六年级下册pep英语I like Zhongshan Park佳作欣赏

I often go to Zhongshan Park. In the park you can see many trees and flowers. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and tall. You can see a hill in the park, too. At the foot of the hill, there are several paths. A lot of people in my city like going to the park. Some young people like taking a walk there. Some old people like singing there. Some children like dancing or playing games there. Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation.www.#zzstep.com*生单词：1. several:几个2. relaxation:放松中国教#育出版网*&点评：陈祖新小朋友的这篇作文简单明了。首先，作者向大家简单地描绘出了公园的风景：有山有水有花。然后，作者写了人们在公园里的活动：青年人在公园里散步，老年人在公园里唱歌，小孩子在公园里玩游戏，多么快乐的一组画面啊！最后，作者作出总结：中山公园真的是一个放松心情的好地方！