专四写作综合介绍及便条写作.ppt

综合介绍及便条写作2012年11月,英语专业四级写作,BriefIntroductionofTEM4,Requirements:1.Numberofwordoftheessay:about200wordsand35minutes2.Marking:clearcentralidea;goodorganization;fewornomistakesofgrammarandword;neatnessofthepaper,测试形式,本部分分为主观试题,在主观答题卷2上作答。分两节:SectionA和SectionB.SectionA:Composition15%35分钟本节是命题作文,文章体裁主要属于说明文议论文或记叙文的范围SectionB:Note-Writing10%10分钟本节是写便条.,测试范例2：2012年TEM-4写作部分,PARTVIWRITING【45MIN】SECTIONACOMPOSITION35MINTheDragonBoatFestival(端午节)isoneoftheimportantnationalfestivalsinChinaWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic：TheDragonBoatFestivalFirst,youshouldtellwhatyouknowaboutthefestivalSecond,youshoulddescribehowyouorotherpeopleusuallyobservethefestivalMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization，languageandappropriatenessFailuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks,SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING10MINWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Thewintervacationwasover，andyoucamebackbytrainyesterday.Yourfriend(MichaelorLucy)wenttotherailwaystationtomeetyouandhelpedcleaningyourdorm.Now,writehim/heranote,expressingyourgratitudeandofferingyourhelpinreturnMarkswillbeawardedforcontentorganization,languageandappropriateness.,测试范例2：2011年TEM-4写作部分,PARTVIWRITING45MINSECTIONACOMPOSITION35MINRecentlygovernmentagenciesinsomebigcitieshavebeenstudyingthepossibilityofputtinga“pollutiontax”onprivatecars.Theamountoftaxprivatecarownerswouldhavetopaywoulddependontheemissionlevels,i.e.engineorvehiclesize.Thishascausedquiteastiramongthepublic.Someregarditasaneffectivewaytocontrolthenumberofcarsandreducepollutioninthecity.Butothersdontthinkso.Whatisyouropinion?,WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:ShouldPrivateCarOwnersbeTaxedforPollution?Youaretowriteinthreeparts.Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyouropinionis.Inthesecondpart,provideoneortworeasonstosupportyouropinion.Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,languageandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.,SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING10MINWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Duringthesummervacationyouwouldliketoinviteyourbestfriendtoyourhometown.Writeanotetohim/her,extendingyourinvitationandtellinghim/herhowtogettoyourhometown.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,languageandappropriateness.,(一)写作题的性质,写作是人们表达的一种重要手段，我们称之为comprehensivetest的综合测试，体现的是学生综合运用语言的能力。因为它不仅考核考生对词汇的掌握、对语法的应用，同时也考查了学生的表达能力、思维的逻辑性和条理性。我们知道，学习英语需掌握四种技能：听、说、读、写。听和读是语言的input(输入)过程，因而对于听力和阅读的测试是考查学习者的被动英文技能；说和写是语言的output(输出)过程，对于口语和写作的测试则是考查学习者的主动英文技能。学习者的被动英文水平往往高于主动英文水平，因此听力理解材料的难度往往大于口语的内容，阅读理解材料的难度往往要大于写作。由此可见，在经过两年基础专业课的学习后，学习者应该将重点放在把被动英文水平转化成主动英文水平上。一旦我们的大脑有了大量的语言输出之后，就能达到出口成章、下笔有神的境界。,(二)英语专业四级写作要求,(1)能根据各种不同的听读材料笔头回答问题，复述内容写摘要、写提纲和记笔记。(2)能根据题目列出写作提纲，在一小时内写出200250词的短文。以上均要求做到内容完整、条理清楚，语法基本正确，语言通顺恰当。(3)能写一般的书信、通知、便条、请帖，填写简单的表格，格式正确，语言得体。写作课培养学生初步写作能力，包括提纲、文章摘要、短文以及最简单的常用应用文。,(三)考试大纲对英语专业写作的要求和规定,(1)测试目的：按照英语专业基础阶段英语教学大纲的要求，学生在基础阶段末期的英语写作能力。(2)题型：主观试题，分为SectionA和SectionB两个部分。SectionA:Composition写作文SectionB:Note-writing写便条(3)测试要求：a)作文。要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲)写一篇200词左右的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟,计分15分，比重15%。b)便条。要求根据提示写大约5060词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。计分10分,比重10%.,(1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。(2)行文流畅。(3)组织严密，逻辑性强。(4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。(5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。(6)语法正确。(7)拼写及标点正确，书写整洁。,(四)英语专业四级写作作文的评分标准,Personalinterests:Hobbies;lifestyle;fashion;travelingTeenagersproblems:Generationgap;smoking;ideal;occupationandcareer;conceptionsetc.,Rangesoftopics,（五）、作文命题所涉及的内容,Rangesoftopics,Socialissues:employments;environment;energy;media;traffic;marriage;fakecommodities;crime;etc.Schoollife:Methodofstudying;classroomactivities;sports;personalrelationship;lectures;militanttraining,etc.Newtechnologies:Commuter;cloning;spacescience;traffictools;searesources;,Fourkindsofwriting,Description1.detaileddescription,unmodifieddescription2.directdescriptionandindirectdescription3.Descriptionofperson,ofscene,ofobject,ofplace,Narrationaccordingtothesequenceofthetime,startfromthebeginningofthestoryorstartfromtheendofthestory,orstartfromthemiddleofthestorybyusingflashback(Makingclearofthetime,theplace,andthecharacterswhoareinvolvedinthestory),Expositioncomparisonandcontrast;divisionandclassification;causeandeffect;illustration/exemplification;definitionArgumentationArgument(idea,attitude,opinion)mustbetrue,clearandkeepthesamefromthebeginningtotheend.Evidence(factsandtheory)mustbepowerfulandreasonable.Processofreasoningmustbelogicallyclear.(analogy,deductionandinduction),1）Date：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼3）Body：正文4）Signature：署名,Basiccomponentsofnote-writing,便条写作分析,特点：文内语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点。3.便条不需邮寄，不用信封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。,Characteristicsofnote-writing,专业四级多便条的要求,专业四级多便条的要求如下：10分钟内写一个50-60字的便条，总分为10分，6分为及格线。一便条必须包括以下几个基本要素1）Date：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼3）Body：正文4）Signature：署名,二、评分标准1.格式：（占2分）：包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分日期（DATE），位置在右上角或左上角。正确：April16th,2011April16,2011April16thApril1616/4/20114/16/2011Abbreviationsareusuallyused,Jan.,Feb.,Mar.,Apr.,May,June(Jun.),July(Jul.),Aug.,Sept.,Oct.,Nov.,andDec.,称呼（HEADING），位置在日期下面一行左侧。正确：(Dear)Mike:(,)结尾（ENDING）：正确：Truly/Sincerelyyours,Yourstruly/sincerely,Yours,Sincerely,Mike,Hilda（若在一行扣1分）YoursSincerely（两个单词的首字母都大写扣1分）若名字没写或人名XXX（或Mike/Hilda）扣1分。格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，扣1分。凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣1分。最多扣扣2分。,2.内容：（占3分）一般包括三部分内容写便条的原因要告诉的事情有关的建议、希望或要求等Note:少一点扣一分，最多扣3分；需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣一分3.语法：（占4分）要求语法、词汇正确Note:眼中语法、句法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误两个扣1分，最多扣4分,4.语言得体性：（占1分）总分在8分及以上时可考虑加此分5.便条总字数（包括三部分格式在内）要求在50-60字；不到40或超过80词扣1分。,便条真题,1999（慰问）YouvelearnedthatyourfriendJimmyisillthesedays.Writehimanoteexpressingyourconcern,askingafterhishealthandgivingyourbestwishes.2000（建议）Youhavereadonthenoticeboardthattheuniversitylibraryislookingforapart-timelibraryassistantwhocanworkatweekends.Youthinkthatyourclassmate,George,isasuitablepersonforthisvacancy.Writehimanote,tellinghimwhatyouknowaboutthevacancyandtryingtopersuadehimtogoforaninterview.,2001（道歉）Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWang.Writehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeeting.Youshouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting.2002（询问）Youhaveheardyourfriend,Jack,wishestosellhiswalkman.Writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestinit,askinghimaboutitsconditionandofferingapriceforit.,2003（拒绝邀请）YourfriendClarehasinvitedyoutoherhouse-warmingpartythisweekend.However,youwillbeawaythen.Writeheranotepolitelydecliningherinvitationandexpressingyourbestwishestoher.2004（表示同情）Yourfriend,Jane,hasfailedinthefinalexam,andisfeelingveryunhappyaboutit.Writeanotetocomfortherandgivehersomeencouragement.,2005（邀请）Youhavegottwoticketstoaconcertgivenbyafamouspopband/orchestra.Writeanotetoyourfriend,Hilda/Mike,describingbrieflywhatitisandinvitingher/himtocomewithyou.2006（询问）Youhavegottoknowthatyouclassmate,Michael,isorganizingaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Andyouarethinkingofjoiningthetrip,writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestintheexcursionandaskingforinformationontwodetailsrelatedtotheexcursion.,2007（拒绝邀请）Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversitysswimmingclub.Hehasinvitedyoutojointheclub,butyoulikesomeothersport.Writehimanote,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.2008（推荐）Jane,yourclassmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Andyouwouldliketorecommendonetoher.Writeanote,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.,2009（推荐）Lily,yourroommate,islookingforapart-timejobinthecomingsummervacation.YousawanadforaprivateEnglishtutorforaschoolboy.Writeheranote,tellingherwhatthejobisandstronglyrecommendingittoher.2010（建议）Yourgoodfriend,John,isthinkingoforganizinganend-of-the-termparty.Writehimanotetellinghimthatyoulikehisideaandoffertohelphim.Youhavetobespecificabouthowyouhelphim.,2007（拒绝邀请）WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversitysswimmingclub.Hehasinvitedyoutojointheclub,butyoulikesomeothersport.Writehimanote,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,April22nd,2007DearJimmy,Itsverykindofyoutoinvitemetojointheuniversitysswimmingclub.Iammostgratefultobeasked.However,Ivealreadyjoinedabasketballclub.YouknowIlikeplayingbasketballverymuch.ImafraidIdonothaveenoughtimetotakepartintwosports.IamverysorryforthatandreallyregretthatIwouldmisssuchanexcellentchanceofenjoyingswimmingwithyou.Goodlucktoyourclub.Yours,Mike,22April,2007DearJimmy,Thankyouforyourinvitingmetoparticipatingintheuniversitysswimmingclub.ButIregrettotellyouthatImnotabletojoinyou,sinceIfoundmyselfmoreinterestedinthebasketballclub.Ihopeyouwillnotbeangrytome.Yours,Mike,April22,2007DearJimmy,Sorry!Icouldnttakepartinyouruniversityswimmingclub,becauseImorelikefootball.Ihavetodeclineyourinvitation.Whatapity!Iamsureyouwillnotbeangryatme,becauseyouarealwaysmybestfriend.Sorryagain!Yours,Tom,Hello,Jimmy:ImshytotellyouIlikeothersport.SoIdonttakepartinyouclub.Youmayask:Why?Notbecauseotherreasons,Iinterestedmoreinpingponganditismorecheaper.Ithink,exceptme,morepeoplewillsupportyou.Tony,便条写作八大类型板块,1.约会一般包含三方面内容：约会的事由建议约会的时间和地点期待对方做出回复，并可表示感谢,Sample,WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Youhavemanyproblemsaboutyourcurrentwork,soyouwanttoseeyourfriend,Jane,forheradvice.Writeheranote,makinganappointmenttoseehertomorrow.Donotsignyourownname,using“Rain”instead.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness,July12DearJane,IwonderifIcouldseeyouinyourofficetomorrow,at10:00a.m.Ihavemanyproblemstotalkoverwithyouonmycurrentwork.Itmakesmeverypuzzled.SoIhopeyoucouldgivemesomegoodadvice.PleasegivemeacallandletmeknowwhetheritisOK,orwhenyouareconvenient.Yours,Rain,ClassJob:Note-Writing(10MIN),WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouwanttodiscussyourpaperwithyoursupervisorProfessorWangtosolvetheproblemsduringthepaperresearch.Writehimanote,makinganappointmenttoseehimtomorrow.Donotsignyourownname,using“Nick”instead.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness,July12DearProfessorWang,Duringtheresearch,Ihavefoundsomeproblems.Iwannasolvetheseproblemsfirst,andthengoonmyresearch.Idliketotalkthemaboutwithyouatyourofficetomorrowafternoon.Pleaseringmeifyoufindthetimeisnotconvenientforyou.Yours,Nick,2.道歉一般包含三方面内容：说明为何事而致歉解释造成过失或不能履约的原因再次致歉或提出解决方案,Sample,WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouareWangMing.Youhaveborrowedabookfromyourfriend,LiuHui.Unfortunately,ourdaughterbrokeit.Writeheranote,makinganapologyandexplainingwhy.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness,July12DearLiuHui,Iamterriblysorrytotellyouthatthebookyouhavelentmewasbrokenbymydaughter.Iintendedtoreturnittoday,butwhenIcamebackhome,Ifounditbrokenbymylittledaughter.Iwillgetanewcopyforyou.Forthisirrecoverableloss,Iamtoblame.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologies.Yours,WangMing,ClassJob:Note-Writing(10MIN),WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouareChenBo.YoullattendanEnglishcompetitiononbehalfofyourclass.Butsuddenlyyourvoiceisinabadcondition.WritetoMrs.Liandtellheryourquittingthecompetition.Writeheranote,makinganapologyandexplainingwhy.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness,July12DearMrs.Li,ImreallysorrytohavetotellyouthatIshallnotbeabletoattendtheEnglishcompetition,becausemyvoiceisinabadcondition.ThenIrecommendWangLitotakemyplace.SheisgoodatoralEnglish.IdohopeIcanattendthiscompetition,butthedoctortoldmethatIshouldhavearest.Myregrets.Yourssincerely,ChenBo,3.邀请一般包含三方面内容：邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点与该活动有关的注意事项期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢,Sample,WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouareLiMing,themonitorofyourclass.SupposeyourclassisgoingtohaveameetingtodiscusshowtolearnEnglishwell.WriteanotetoinviteProfessorChentoattendthemeeting.Tellhimtheexacttimeandplace.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness,July12DearProfessorChen,Weshallgreatlyappreciateitifyoucanattendourclassmeeting.WelldiscusshowtoimproveourEnglishinRoom201ofteachingbuildingNo.1at7:00p.m.ofJuly16.allofusdohopeyoucancomeandgiveussomevaluableadvice.Wearelookingforwardtoseeingyou.Sincerelyyours,LiMing,ClassJob:Note-Writing(10MIN),WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:You,WangMing,havejustreceivedanotefromyourfriend,LiWei,invitingyoutohisbirthdaypartyonthecomingSunday.Nowwritetoinformhimofyouracceptanceoftheinvitation.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness,July12DearLiWei,Iwanttoexpressmyheartfeltcongratulationtoyouonyourcoming20thbirthday.IamverypleasedtoaccepttheinvitationtoyourbirthdaypartyonthecomingSunday,July19.Iwillarriveatyourhomeat5:00p.m.thatday.Imlookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yours,WangMing,英语专业四级便条写作分析与总结,便条：写便条（note-writing）。该部分的考试要求考生能根据提示写50-60个单词的便条、通知、请帖等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。计分10，比重10%。每年在该部分失分的主要原因是：1）没有正确书写便条格式；2）遗漏或错误表达重要的信息点；3）语言风格把握不够准确。,1、应试技巧1）合理安排时间。建议审题和构思（不一定列提纲）2-3分钟，写作5-6分钟，检查错误2-3分钟。2）细读考试说明。切勿遗漏或错误表达重要信息点。,2001年的考题：WriteonyourAnswerSheetOneanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWang.Writehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeeting.Youshouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting.信息点：1、写给ProfessorWang2、因无法赴约而道歉3、另约他见面4、再次见面的时间,Sample,April,20ProfessorWang,Iamsorryforfailingtoturnupyesterday.ItisbecausethatIwascaughtbyanunexpectedcoldandgotahighfever.Iwanttoexpressmyapologyagainformakingyouwaitingforme.Whatismore,IhopethatIwouldgetanotherchancetomeetyouwhenyouareconvenient.AreyoufreethisFriday?Ifyouareavailablethatday,pleaseinformme.Thanksalot!Yourstudent,Tom,2、训练方法（十六字口诀）强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。1）格式：时间、称谓、落款的标准书写。,2、训练方法（十六字口诀）强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。2）内容：分析便条的目的和要点，避免信息遗失；扩展要点，写出相关信息；注意特殊要求。3）根据不同对象，便条使用语言的风格完全不同。casual；formal.,2、训练方法（十六字口诀）强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。,1.WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YourfriendClairehasinvitedyoutoherhouse-warmingpartythisweekend.However,youwillbeawaythen.Writeheranotepolitelydecliningherinvitationandexpressingyourbestwishestoher.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,参考范文1May10thDearClare,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetothehouse-warmingpartyyouaregoingtogivethisweekend.ButIamsosorrythatIcannotturnupatthepartybecauseIwillbeonabusinesstriptoShanghaithen.IdoappreciateyourinvitingmeandhopethatIcanvisityournewhouseinthenearfuture,andyourlifewillbesweeterandmorepleasantinthenewhouse.Yours,Rocky,2.WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Youhaveheardthatyourfriend,Jack,wishestosellhiswalkman.Writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestinit,askinghimaboutitsconditionandofferingapriceforit.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,参考范文2May10thDearJack,Iveheardthatyouwishtosellyourwalkman.IwanttobuyitifpossiblebecausemywalkmanwaslosttwoweeksagoandIneedonetohelpmestudyEnglishnow.Couldyoupleaseletmeknowthepresentconditionsofyourwalkman?AndthenIwillofferyouareasonableprice.Hopethedealcanbedonebetweenus.Yoursever,Rocky,3.WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWang.Writehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeeting.Youshouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,参考范文3May10thDearProfessorWang,Imterriblysorryformissingtheappointmentwithyou.ButIhavetotellyouthatIgotinvolvedinaroadaccidentonmywaytoyourofficethatmorningandmyrightlegwasslightlyinjured.Iknowyoureprettyoccupiedthesedays,butIwonderifyoucouldarrangeforanotherappointmentwithmenowthatIbadlyneedyourhelpwithmythesis.WouldThisTuesdayafternoonbeconvenientforyou?Ifpossible,Iwillgotoyourofficeatthreep.m.Ilookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,WuXiaoming,4.WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Youvereadonthenoticeboardthattheuniversitylibraryislookingforapart-timelibraryassistantwhocanworkatweekends.Youthinkthatyourclassmate,George,isasuitablepersonforthisvacancy.Writehimanote,tellinghimwhatyouknowaboutthevacancyandtryingtopersuadehimtogoforaninterview.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,参考范文4May10thDearGeorge,Ihavelearnedfromthenoticeboardthattheuniversityislookingforapart-timelibraryassistancewhocanworkatweekends.Iknowyouarelookingforapart-timejobthesedays.Ithinkyouarethesuitablepersonforthisvacancy,foryouarefreeatweekendsanditpayswellandmostimportantly,thejobgivesyouafreeaccesstothereadingroom,whichisagoodchancetoimproveyourself.Sowhynotgoforaninterview?Goodluck!Yourstruly,Rocky,5.WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouvelearnedthatyourfriendJimmyisillthesedays.Writehimanoteexpressingyourconcern,askingabouthishealthandgivingyourbestwishes.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,参考范文5May10thDearJimmy,Iamsorrytohearthatyouareillthesedays.Icaneasilyimaginethepainyouarehavingnow,forIgottoknowthatyouaredownwithabadflu.Areyoufeelingbetternow?Ireallywanttoseeyoutoday,butyouknowwewillhavethemid-termexaminationthisafternoon.Anyway,Iwilltrytocometoyoutomorrowmorning.Ihopeyouwillrecoverbythen.Pleasetakegoodcareofyourself.Yoursever,Rocky,6.WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouareMarkorSally.Youhavegotatickettoacomputerfair,butyounowfindthatyouareunabletogo.Writeanotetoyourfriend,George,explainingwhyyouaresendingtheenclosedtickettohimandtellinghimbrieflyhowtogetthere.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,参考范文6May10thDearGeorge,IhavegotatickettoacomputerfairbutIwontbeabletogotherethisafternoon,forIhaveanimportantappointmentwithProfessorMalone,myacademicadvisor.Iknowyouarealwayskeenonplayingonthecomputer,soIdecidedtosendthistickettoyou.Ithinkyouwilllikeit.Pleasefindtheticketenclosed.Mayyouagoodday!Yoursever,Mark,Thankyou!,