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书面表达,1、定人称、定时态2、使用恰当词汇、词组。学会曲线救国。3、尽量划长句为短句，不用从句。4、检查。(内容完整、冠词、大小写、介词、固定搭配、拼写、标点符号等),细节求成败！,YouaskedmeforadviceonhowtolearnChinese.Chineseisbeautiful,butitisnoteasytolearnitwell.Letmegiveyousomegoodadviceabouthowtolearnitwell.IthinkitsagoodideatojoinaChineseclub.Itshelpful.YoucanmakemanyfriendsandtrytospeakmoreChinesewiththem.WhynotwriteemailstomeinChinese?Icancorrectyourmistakes.Inthisway,wecanhelpeachother.Whatsmore,itsagoodwaytolistentoChinesesongsandwatchTVprogrammesinChinese.(Youshould/Youhadbetter)IhopeyourChinesewillbebetterandbetter.,M1,书面表达BeijingisinthenorthofChina.Therearemanyplacesofinterestthere.AlotofpeoplecometovisitBeijingeveryyear.IhavebeentoBeijingtwiceandIhavetravelledaroundBeijing.Lastyear,IwenttoBeijingagainwithmyfriends.IclimbedtheGreatWall.IvisitedtheSummerPalaceandthePalaceMuseum.IalsohadconversationswithforeignersandItooklotsofphotos.Itwasafantasticexperience!,M2,IamJack,IhavejustbeentoMarsformyholiday.Letmetellsomethingaboutthetrip.Mars,samewiththeEarth,goesaroundtheSun.Marsisalsoapartofthesolarsystem.Wewenttherebyspacecraft.However,MarsisalongwayawayfromtheEarth,therefore,ithastakenusalongtimetogetthere.Marsisbrilliant,however,wehaventdiscoveredlifeonMarsaftersearchingforalongtime.IthinkthetriptoMarsisfantastic,andIhopeIcangothereagain.Whatsmore,IbelievethatthereislifeonMars,soIhopeIcanmeetanETnexttime!,M3,ProjectHopeisveryfamousinChinabutmanypeoplehaveonlyheardaboutit.Letmetellyoumore.ProjectHopehasraisedmoneyfrompeopleathomeandabroad.Ithashelpedthousandsofchildrentoschool.Ithaspaidfortheireducation.Ithasbuiltschoolsandlibrariesandithastrainedteachers.Somechildreninthecountrysidedropoutofschoolbecausetheyhavetohelpwiththefarmwork.Luckily,wecangotoschoolandstudy,butforpoorchildrenitsdifficulttogotoschool.Weshouldtryourbesttohelpthemandletthemhavebetterlives.,M4,XianXinghaiisoneofthegreatestcomposers.HewasborninMacaoin1905.HestudiedinPariswhenhewasyoung.In1939hewrote“TheYellowRiver”.Laterhewasfamousforit.HebroughtwesternandChinesemusictogether.HismusicdescribedChinatotherestoftheworld.Unluckily,hediedyoungattheageof40.Hissongshavebeenpopularfor60years.Heiscalled“thePeoplesMusician”.,M5,Afterfinishingthebreakfast,Iwentontorunwithmyfather.Ifeltcomfortableandrelaxed.Atthatmoment,mymotherwasdoingthehousework.Shewantedtocleanthewholehouse.WhenIarrived/gothome,Inoticed/foundthatmylittlesisterwasplayingwithadogonthegrassandmylittlebrotherwassittinginthetreeandsinging.At3:00intheafternoon,myfamilyandIwentshoppinginashopnearby.ThenwehaddinnertogetherinanItalianrestaurant.Itwasabusydayforme,butIenjoyeditverymuch!,M6,Lastsummer,IwenttoGuilinwithmygoodfriends.WewentbytrainonAugust1st.Guilinisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.Therearemanyplacesofinterest.Itsfamousforthemountainsandwater.IboughtalotofpostcardsinXiStreetandsentthemtomyparents.Thejourneymademefeelunforgettable,andIhopeIcangothereagain.,M7,WelcometoShimenExperimentalSchool.Entertheschoolgate,onyourleftistheteachersofficebuilding.Onyourrightistheteachingbuilding.Wehaveclassesthere.Oppositetheteachersofficebuildingisourdormitorybuildingwithourdinninghallsonthefirstandthesecondfloorinit.Thereisalsoabasketballplaygroundbetweenthedormitoryandtheteachersofficebuilding.Boysplaybasketballthere.Goacrossthecrossoverneartheteachingbuilding,thenyoucangettothenewScienceandArtBuilding.ThestudentsinGradeNinestudyhardthere.Thereisalibraryinthenewbuildingaswell.Weloveourschool.,M8,
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