资源描述
hold the wrong idea 持有错误的观点持有错误的观点donate blood 献血献血do harm to 对对有害有害a small amount of 少量的少量的make a quick adjustment 做出快速调整做出快速调整patient 病人病人survive 活下来；生存活下来；生存have a better understanding of 有更好的理解有更好的理解medical knowledge 医学知识医学知识set a good example for sb. 为某人树立好榜样为某人树立好榜样hold a series of activities 举办一系列的活动举办一系列的活动call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事号召某人做某事give away 捐献；捐赠捐献；捐赠lower grade 低年级低年级be intended to 为为准备的准备的promote friendship 促进友谊促进友谊encourage economy 鼓励节约鼓励节约be highly praised by sb. 被某人高度赞扬被某人高度赞扬be strongly for 强烈赞成强烈赞成break traffic rules 违反交通规则违反交通规则littering 乱扔垃圾乱扔垃圾keep sth. in mind 记住某事记住某事keep to the right 靠右靠右run the red light 闯红灯闯红灯the pedestrian crossing 人行路口人行路口spitting 随地吐痰随地吐痰behavior 行为；表现行为；表现make a difference 起作用；产生不同起作用；产生不同1. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. 因此，让我们负起责任来通过骑自行车建设一个因此，让我们负起责任来通过骑自行车建设一个低碳城市。低碳城市。2. Some people hold the wrong idea that . 有人持有错误的观有人持有错误的观点：点：3. We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books. 我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。4. I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. 我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。5. I hope my behavior will make a difference. 我希望我的行为可以起我希望我的行为可以起到作用。到作用。6. As high school students, its our duty to tell everyone around us to save water. 作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。任。7. Lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day, every hour and every minute. 让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。1. Our government is aiming to build an “harmonious society”.1. an改为a2. I think it is every citizens duty to work hardly to achieve this goal.2. hardly改为hard3. Firstly, we should love our great motherland, our society or our school.3. or改为and4. Secondly, we should be respect and love our parents.4. 删掉be5. We should trust our fellow students and help every other.5. every改为each6. Lei Feng set a good example for us to learn from him.6. 删掉him7. To build our country into a powerful socialist country, “Lei Feng Spirit” still necessary.7. still前面加is8. Because he was only a soldier, he managed to save a considerable amount of money and gave it away to poor people.8. Because改为Although/Though/While9. Whatever he was asked to do and no matter how difficult the task was, he always tries his best.9. tries改为tried10. Lei Feng died over 30 years before.10. before改为ago【20112011江西卷改编：骑自行车倡议江西卷改编：骑自行车倡议】假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1 1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2 2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：参考词汇：低碳生活低碳生活 low-carbon lifelow-carbon life；节能节能 energy savingenergy saving满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. Therefore, they are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. For another, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise, which is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you!满分赏析满分赏析As is known to all(众所周知众所周知)和和with the improvement of peoples living standards(随着人们生活水平的改善随着人们生活水平的改善)这两个表达用来引出现象，这两个表达用来引出现象，显示了语言实力；且有显示了语言实力；且有means作作“方式方式”意思，是高级词汇；意思，是高级词汇；bringing现在分词作伴随状语；整句话显得有档次。现在分词作伴随状语；整句话显得有档次。用用As far as Im concerned(依我之见依我之见)引出自己的观点，这是必备的引出自己的观点，这是必备的表达观点的套语。表达观点的套语。两个观点用到了两个观点用到了for one thing, for another来连接，使篇章连贯；来连接，使篇章连贯；且且energy-saving, environmentally friendly, give off waste gas等描述环等描述环保的相关词汇体现了作者深厚的语言功底。保的相关词汇体现了作者深厚的语言功底。本句运用到了本句运用到了which引导的定语从句，引导的定语从句，which指代前面整句话的事指代前面整句话的事情。情。最后两句是加强呼吁，最后两句是加强呼吁，lets take the responsibility to和和Come on and join us!十分值得学习模仿。十分值得学习模仿。满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”.As our living standards have improved, cars have increasingly become available to ordinary families.But too many cars on the road may cause many problems. For one thing, waste gas coming from cars has been a big threat to the environment. Whats more, while cars have brought convenience to us, they may also cause traffic jams.In this case, more and more people have begun to take up bicycles as an alternative way to get around. On one hand, as an energy-saving means of transportation, they dont cause any pollution to the environment. Besides, riding bicycles is a good form of exercise and can contribute to what we call low-carbon life.Therefore, lets ride bicycles, for the benefit of the environment as well as our own health.Thank you!满分赏析满分赏析As our living standards have improved用于引出一种现象，这一说用于引出一种现象，这一说法在中英文中一样常用；法在中英文中一样常用；available属于中高难度的词汇，体现出水属于中高难度的词汇，体现出水平。平。本句的本句的while是是“尽管尽管”的意思，引出让步状语从句。的意思，引出让步状语从句。an alternative way(另外一种可选择的方式另外一种可选择的方式)，alternative是较难词是较难词汇，能给评卷老师好印象。汇，能给评卷老师好印象。最后一句加强呼吁，简单的一句最后一句加强呼吁，简单的一句lets ride bicycles就能起到这个作就能起到这个作用。用。【模拟真题：提倡无偿献血模拟真题：提倡无偿献血】作文原题作文原题假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血（书，提倡无偿献血（donate blood for free）。）。要点提示：要点提示：1. 社会上对献血的错误认识；社会上对献血的错误认识； 2. 指出献血的意义；指出献血的意义； 3. 开展相关活动。开展相关活动。作文翻译作文翻译同学们，同学们， 最近，据报道，全国的一些血库供血短缺。最近，据报道，全国的一些血库供血短缺。 一些人持有错误的观点，认为献血会对捐献者的身体有害。但一些人持有错误的观点，认为献血会对捐献者的身体有害。但是事实是，当身体抽出少量的血，身体会很快作出调节，正常运作。是事实是，当身体抽出少量的血，身体会很快作出调节，正常运作。 我们都知道，献血非常重要。血对病人很重要，没有血很多病我们都知道，献血非常重要。血对病人很重要，没有血很多病人不能活下来。在我们这样的年轻人中，献血是一个社会责任。人不能活下来。在我们这样的年轻人中，献血是一个社会责任。 我们高中学生，对医学知识有更好的理解，应该为其他人树立我们高中学生，对医学知识有更好的理解，应该为其他人树立榜样。从现在开始，我们学校会举行一系列的活动来解释献血的好榜样。从现在开始，我们学校会举行一系列的活动来解释献血的好处。处。 现在就来献血，拯救生命。现在就来献血，拯救生命。学生会学生会 Boys and girls, Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be in short supply of blood.Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donors health. But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally. As we know, donating blood is of great importance. Blood is important to patients, without which many cant survive. Among young people like us, donating blood is a social responsibility. We senior high school students, who have a better understanding of medical knowledge, should set a good example for other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to explain the benefits of donating blood. Donate now and save a life! The Students Union【2007福建卷改编：活动报道福建卷改编：活动报道】假设你是李华，福建省某中学高三学生，请你根据以下学生会倡议假设你是李华，福建省某中学高三学生，请你根据以下学生会倡议书的内容给某英文报社写一封信，叙述拟开展活动的内容并发表自书的内容给某英文报社写一封信，叙述拟开展活动的内容并发表自己的看法。己的看法。参考词汇：参考词汇：增进增进promote；鼓励节约鼓励节约encourage economyDear editor, I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Fujian Province. .Yours sincerely,Li Hua【20072007福建卷改编：活动报道福建卷改编：活动报道】Dear editor, I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Fujian Province. In order that we can make the best of learning materials, the Students Union of our school is arranging an activity. We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades. The idea, which is intended to promote friendship and encourage economy, is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike. The activity will last about ten days, from June 10 to 20. As a student, I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【20132013安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通】假设你校英语社团正举办假设你校英语社团正举办以以“讲求文明，从我做起讲求文明，从我做起”为主为主题的征文活动，请你以题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”On the Way to School”为题，为题，写一篇英语短文。写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：内容主要包括：1. 1. 遵守交通法规；遵守交通法规；2. 2. 注意举止文明。注意举止文明。注意：短文的题目注意：短文的题目(On the Way to School)(On the Way to School)已为你拟好，已为你拟好，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。【20132013安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通】On the way to School These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school. I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, Ill always keep to the right and never run the red light. If I walk, Ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, Ill regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
展开阅读全文