江苏省高考英语 第三部分 写作层级训练 第一步 循序渐进提升写作技能 第八讲 巧夺天工的连篇技巧课件

第八讲巧夺天工的连篇技巧第八讲巧夺天工的连篇技巧李仕才有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“开篇、承接、转折、总结”四个方法使文章流畅自然，是考生在书面表达题目上争创高分的非常重要的条件。一、开篇创造良好开端1.常用表达“开篇”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头)first，first of all，at first，in the first place，firstly，to start with，recently，now，at present，in recent years，in general，generally speaking，at present，lately，currently等。2.常用表达“开篇”的句型(1)It is often said that.(2)As the proverb says.(3)It goes without saying that.(4)It is clear/obvious that.(5)Many people often ask.Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.(陕西卷)Its often said that all work without play makes Jack a dull boy.As the proverb says，no pains，no gains.(北京卷)二、承接顺势承上又启下1.常用表达“承接”的过渡词语secondly，in addition，besides，moreover，what is more，what is worse，for example，in other words，especially，particularly，obviously，at the same time，no doubt meanwhile，as a consequence等。2.常用表达“承接”的句型：(1)It is true that.(2)Everybody knows that.(3)It can be easily proved that.(4)No one can deny that.(5)The reason why.is that.(6)There is no doubt that.(7)To take.for example (instance).(8)What is more serious is that.In addition，I will go on a trip to Sichuan，where there are a great number of places of interest.Meanwhile，I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.三、转折利用转折巧过渡1.常用表达“转折”的过渡词语but，however，on the other hand，on the contrary，in any case，or，or else，while，despite，in spite of，regardless of，instead等。2.常用表达“转折”的句型(1)Every coin has two sides.(2)But for.I would never.(3)Another example is that.(4)Taking everything into consideration.(5)Thats why I feel that.There will be many challenges ahead，but I have confidence that Ill take on the burden.However，it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time.四、总结完美结束全文常用表达“总结”的过渡词语：in a word，in general，in short，above all，finally，in conclusion，at last，in summary，as a result，on the whole，in ones opinion等。1.Something must be done to.2.It can be safely concluded from.that.3.In my opinion，we can draw the conclusion that.4.It may be summed up as follows.常用表达“总结”的句型：It may be briefly summed up as follows：its high time that our government took some measures to improve our environment.In my opinion，people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying.跟 踪 训 练.完成句子1._ the Internet，computers play an important role in peoples life.2._， the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English.3._，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。With the development ofGenerally speaking/On the whole/In generalTake Beijing for example4._，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in yourself.5._，I love wealth，but I value health more.6._，people shall not smoke in public places.7._，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。总之，一个好市民应该遵守交通规则。That is to sayAs far as I am concernedIn my opinionIn a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief/To sum up8._， our class also organize a variety of activities to enrich our spare time.9._， if we spend too much time on phones，we will lose the communication skills we need in the future.另外，我们班还组织了各种各样的活动来丰富我们的业余时间。更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来需要的交际技能。Besides/Whats more/In addition/Moreover/FurthermoreWorse still/To make matters worse.完成短文1._，I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 2._ I wiped the dust off all the furniture.3._， I swept and mopped the floors.首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。FirstlyThenAfter that.翻译句子1.努力学习，你就会升入重点大学。2.游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。3.然而，使你最惊讶的是下述新的功能。4.相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。_Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university.Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will.However，what amazes you most is the following new function.On the contrary，smartphones not only take up our valuable time，but also do great harm to our health.5.多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。6.因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。7.只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。8.如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。_Thanks to the doctors timely treatment，he was saved.Therefore，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.As long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succeed.If we neglect our future，well end up in failure as what happens to the man in the picture.用方框内的过渡词完成下面的短文second，so，as a result，despite，on (the) one hand，whats worse，instead of，in a word，on the other hand，as is well-known1._， online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. 2._， online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.3._ searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. 4._， it is much faster for us to do shopping.We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.As is well-knownOn the one handInstead ofSecond5._，online shopping also has many disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are.6._， we can be cheated easily. 7._， we cannot see the things in detail.8._， 9._ the disadvantages of online shopping, I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.10._ we should develop it.On the other handAs a resultWhats worseIn a worddespiteSo