英语写作指导2邀请.ppt

作文辅导 English Writing,Writing 书面表达,中考考点要求： 根据中文提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。(尽量不要超过100个单词) 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。,中考书面表达主要类型,一 记叙文(Narration):,1.写人 2. 叙事 3.写景 4.状物,二 议论文(Argumentation):,1.学习 2. 社会 3. 音乐 4.体育 5.环保 6.时事,三说明文(Exposition)：,1.地点说明 2.方式方法说明 3.事物说明,四 应用文(Practical Writing)：,1.书信 2.日记 3.通知 4.便条 5.贺卡,五 材料作文：,1.情景提示作文 2.看图写话 3.表格提示类作文,Writing: How to write excellent articles? 写短文时要做到以下七个方面： 一.从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意 1.审清文体 2. 选准人称 3. 用好时态 4. 突出要点 二.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 三.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句,感叹句.适当使用复合句和强调句。另外,要根据文章内容需要少量套用一些英语格言警句,谚语等以加强文章的感染力.,四.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数 要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的用法。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，e.g： receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant, etc.,五. 适当运用连接词语或过渡词语： 不少学生在写作文时只重视意思表达清楚，而不重视语句间的连接，忽视使用过渡性词汇,结果写得文章结构不紧凑，上下文不连贯，可读性不强。要使整篇文章衔接自然、浑然一体、文句流畅，使用恰当的的过渡性词汇是很有必要的。下面是一些常见的过渡性词汇：,Transitional words (过渡词语): 1.时间关系：,first, then, after that, finally, at last, soon, suddenly, immediately, meanwhile, the moment, while, as, as soon as, after, before, etc.,2.空间关系：,here, there, over there, on one side, on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to, etc.,3.并列关系:,and, as well as, or,4.表示目的：,in order that, so that; in order to, so as to,5.对称关系：,for one thing, for the other thing, on the one hand, on the other hand,6. 转折关系：,but, yet, however, while, though, although, otherwise, on the contrary(相反），in spite of“尽管”不能跟句子）no matter what,7.因果关系：,because, since, as, now that, due to thanks to(多亏）owing to as a result oftherefore, thus, etc.,8.条件关系：,if, unless, as long as(只要), so long as (只要), in case, on condition that,9.递进关系：,whats more, moreover, besides, furthermore, in addition, to make matters worse, whats worse, worse still,10. 举例：,for example, for instance, such as, like, that is, namely; take sth. for example, and so on,11.解释:,in other words ; or; That is to say(也就是说.),12. 转换话题：,1/ In my opinion.2/ In fact. 3/ As a matter of fact 4/ By the way. 5/ I am afraid.,13. 肯定:,of course, certainly,14. 对照：,1/ instead 2/ instead of 3/ On the contrary.,15.总结：,in short, in general, in brief, to sum up, generally speaking, in a word To tell you the truth.;Believe it or not. ; All in all. ;On the whole.; For these reasons.;That is why.; As we all know. =As is known to us,注意时态和人称,写人,叙事,议论,一般现在时,一般过去时,一般现在时,六.检查修改文章: 认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根 据要点、语言准确性、上下文的 连贯性来 给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点 5)时态、语态错误。6)标点和大小写错误。 7）人称是否用错。,七.注意事项: 写好草稿（如果时间允许的话）,然后再抄到卷面上）书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。,How can we write argumentation well? (如何才能写好议论文?),议论文亦称说理文,议论文就是讲道理、论是非。作者通过事实材料和逻辑推理来阐明自己的观点、表明赞成什么或反对什么。 一篇完整的议论文必须含有论点、论据和论证三个要素。论点是作者对议论的问题所持的看法或主张。有的议论只有一个论点,叫中心论点;有的议论除中心论点外,还有几个从属的分论点。论据是作者用来证明论点的理由和根据。它可以是事例,也可以是理论,也可以是数据。论证是用论据证明论点的推理过程和方法。 论点必须正确、鲜明;论据确凿、典型、恰当、有说服力,必须与论点之间有本质的、必然的联系。,一、英语议论文的语言特点:,时态较为统一,多用现在时,强调语言表达的客观性,尽可能指明信息来源。 较多使用表达委婉语气的词语和句子。常用虚拟语气,让步状语从句和情态动词. 使用有辩论,推理等含义的连接词和过渡词.常用的有:since, now that, therefore, accordingly, in that case(在那种情况下).,二、英语议论文的写作方法：,1、提出议题：议题的提出要开门见 山，不要拖泥带水。 2、提出正反两方面的观点。 3、表明作者的态度，作者的观点必须 鲜明。 4、论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者 接受自己的观点。,Write at least 60 words on the following topic: “Time Is Money”,Writing practice in Class: （课堂实战演练),Learn some proverbs about time:,1.Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月不待人. 2.Time lost cannot be recalled. 光阴一去不复返. 3.Time is money, but money can never buy time. 一寸光阴一寸金,寸金 难买寸光阴.,4. Life is short and time is swift. 人生短暂,光阴似箭. 5.The whole years work depends on a good start in spring. 一年之计在于春.,6. An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening. 一日之计在于晨. 7. Tomorrow never comes. 切莫依赖明天.,Good paragraphs 好段欣赏,1. Someone says, “Time is money.” But I think time is much more important than money. Because when money is spent, we can get it back. However, when time is gone, itll never come back again. Thats why we mustnt waste time.,2. But there are still a lot of people who dont know the importance of time. They waste their time playing games, getting on line and something else. They dont know that wasting time means wasting part of their own lives.,3. We often say, “How time flies!” So even a second is very important sometimes. We must make full use of our time to do anything useful. And in a word, we must save time, and we shouldnt leave todays work till tomorrow.,4. The first and most important thing is that we must put our hearts and minds in our study. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class and try our best to catch what the teacher says. After class we must go over what we have learned and finish our homework in time. If we have any difficulties, we should ask our teachers or classmates until we understand them completely. We must do lots of exercises.,Write at least 60 words on the following topic: “Time Is Money”,Writing practice in Class: （课堂实战演练),Good compositions,学生好作文欣赏,Time is Money When I was young I used to hear the old people always said Time is money, but I didnt know what it meant. Now my father tells me that people in big cities always walk very fast because they have no time to waste. They are busy with their work and they need to earn money to take care of their home. But I dont think so. It seems that everyone has much time. They like to do such things as playing games, listening to music and sleeping for a long time. But they dont know they,sometimes waste their time. In fact, time flies very fast and everyone has no time to waste. As a Grade Nine student, I have to meet the entrance exam soon so I must try my best to get ready for it. To sum up, time is money for me and for everyone, as well. We must all treasure time.,Time is Money I know a famous saying Time is money. I agree on it, and I even think that time is more valuable than money. If we lose our money, we can earn it back. But if we waste our time, we will find no way to get it again. Because of this, we should save as much time as possible. We should use time to do things that are meaningful. Try to be efficient, try to save time, and you will live a more substantial life.,Time Is Money Time is not only invisible but also untouchable. However, we can feel that it is passing every day. Nowadays, almost every family has one or more clocks. Each sound of them means one second has passed. One second is so short that we can only blink our eyes one time. But how about hundreds of seconds, thousands of seconds and millions of seconds? Time never stops. So we must not waste it. People spend time in different ways. As a middle school student, I should spend most of my time in studying now. To sum up, time is precious as money, we should all treasure it. ( 117 words),Time Is Money Class 5 by 郁嘉杰 Para.1：Time is precious. It runs away in the blink of an eye by accident.We are going to face the graduation examination, and time seems to be limited to us. We ought to do homework; we need to do plenty of exercises so that we can do better in exams. And like other teenagers, we want to play. How to save time? Its a question in everyones heart.,Para.2: To my mind, in order to make the best use of time, we should work as fast as we can. Youll miss everything if you waste time. However, on the contrary, if you work hard from beginning to end, youll get everything you want. In short, time is generous, but it is also cruel. Para.3: We all think we are just fifteen years old, and we still have a great deal of time to waste. In reality, time is a naughty boy, and it will play tricks on you if you dont take care of him. Time flies so fast that we cant realize that we are growing up. Maybe one day, when,we become too old to walk, we may only look at the azure sky and think of the glory days we used to have, such as this English lesson, and say “Oh, I was having an English lesson given by Mr. Zhu this time yesterday, I didnt listen to him carefully and I cant remember what he saidThat is awful, in fact. Para.4: In a word, time is money and nothing is more precious than it.,Writing Homework: Topic: “I say I can ”,Thank you,My Free Time As a Grade Nine student, I dont have as much free time as before. I have to attend classes at weekends. Although my life is full of work, I still feel happy. I usually play basketball and tennis when I am free. They are my favorite sports. In my opinion, playing ball games is thought of as a good form of exercise. These activities enable me to calm myself down, so that I can do better in studying and working. Reading is also my hobby. I often read books which are written in English such as “The Adventures of Tom Sawyer”、 “Mysteries of Sherlock Holmes” and so on. They are worth reading because the plots are wonderful and unforgettable. It is also an opportunity for me to improve my English. Dont take for granted that all we can do in free time is to play. Believe it or not, we can also benefit from that. -,The Life as A Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im a grade nine student. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework, exams and quizzes. The only feeling I have now is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the whole year : Since nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the following six months efficiently. Ill try my best to benefit from what teachers will teach us in class. As theres no elevator to success, Ill do everything step by step! ! I believe that I can do,The life as a Grade Nine student My life in Grade Nine is busy but colourful. During the last five months I have been through so many things such basketball games and different contests that I hardly have the chance to take a day off, but it is still great to have this kind of experience.,I have worked hard for eight years and Ill keep working hard in order to have a bright future. The plan I have for the whole year is to work harder than before and study more efficiently. Time goes by quickly and the following six months is very important to me in my whole life. No pains, no gains. I will not waste a single minute and do the best I can to make great progress.,Writing practice: （课堂实战演练),