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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,书面表达,A letter of giving advice,书面表达,1,一 Cross-question(审题)做到四确定,1体裁 _（记叙文？议论文）,2主导时态 _,3主导人称 第_人称（我？你？他？）,4 布局谋篇：_段 Para1_,Para2_,Para3_,一 Cross-question(审题)做到四确定,2,基本框架：,开头（,beginning,）,-,开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点,.(state your idea),主体,(body),-,对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议,(reasons and evidence),结尾,(ending),-,呼应开头，重申观点,(restate your opinion.),基本框架：,3,注意事项：,1,）,建议信要写出写信的,原因,，建议的,内容,，提出建议的,理由,，提出的,理由要入情入理,，语气一定要,礼貌当先,。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力,2,）,建议的,角度要多样化,，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。,3,）,符合英文信件的,基本格式,注意事项：,4,常用套语,A,建议信开头常用句式,(,照应材料,表明写作意图,),1,After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that,2,I am very glad to hear that you want to,3,I know you have trouble in,after reading your letter,4.I am writing to you for the purpose of-,5.I am writing to share some advice with you.,6.You have asked me for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.,7.You have asked me for my advice about English learning.,常用套语A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图),5,B.,表达建议（,body,）,1.first,，,firstly,，,secondly,then,，,after that,，,in the end,finally,Meanwhile,whats more,2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could,3.I would like to suggest/recommend that,4.If I were you,I would,5.You may consider doing,6.I would seem to me that you could,7.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.,8.I wonder if you have considered the following.,9.When it come to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can,B.表达建议（body）,6,C.,建议信结尾常用句式,1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.,2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions,/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.,3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.,4.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.,5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.,6.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,C.建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you w,7,注意衔接词使用,:,表先后次序：,First,second,third,.Finally,Firstly,secondly,，,eventually,to begin with/to start with,at last,last but not least,递进关系：,furthermore,；,moreover,；,not only.but also.,；,not.but.,；,besides,；,in other words,；,on the one hand.,，,on the other hand.,；,meanwhile,；,at the same time,；,注意衔接词使用:,8,写作模板,模板一：,Dear _,You have asked me for my advice about_(,问题,),，,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.,In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:,_(,建议内容,).,I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,写作模板模板一：,9,模板二：,Dear _(,对象,),，,I am writing to express my views concerning _(,问题,).My suggestions to deal with the problem are as follows.,First and for the most _(,建议,一,);,in addition_(,建议二,);whats more _(,建议三,).,I hope youll find these proposals useful.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,模板二：,10,纠错,1 语气错误,You must go to do some sports outdoors,such as playing football and so on.,2 从句错误,You can find a good friend can listen to you.,3 从句错误,If you do this,you will feel happy and forget something make you upset.,纠错,11,4 重复,As far as I am concerned,I think doing sports is good for you.,5 词汇错误,You could do some outdoors exercises.,6 成分,Be optimistic about life is very important.,4 重复,12,7 词性和语序,You can easy calm down yourself.,8 单词拼写错误,It also could be a good idear if you do some sports.,9 单词核心用法错误,It is a good way to make you relax.,10 that理解错误,I am sorry to hear that.It is not good to lose your temper.,7 词性和语序,13,阅读以下考场作文，并进行必要的润色改写。,Dear Jack:,I am sorry to hear that you are losing your temper recently.This seriously influences your normal life and study.Yes,it is bad.Dont worry.I give you some advice.,（1）,I think you can find a friend to listen to your problems.You will feel relaxed.（2）,I think you should go out to do sports like playing football.（3）,you must be optimistic about life.,If you do these,I am sure you will be happy again.I am waiting for you letter.,思考：1结构？2语言及符号？3可以得多少分？,阅读以下考场作文，并进行必要的润色改写。,14,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3.Form a passage and polish,书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step 1 List the ke,15,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading,点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性,2.Body,中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending,小结；呼应主题,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading,16,佳作欣赏,佳作欣赏,17,假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。,提示：1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。,2、关心同学、乐于助人。,3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。,4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。,5、（你的建议）,注意：1.词数130左右，信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不,18,Dear Lin Hao,Im glad to receive your letter.From your letter,I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school.The following are my suggestions.,First,you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people.You should also care about your schoolmates.If you are always ready to help them,they will understand you better.Second,it is important for you to be a good listener.That way,when people are with you,they will feel comfortable and happy.Finally,it is better
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