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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,缺点：,1.,审题不清楚（直接写成了建议信模板）,2.,过渡不自然（中间段落）,3.,自我介绍那句话仍然不熟，导致出错,I am a student,，,who studying in,guangming national school.,4.,有一个同学分段，一点一段,5.,背的句子还是出现单词错误如,Here are my suggestions as follow.,Im writting this letter.,.,writting,写错,suggestions,没加,s,6.,缺,开头称呼结尾,7.,内容不够,建议：背好模板,灵活运用 仔细审题 写对单词句子 写满写漂亮,缺点：,(,周测一）范文：,Dear editor,，,（自我介绍）,I am Li Hua,a student studying in Guangming International School.,（写信背景,/,原因）,In order to respond to protecting teenagers eyesight,，,our school English newspaper plans to call for papers on this topic,，,which I am extremely interested in.,（写信目的）,so Im wrting to participate in this writing contest.,（与第三点保护视力的建议的过渡）,With the development of science and technology,，,nearsightedness is becoming more and more common and having a bad effect on peoples life,，,especially students at young age.,Therefore,，,the whole society are supposed to take action to protect teenagers eyesight.,（引出建议,123,）,To begin with,，,both local government and schools should pay more attention to our study burden.,(周测一）范文：,Besides,，,as students,，,its a good idea that we should take part in more outdoor activities,，,such as playing basketball,，,running and so on.,Last but not least,，,the most important thing is that we must cut down on screen time and get rid of addiction to computers or smartphones.,In a word,，,only in this way can we protect our eyesight and have a brighter future.,（总结）,I sincerely hope my essay can meet your qualifications exactly and I would appreciate it very much if you can adopt my article.,（结合实际的结尾）,Besides，as students，its a goo,广东一模拟作文,Dear editor,，,（自我介绍）,I am Li Hua,a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading the newspaper/journal called English Monthly set up by our School.,（写信背景,/,原因）,Knowing our school English newspaper plans to call for opinions,I am extremely interested in it.,（写信目的）,So Im writing to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper.,广东一模拟作文Dear editor，,该报的优点：,In my opinion,English Monthly has many advantages.,For one thing,its rich in,content,ranging from,economy to civilization.,F,or,another,its a guide to English learning.Through it,I can,have a good knowledge of,whats going,on at home and abroad,and Ive improved my English reading skills.,建议：,If only,you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column/section.,For example,you could introduce more Chinese festivals origins and stories about the festivals.,I hope my opinions can be of help to you.Here I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.,该报的优点：In my opinion,Engli,约稿信是指报纸，杂志，文化栏目等媒体邀请别人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容（约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容，也可以让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容），并且要约定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。,8.,约稿信,8.约稿信,step1,写作思路,第一段：邀请对方写稿件,(,或目的,),；,第二段：介绍栏目或媒体的特点和受众范围。,稿件内容，标题。,长度和交稿日期。,第三段：表达希望得到对方的回复。,约稿函,约稿函,1.,我想请你为,写一篇文章,_,2.,你可以写一些关于,_,3.,是很受欢迎的,_,_,4.,它刊登由,写的文章,_,5.,你能写点关于,吗？,_,I would like to ask you to write an article for.,You can write something about,is very popular among us students,It carries articles written by,常用语块,6.,我们会特别欢迎有关,的文章。,_,7.,你可以写与,相关的任何东西。,_,8.,约,120,个词就好。,_,9.,我们在,之前能收到你的文章吗？,_,10.,体育专栏,/,娱乐专栏,_,Would you please write something about,We would especially welcome articles about,You can write something relevant to,About 120 words would be fine.,11.,使某人了解,_,13.,请将文章发送至,._,An article within 400 words would be fine.,Could we have your article before?,sports column/entertainment column,make/help sb.know sth.about,please send your composition to,1.我想请你为写一篇文章 _,Practice,注意写作的思路框架,Practice,假定你是李华，你校英文报“,外国文化,”栏目拟刊登,美国节日风俗和中学生生活,的短文。请给美国朋友,Peter,写信约稿，要点如下：,1.,栏目介绍。,2.,稿件内容；,3.,稿件长度：约,400,词汇,4.,交稿日期：,4,月,2,日前天,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；,3.,开头语已为你写好。,约稿信：写作练习,1,假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟,写作练习,1,要点整合：,第一步：,邀请对方写稿件,(,目的,),；,*我想请你为我校英文报写一篇文章。,第二步：,介绍栏目或媒体的特点和受众范围。,*“外国文化”栏目,很受师生欢迎。,*它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章。,第三步：,稿件内容,长度和交稿日期。,你能写点,美国节日风俗方面,的东西吗？,我们特别欢迎,有关中学生生活,的文章。,顺便，约,400,个词就好。,我们能在,4,月,2,日前,收到你的文章吗？,第四步：,期待回复。,spend their holidays and festivals,，,the life of American high school students,写作练习 1 要点整合：第一步：邀请对方写稿件(目的)；,Dear Peter,I would like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.,The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of United States?And we would especially welcome articles about,how Americans spend their holidays and festivals and the everyday life of American senior high students?,You can write anything relevant so long as it is interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could I have your article before April 2nd?,I am looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,参考范文,1,Dear Peter,参考范文1,广东一模的词汇,1.staff 2.crew 3.emergency power supply 4.instead 5.make a big difference 6.immigrant 7.landmark,8.mainstr
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