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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,道歉信,道歉信,A Letter of Apology,【高中英语写作指导】高中英语作文-道歉信解析课件,道歉信文体概述(,Letter of apology),道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容:,1.,开门见山,表明写信目的,表示歉意。,2.,说明出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施。,3.,再次致歉,请求原谅,希望得到理解,(,语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实,),。,道歉信文体概述(Letter of apology),常用语块,因某事向某人道歉,_,2.,向,说对不起,_,3.,接受我的道歉,_,4.,为某事原谅某人,_,5.,并非故意做某事,_,have no intention to do sth.,apologize to sb.for sth./make an apology to sb.for sth.,say sorry to,accept my apology,forgive sb.for sth.,常用语块 have no intention to do s,6.,弥补;赔偿,_,7.,赔偿;偿还,_,8.,给你带来不便,_,9.,给你带来许多麻烦,_,10.,更加小心,_,be more careful,make up for,pay for/compensate for,cause you inconvenience,cause you much trouble,6.弥补;赔偿 _,11.,犯这样愚蠢的错误,_,12.,应当受到责备,_,13.,承担责任,_,14.,难以接受的后果,_,15.,下不为例,_,never let it happen again,make such a stupid mistake,be to blame,be responsible for/shoulder/undertake the responsibility,an unacceptable result/consequence,11.犯这样愚蠢的错误 never let it happ,写作三步曲,写作三步曲,Step 1,:审题,养成重视审题的习惯。,思考的问题,样题分析,第几人称?(,person,),文章的题材是什么?,怎样安排信息点的顺序?,(order),动作是什么时候发生的?,(when),第一人称,一封道歉信,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,Step 1:审题思考的问题样题分析第几人称?(person,9,3.,提出补救办法,2.,说明具体原因,道歉信写作,4,步走,写信的一般要求,1.,内容要简单,对于题中所给的内容:全面,对于自己发挥的内容:简单,写熟悉的,会写的!,2.,结构要清晰,开头段:,中间段:,结尾段,:,3.,语言要精彩,:,4.,注意内容之间的连接,1.,表示歉意,总结提升,4.,再次致歉望理解,造句能力,+,高分套话,93.提出补救办法 2.说明具体原因道歉信写作4步走写信的一,10,Basic structure and expressions,第一段,:,简明说明写信目的,为自己的过失表示歉意,希望得到对方的谅解。,道歉的表达:,I feel sorry for my failure to,I am awfully sorry that I cannot,I am very sorry for,I am writing to express my sincere apology for my,5.I regret to inform you that I am unable to,6.I feel guilty for what I have done to you.,pick you up at the airport,attend your party.,my rudeness/thoughtlessness/bad manners.,10Basic structure and expressi,11,第二段:详细说明当时情况,解释原因,语气,要诚恳。,1.Now let me explain what happened to me that day.,2.I had intended to,3.I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.,4.I am to blame for this silly mistake.,5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.,6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.,11第二段:详细说明当时情况,解释原因,语气,12,第三段:提出补救方法,具体提出自己的想法,,希望能弥补过失,消除误会。,1.In order to remove our misunderstanding,I would like to invite.,2.To make up for my fault,I will,3.To compensate for your loss,I decide to.,4.I wish you could give me a chance to make up for my fault.,5.I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.,12第三段:提出补救方法,具体提出自己的想法,,13,第四段:再次表示歉意,愿意为此负责,希望,以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。,1.Please accept my most sincere apology again.,2.I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again.,3.I assure you that it will never happen again.,4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.,5.Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.,13第四段:再次表示歉意,愿意为此负责,希望,Step 3,:写作,Step 3:写作,15,道歉信模板一,Dear Bob,I am truly sorry that _,(道歉的原因),.,The reason is that_,(介绍的原因),.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,15,习作欣赏,Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully(很;糟糕地)sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read them every evening and intend to finish it,the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.,I promise to pay for the lost of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the missed book.,I apologize again for any inconveniences or,trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,习作欣赏,习作欣赏,Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.,The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.,I read them every evening and intend to finish it,the next week,but unfortunately yesterday until I,came back to my room,it was nowhere to be found.,I promise to pay for the lost of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame.I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(,赔偿,)for the missed book.,I apologize again for any inconveniences or,trouble caused by my careless.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,第一段:开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程,第二段:承诺弥补或赔偿及措施,第三段:再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误,习作欣赏第一段:开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第二段:承诺弥补,习作修改,(,做短文改错,),Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your l
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