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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing:describe a person,Writing:describe a person,Teaching aims:,To know some writing problems.,To master some writing skills.,Teaching aims:,Enjoy a composition and analyze why it can get high points.,Enjoy a composition and analyz,假设你是李明,现要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你好朋友李华的基本情况,.,短文应该包括下表所列全部内容,.,（可恰当增加内容）,姓名,:,李华 出生年月,:2000,年,2,月,出生地,:,罗定市,所在学校：罗定实验中学,课程：语文、数学、英语等等,特长：英语（上星期在英语竞赛,the English competition,中获第一名）,性格：乐于助人，与人相处融洽,Luoding Experimental Middle School,be willing to do sth.,乐于做某事,假设你是李明,现要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你好朋友李华,LiHua,who was born in Luoding in February 2000,is a popular student in Luoding Experimental Middle School.,She has long hair,with,big eyes.,The subjects,(which/that)he studies at school,are Chinese,math,English,and so on,.,In his spare time,he is fond of reading English.,Because of,his hard work,he,won the first prize,in the English competition last week.,Besides,he,is willing to,help his classmates,who are in trouble,.,So,all of them,get along well with,him,and regard,him,as,their good friend.What a perfect man he is,！,LiHua,who was,1.LiHua,who was born in Luoding in February 2000,is a popular student in Luoding Experimental Middle School.,2.,She has long hair,with,big eyes.,The subjects,(which/that)he studies at school,are Chinese,math,English,and so on,.,分析获得高分原因：,用了定语从句,who was born in Luoding in February 2000.,用了,with,结构和定语从句,1.LiHua,who was born in Luod,3.In his spare time,he is fond of reading English,.,Because of,his hard work,he,won the first prize,in the English competition last week.,4.Besides,he,is willing to,help his classmates,who are in trouble.,高级句型：,in ones spare time,be fond of,because of,连接词,besides,，短语,be willing to do sth.,定语从句,who are in trouble.,3.In his spare time,he is fo,5.So,all of them,get along well with,him well,and regard,him,as,their good friend.,6 What a perfect man he is.,连词,so.,高级句型,get along with,regard as,5.So all of them get along wel,写作高分,tips,1.,同位语,2.,并列句（,and,but.because),3.,复合句（状从，定从，名词性从句）,4.,强调句（,It is that/who),5.,倒装句（,Only+,状语；,Not only,句首）,6.,非谓语（,v-ing/v-ed/to do),7.With,结构,8.,高级短语,/,句型,(be regarded as/,It is+adj.+to do),9.,过渡语（,however/besides/in addition/besides),写作高分tips1.同位语,人物简介的一般,步骤,：,5.,评,估,(,evaluation),1.,概,况,(basic information,including age,birth-place,profession),2.,外,貌,性格,/,爱好,(appearance,，,hobby),3.,教,育,(education),4.,生,平,:(,big events in his or her life),人物简介的一般步骤：5.评估(evaluation)1.,人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing课件,Describe Liu Shishi,1.,概况：,2.,外貌性格,/,爱好：,3.,教育：,4.,生平：,5.,评估：,1987,年,3,月,10,日出生于北京，中国,女演员,。,北京舞蹈学院,(Beijing Dance Academy),，主修芭蕾,(ballet),主演多部电视剧（,drama,），在,2011,年主演步步惊心而闻名。,旅游，阅读，听音乐,中国大陆最受欢迎的女演员之一，是我的女神。,Describe Liu Shishi1.概况：1987年3,Lets play a game,Divide the class into 4 groups,and choose a picture and tell me your answers.,Lets play a game,2,3,4,5,1,23451,Basic information:,Liu Shishi,_ _ _ on March 10,1987 inBeijingChina,_ a popularChinese actress.,who was born,is,2 points,Basic information:who was born,appearance,hobby,She is slim _ long hair.In her _ time,she _ _ _ travelling,reading and listening to music.,with,spare,is fond of,3 points,appearance,hobby withspareis,Big events:,she,plays an important role,in many dramas.She _ _ _ _ her role as Ruoxi in the Chinese time-travel dramaScarlet Heart.,is best known for,2 points,Big events:is best known,Education:,Liu Shishi,_ _,Beijing Dance Academy,_ in ballet.,graduated from,majoring,4 points,Education:graduated frommajori,Evaluation:,many people _ _ _ her and _her,as,goddess in China.,speak highly of,regard/consider,4 points,Evaluation:speak highly of,Lets combine the sentences.,Lets combine the sentences.,Liu Shishi,who was born on March 10,1987 inBeijingChina,is a popularChinese actress.She is slim with long hair.,In her spare time,she is fond of travelling,reading and listening to music.,After graduating from Beijing Dance Academy majoring in ballet,she,plays an important role,in many dramas.She,is best known for,her role as Ruoxi in the Chinese time-travel dramaScarlet Heart.,From then on,she has become one of the most popular actresses in China.Believe it or not,many people,speak highly of,her and,regard,her,as,goddess in China.,Liu Shishi,who was born on,Now,correct the following sentences.,Liu Shishi,who was born on March 10,1987 inBeijingChina,a popularChinese actress.,She like travelling,read and listening to music.,she is one of the most popular actress in China.,is,reading,actresses,Now,correct the following sen,Homework:“My Favorite Singer/Actor/Actress”,Homework:“My Favorite Singer/,人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing课件,
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