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如何写景点介绍类说明文 本单元的写作要求是说明文的写作。说明文是对某事物的特征、功能、结构、本质、用途、原理、来源等进行客观和具体的阐述。目的在于提供知识、表明观点。说明文的说明对象可以是具体的客观事件、人物、自然环境，也可以是某些抽象的东西，比如原理、概念、定律、思想等。说明文写作的常用的方法有列数字、做比较、打比方、举例子、引资料等。写作说明文时要做到：一、抓住人或事物的基本特征；二、要遵循一定的顺序，使文章条理清楚，中心突出；三、要运用恰当的方法进行说明；四、语言要做到准确无误，不可过分渲染或模棱两可，要简洁、明白。,假如你是王林，你正在黄山度假。黄山美丽的风景深深吸引着你，请根据以下要点写一封email给你的朋友李军，描述自己的所见和感受。 1. 黄山占地250平方公里，其中154平方公里是风景点； 2. 黄山七十二峰，最高峰莲花峰(海拔1 000多米)吸引了无数游客来攀登，迎客松成为好客的象征； 3. 黄山以奇松、怪石、云海、温泉而闻名于世； 4. ,注意：1. 词数120左右，信的格式及开头、结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇： 莲花峰 Lotus Flower Peak 温泉 hot spring 好客的 hospitable 迎客松 Guest-Greeting Pine,Dear Li Jun, This is my first time to visit Mount Huangshan. And I am fascinated by the beauty of its scenery. _ _ _ Yours, Wang Lin,【审题谋篇】 1. 时态：一般现在时 2. 人称：第一人称和第三人称 3. 结构：开头直接切入正题，为下面的内容作铺垫。 正文按空间层次介绍景点，由面到点。 略谈自己的感受和看法。,【遣词造句】 1. 词汇： 吸引 attract 由构成/组成 consist of 被称为be known as 令人愉快的 enjoyable,2. 句型： 1)仿写 迎客松被称为好客的象征。 示例：. . . and the one nearest to Scotland is known as the North. . . (be known as) 仿写：The Guest-Greeting Pine is known as a symbol of being hospitable.,老实说，这次旅行的确使我的假期既愉快又有所值。 示例：You must keep your eyes open if you are going to make your trip to the United Kingdom enjoyable and worthwhile (make+宾语+宾补(adj. 结构) 仿写：To be honest, this trip really makes my holiday enjoyable and worthwhile.,2)高级表达法 黄山占地250平方公里，其中154平方公里是风景点。 一般表达法：The area of Mount Huangshan is 250 square kilometers, and 154 square kilometers of them are scenic area. 高级表达法：Mount Huangshan covers an area of 250 square kilometers, of which 154 square kilometers are scenic area.,Dear Li Jun, This is my first time to visit Mount Huangshan. And I am fascinated by the beauty of its scenery. Mount Huangshan covers an area of 250 square kilometers, of which 154 square kilometers are scenic area. Before approaching it, a stretch of peaks came into my sight. It is said that Mount Huangshan consists of 72 peaks, of which,the highest one is called Lotus Flower Peak. It is more than 1, 000 meters above sea level and it has been attracting numerous visitors to have a try to reach it. In addition, I am very lucky to have enjoyed the four well-known wonders, that is, pines and stones of strange shapes, a sea of clouds and hot springs, especially the famous Guest-Greeting Pine which is known as a symbol of being hospitable. It is also true of local people. In fact, apart from its beautiful scenery, it is also well-known for its rich resources and long history.,To be honest, Im really making my holiday enjoyable and worthwhile. And I advise you to experience its unique beauty by yourself if possible. Yours, Wang Lin,1. 写作前要明确写作的体裁。本文为书信，因此首先要注意书信的格式，不要遗漏书信的开头和结尾。 2. 根据所给文字材料，写作时要注意要点全面，根据事实材料和题目背景构思好文章的结构，由面到点展开。将要点归于不同的部分。如本题首段要引出话题。所给的要点1、2、3、4都属于中段正文部分，末段为结束段，综上所述，概括性地陈述感受。,根据提示，写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍中国的情况。 1. 中国位于亚洲的东部，是世界上第三大国家，面积有 9 600 000平方公里，境内河流长江和黄河是两条最长最重要的河流。西部有大面积的沙漠。 2. 中国有五千多年的历史，有56个民族，其中汉族人口最多。 3. 北京是中国的首都。 4. 中国是个发展中国家。全国人民会把自己的国家建设得更加富强。,参考词汇：长江Yangtze River 黄河Yellow River 注意：短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数。 China is situated in the east of Asia. _ _ _ _,【参考范文】 China is situated in the east of Asia. It is the third largest country in the world and has an area of 9. 6 million square kilometers. In China there are many rivers, of which the Yangtze River and the Yellow River are the longest and most important ones. There is a large area of desert in the west of China.,China has a long history of over 5, 000 years. It is a country with many nationalities. There are 56 nationalities altogether and the Han nationality is the largest one. Beijing is the capital of China. China is a developing country. Now we Chinese people are working harder to turn China into a richer and more powerful country.,Thank you!,同学们,来学校和回家的路上要注意安全,同学们,来学校和回家的路上要注意安全,
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