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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,环境描写的技巧点睛,高中英语读后续写微技能指导,环境描写的技巧点睛高中英语读后续写微技能指导,1,On the day back to school,dark clouds hung low in the sky.The rain poured down,with,cold drops,and,angry winds,slap,ping,(,拍,;,掴,),my face.I was drowned,in floods of,warm tears and,freezing rain.,Functions of Natural Setting Description,渲染了忧伤的气氛,.,揭示了故事发生的背景,.,On the day back to school,dar,2,What can you see,smell,hear,touch or taste?,I see different colors,smell the blossoms,hear the birds singing,touch the rain and taste the air.,Spring,an artist from The Renaissance,paints our campus with richer and deeper colors.Golden sunshine,fragile greens and a sea of fragrant reds,crowd,into my eyes.Walking into the painting,I am totally drunk with the,twitter,ing,(,吱喳,),of birds.Soon the delicate air and soft raindrops melt my heart.Oh,Im lost in the masterpiece of Spring!,How to,Picture,a Natural Setting,？,What can you see,smell,hear,3,环境描写,，可以起到,融情与景,的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以让文章读起来有立体感和真实感。,写作思路：,第一步,，先尝试概括性描述（,总体描述,）。,第二步,，在概括描述的基础上增加,细节描述,，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。,I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky,the song of the birds,moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1),环境描写，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心,4,关于天气炎热的描写,用天热衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：,（热）；（融化）；（汗流浃背）；（热得吓人）,翻译练习：,1,）天气很闷热。（概括描写）,The weather was so hot.,This weather is terrible.,hot,；,melt,；,sweat like a pig,；,terrible,关于天气炎热的描写用天热衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：翻译,5,翻译练习（,细节描写,）：,2,）,天气很闷热，,我汗流浃背。,2,）天气很闷热，,一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。,2,）天气很闷热，,我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。,2)This weather is terrible,I am sweating like a pig.,2,）,The weather was so hot that there was no wind,and the thick air seemed to be frozen.,2,）,The weather was so hot that I can hardly breathe.I hope it will be cooler soon.,翻译练习（细节描写）：2)This weather is t,6,关于雨的描写,翻译练习：,1,）下起了大雨。（概括描写）,用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：,大暴雨,;,下倾盆大雨,;,被雨淋,1）,It was raining cats and dogs.,1）,There was a heavy downpour.,a heavy downpour 大暴雨,rain cats and dogs 下倾盆大雨,be caught in the rain 被雨淋,关于雨的描写翻译练习：用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：1,7,翻译练习,（,细节描写,）,：,2,）下起了大雨，,溪水上张，风吹着拍打着房子。,2,）,下起了大雨,，,我到家时全湿了。,2,）,It was raining cats and dogs.And,I was all wet when I got home.,2,）,It was raining cats and dogs,the streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house.,翻译练习（细节描写）：2）It was raining ca,8,The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs.,The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.,Spring breeze draws the curtain of clouds and the sunshine floods into the classrooms.,The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine,关于,sun,的描写,The sweetness of the sun fills,9,surrounding scenes,?,1.As,_,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）,he quickened his steps.,2._(,微风,)stroked his head,as if comforting all his tiredness.,the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed,The gentle breeze,3.From the distance,he saw _(,昏暗的灯光,)in the village.,some dim light,Para.1 He took the strawberries home,.(a sentence),Practice 1,surrounding scenes?1.As _,10,1.it was dark,.,(,增加细节描写,),The sun hid himself behind the mountains,making,it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.,Para 1,But no more,helicopters,came and it was getting dark again._,She had no choice but to stop for another night.,A gust of cold wind blew,and,she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug,.,Practice 2,1.it was dark.(增加细节描写)Th,11,1.It got dark,.,(,增加细节描写,),Para 2,We had no idea where we were and it got dark,._,Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared.At that moment,it,w,as completely dark except the faint light given out,by,a few stars in the sky,.,Practice 3,1.It got dark.(增加细节描写)Para 2,12,1.We,saw lots of great sights along the way,.,(,增加细节描写,),Para 2,We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way,.,_,Practice 4,The dark,rainy evening,the wind,the thundering clouds,held me entirely,in their power,.,Book1“Annes Best Friend”,I closed my eyes in the speeding car.,Winding rivers,lofty mountains,deep valleys,and,sunny beaches,held,me entirely in their fascination,.,1.We saw lots of great sights,13,续写段落，努力用上环境描写,Homework,续写段落，努力用上环境描写Homework,14,THANKS,THANKS,15,
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