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书面表达,昨天你们班以 “Shall we keep animals in zoos?”为话题开了一次班会,请你以下面表格中提供的信息写一遍作文,介绍班会的情况。,40%的学生认为应该把动物养在动物园里。 1、人们可以在动物园里看到很多不同的动物。 2、在那里动物可以受到更好的照顾。,60%的学生认为不应该把动物养在动物园里。 1、动物被关在笼子里无法自由活动。 2、动物喜欢在自然环境中生活。,ATTENTION,1、词数80-100 2、可适当发挥,加入自己观点。 3、文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。,e.g,Outline Para1 :阐述班会上2种不同的观点 Para2: 分别叙述不同观点的理由。 Para3: 阐述自己的观点,并且提出保护动物,保护环境。(情感的升华) 结构:总 分总,How to use disjunctive word 如何应用转折连词,表示转折关系 but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary(相反), on the other hand, in contrast(相反), despite(不管, 尽管, 不论) in spite of(不管), even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,Yesterday we have a discussion in our class about whether we should keep animals in zoos.,There are 40 percent students think that we should keep animals in zoos, while other 60 percent students dont think so. Some students who agree with that opinion think if animals live in the zoo the human beings can see many different kinds of animals. Even though they think that animals are taken better care than they live in the nature world. On the contrary our classmates who disagree that opinion think if animals were kept in the cage, they arent able to move freely and live in lonely life. Therefore animals like to live in the nature kingdom. In my opinion, we shouldnt keep them in zoos, free is their native feature. So, please protect animals and environment together.,
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