英语读后续写课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/5/25,#,Continuation writing,Continuation writing,读后续写的,具体要求,提,供一段,350,词以内,的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（,150,词左右,），将其发展成一篇与给定材料,有逻辑衔接,、,情节和结构完整,的短文。,读后续写的具体要求 提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要,1,如何,构思续写的内容,Step 1,Read for,elements(,要素）,Step 2,Read for plots,（情节）,Step 3,Gather,ideas,Step 4,Make predictions,（预测）,1如何构思续写的内容 Step 1 Step 2 St,英语读后续写课件,4,Step 1,Read for elements,Step 1 Read for elements,5,when:,where:,who:,what:,why:,my mom,I,receptionist,between,spring and summer,on the road through the countryside,gave,flowers to nursing home,，,Leaving flowers for,someone makes mom feel good.,Tip1:,We,can,get,the main idea,with the help of_,.,broke down,5W,questions,when:my mom,I,receptionist,6,Step 2,Read for plots,Step 2 Read for plots,7,No garage,no passers-by,Read for,plots and feelings,writers,behaviors,writers feelings,ways,to express feelings,were driving,unhappy,impatient,annoyed,“,Do you know someone there?,”,curious,confused,“Did you leave your name?”,heard,the car,burst,worried,hopeless,somewhere between,spring,and summer,Suddenly,，,in the middle of nowhere,Before she started,the car,Not long after we,continued,driving,Suddenly,，,adj.,actions,dialogues,surroundings,times,cried,skimmed,looked,back,“What?,”,“What did you do with the,flowers,?,”,no garage,no passers-by,rebellious(,叛逆的）,.,drove to ask:,No garage,no passers-byRead f,8,Tip2:While writing,we can express our inner feelings by,adj,Actions,Dialogues,Surrounding,Simile(比喻),Tip2:While writing,we can ex,Beginning,Climax,Ending,always unhappy,curious,confused,misunderstanding,worried,hopeless,impatient,annoyed,Feeling analysis,development,?,The writer has_with his mom,BeginningClimaxEndingalways un,10,Step 3,Gather ideas,Step 3 Gather ideas,11,gather the ideas,信息整理：,genre(,体裁,),：,narration(,记叙文,),tense(,时态,),：,the past tense(,一般过去时,),main idea,原文,核心信息解读,：,Between,spring and summer,on the road through the countryside my mom gave flowers to a nursing home,because leaving flowers for others made her,feel good.,Unluckily,our car broke down.,gather the ideas信息整理：genre(体裁),12,Step,4,Make predictions,Step 4 Make predictions,13,Group talking,for the plot,developments,Para.1：,We,were worried about what could be done.,1.How,would the writer show,their,worries,?,2.Did anyone come to help them?Who?,feeling,3.How did the writer feel about being helped?,Tip3 The ending of Para1 should be connected with Para2,The car should have been repaired,Group talking for the plot dev,14,Various ways to express worries,adj.:,actions:,dialogues:,surroundings:,After what seemed to be ages,I,scratched my head,stamped my foot,and,walked back and forth hopelessly,.,“What if no one is willing to help us?Would we die from thirsty?”I murmured in a low voice.,The air,was,thick,and,the h,ot sun was,burning us,I stood there clumsily with nothing to do.,Deadly silence,swallowed the road thoroughly,leaving nothing but,hopelessness.,Worried and depressed,I was wandering along the road aimlessly.,simile:,比喻,I was walking back and forth,like an ant on a hot pan.,Various ways to express worri,15,Group talking,for the plot,developments,Para.1：,We,were worried about what could be done.,1.How,would the writer show,their,worries,?,2.Did anyone come to help them?Who?,feeling,the receptionist?,an old garage man?,a stranger?,relieved,thankful,hopeful,3.How did the writer feel about being helped?,Group talking for the plot dev,16,1.Seeing a flower shop,what would the writer do?,2.How would the writer feel?,3.How could para.2 be ended reasonably?,Para.2,：As we,drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.,buy some flowers to mom?,be given some flowers?,.,excited?,proud?,understanding?,Group talking for the plot developments,active or negative?,1.Seeing a flower shop,what,17,Tip,4,:,passage can be ended variously using,feeling ending,surrouning ending,meaningful ending,natural ending,Tip4:passage can be ended var,feeling ending:,J,ust at that moment,a ripple of(一阵)excitement began,to cross my face.,surrounding ending:,A pleasant breeze was blowing,making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.,meaningful ending:,What mom did reminded me of a famous saying:,Roses given,fragrance in hand.,natural ending:,We continued our travel with a sweet smile.,especially for the ending,feeling ending:Just at that mo,19,Para.1,：,We,were,worried,about what could be done.,After what seemed to be ages,under the hot burning son,I scratched my head,stamped,my,foot and walked back and forth hopelessly.,All of a sudden,one man with his hands waving at mom,came into our view,.“,He is the receptionist from the nursing home.”Mom explained to me.,“Why are you here?,”Mom asked,excitedly,.“I just intended to thank you for your flowers formally.”How lucky we were!What amazed me most was that he was a retired garage man,.,As a consequence,he,had our car repaired in a short while.,One possible version,Para.1：One possible version,20,Paragraph 2：As we drove along,a flo