正确句子：ShaolinTemple_atthefootofSongshanmountain.,is/islocatedat,常见错误(句子表达)3.ShaolinTemple,whichissurroundedwithforestsandhills.4.ShaolinTemple,whichislocatedinDengfengcityofHenanprovince.病句问题：无主句，就无从句。正确句子：见10班佳句欣赏。,常见错误(句子表达)5.Henanhasverygoodweatherisfitfortravel.病句问题：一个简单句中两个谓语动词，之间又无连词连接，又不是从句，则为病句。正确句子：(加连词)Henanhasverygoodweatherandisfitfortravel.(变从句)Henanhasverygoodweather,whichisfitfortravel.,常见错误(句子表达)5.Henanhasverygoodweatherisfitfortravel.正确句子：(用with结构)Withverygoodweather,Henanisfitfortravel.(it形式宾语)ThegoodweathertheremakesitfitfortouriststotravelinHenan.,表达升级,1.少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名扬天下。普通版：ShaolinTemplewaslocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,inDengfengcityofHenanprovince.Itwasbuiltin495ADintheNorthernWeiDynasty.ItwasfamousfortheShaolinKungFu.,表达升级,1.少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名扬天下。升级版：LocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,ShaolinTemplewasfamousforitsShanolinKungfu.,(非谓语结构巧结合),表达升级,少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名扬天下。升级版：Shaolintemplewasbuiltin495AD,soithasalonghistory.Builtin495ADintheNorthernWeiDynasty,Shaolintemplehasalonghistory.,丰富内容加从句,表达升级,少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名扬天下。升级版：WhatattractstouristsallovertheworldisShaolinKungfu.,丰富表达加从句,表达升级,2.其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。普通版：Theweatherthereispleasantandthetransportationisconvenient.,表达升级,2.其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。升级版：Notonlyistheweatherpleasant,butalsothetransportationisconvenient.并列结构运用notonly.butalso倒装,表达升级,2.其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。升级版：Withthepleasantweatherandconvenienttransportation,youcanenjoyawonderfultripthere.,10班佳句欣赏,一.巧用从句要用对。(6句)1.TheShaolinTempleislocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,whichissituatedinDengfengcity.2.Manyforeigners,whoarefromallovertheworld,cometolearnShaolinKungfu.(有主句才有从句)3.ItiswellknownforShaolinKungfu,whichisverypopularallovertheworld.3.Itsmypleasuretobeyourguide.4.ShaolinTempleisoneofthebesttemplesinChina.,10班佳句欣赏,一.巧用从句要用对。(6句)4.ThereasonwhyitissopopularisthatitisfamousforShaolinKungfu.5.OneofthemostimportantthingsisthatShaolinTempleisfamousforitsShaolinKungfu.6.ThetrafficinHenanisconvenient,becauseyoucangowhereveryouwantbybus.,10班佳句欣赏,二.思维开阔巧拓展。(6句)1.ShaolinTempleisoneofthebesttemplesinChina.2.Apartfromthis,itwillbeconvenienttogooutbecauseofthesmoothtransportation.3.BecauseofShaolinKungfu,ShaolinTempleisbecomingmoreandmorepopularallovertheworld.,10班佳句欣赏,二.思维开阔巧拓展。(6句)4.Whenyougetthere,youwillbegreatlyimpressedbyitsbeautifulview.Theweatherisfineandtheairthereispleasanttobreathe.5.TheShaolinKungfuisavaluabletreasureinourtraditionalculture.6.Ithasalonghistory,becauseitwasbuiltintheNothernWeiDynasty.,10班佳句欣赏,三.学以致用高境界。(3句)1.YoumustkeepyoureyesopenifyouarewanttomakeyourtriptoSongshanMountainenjoyableandworthwhile.2.ItisconvenientforyoutovisitShaolinTemple.3.Ifyouwanttogo,Illprovideguideserviceforyouandgiveyouawarmwelcome.,书面表达(报纸第2期)假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Tom将于八月来中国的少林寺旅游，来信向你了解有关旅游景点的情况。请你用英语给他写封回信，内容主要包括：1.少林寺相关情况:(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名扬天下2.其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。3.表示愿意提供导游服务。,DearTom,IamgladtohearthatyourecomingtoChinainAugust.ImwritingtotellyoumoreaboutShaolinTemple.ShaolinTemple,whichissurroundedbyforestsandhills,islocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,inDengfengcityofHenanprovince.Itissaidtohavebeenbuilt,in495AD,duringtheNorthernWeiDynasty.ItiswellknownforshaolinKungfu,whichhasbecomepopularallovertheworld.Besides,theniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.Idliketoactasyourguide,ifyoudontmind.Imsureyouwillhaveagoodtime.,Yours,LiHua,