专题03写作指导HappyEducation延期不延学江苏2020高考英语书面表达模拟ppt课件讲评

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/4/11 Saturday,#,Happy Education,话题写作,Happy Education话题写作,1,热身训练：请用翻译下列句子。,老师、同学们我想死你们啦！,天天在家上网课，真没劲！,扬中人人爱护环境，病毒先生，这不是你想要来的地方！,终于要返校了，真没劲。,5.,你在学习上的进步就是我的幸福！,专题03写作指导HappyEducation延期不延学江苏2020高考英语书面表达模拟ppt课件讲评,2,快开学啦，我想死老师和同学们啦！,中式：,Quick to start school.I miss teachers and classmates.,改为：,The new semester is drawing/coming.I miss all of my teachers and classmates very much.,这样写效果会更好：,I am desperately looking forward to seeing my teachers and classmates again at the beginning of school.,Or:,School starts again!How I miss all of my classmates and teachers!,快开学啦，我想死老师和同学们啦！中式：改为：The new,3,2.,天天在家上网课，真,没劲,！,(,遇到生涩的表达要学会转化）,有些同学想都不想就写成下列中式英语：,Everyday have the Internet lessons at home,its bad.,汉语言不强调结构和词汇的变化，而英语则是结构语言，句与句之间要有适当的连接，不同的成分要使用不同的词性（强调词形变化）,将此句改为；,Its boring(for us)to have e-lessons at home every day.,再稍作调整则效果更好,How boring it is(for us)to have e-lessons every day,！,2.天天在家上网课，真没劲！(遇到生涩的表达要学会转化）有些,4,3.,扬中,人人,爱护,环境，病毒先生，这不是你想要来的地方！,Every native of Yangzhong,attaches,great importance to the protection of environment.Mr Coronavirus,this is the last place that you are eager to visit.,This is not where you want.(x),3.扬中人人爱护环境，病毒先生，这不是你想要来的地方！Eve,5,4.,终于要返校了，真没劲。,-Its time to return to school.Its a disappointing.,可适当连接：,How disappointing it is to return to school,！,Or:It is a wet blanket to return to school.,-,4.终于要返校了，真没劲。-Its time to,6,5.,你在学习上的进步就是我的幸福！,很多学生就会天马行空的写出非常中国味的英文句子！,You,progress,in study,is,my happy.,如果你心中有英语句型和词形的变化那你就不会写成这样的句子！,.,你在学习上的进步就是我的幸福,最简单的：,Your progress in study is my happiness.,（跟汉语语序有点相似）,更好的：,The progress you have made in study means that I am happy.,Or:If you make progress in study,happiness,will come into my mind.,5.你在学习上的进步就是我的幸福！很多学生就会天马行空的,7,China has historically placed a high value on children,s education.Due to the country,s,vast population and the limited resources of elite(,出类拔萃的,)scho,ols,not only is there,fierce competition,in entrance exams,but there are also top colleges putting students,unique abilities,such as performances in science competitions,writing abilities,oral skills,musical talents,and achievements in dance,under the microscope(,显微镜,).The cruel competition has been blamed by those who feel that it occupies children,s free time and places too much stress on performance under test conditions.,Against this background,many primary and secondary schools in China have begun to promote the so-called,“,happy education,”,trying to reduce students,burden in school.,However,in these schools,there exists an obvious paradox(,自相矛盾,).On the one hand,the official education system is attempting to reduce the burden of schoolwork on students.On the other hand,more and more time students spend outside the classroom is being devoted to educational training organizations.Many students are almost taking part in every kind of competition,from nationwide tournaments like the International Mathematical Olympiad to all manner of local competitions.,So is this,“,happy education,”,practical or just failing the students?,【,写作内容,】,1.,用约,30,个单词写出上文概要；,2.,用约,120,个单词阐述你,对,“,快乐教育,”,的看法，并以你自身为例谈谈如何平衡校内外的学习活动，,从而达到最佳的学习效果,。,【,写作要求,】,1.,写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；,2.,作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；,3.,不必写标题。,【,评分标准,】,内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,China has historically placed,8,Part I How to write a summary,Step 1:Scan the passage and try to main idea of it.Meanwhile,underline the key sentences.,Due to the country,s,vast population and the limited resources of elite(,出类拔萃的,)scho,ols,not only is there,fierce competition,in entrance exams,but there are also top colleges putting students,unique abilities,such as performances in science competitions,writing abilities,oral skills,musical talents,and achievements in dance,under the microscope(,显微镜,).,Key points,Detailed information,Conclusion:We should keep key points and omit detailed information,Part I How to write a summaryS,9,.,Against this background,many primary and secondary schools in China,have begun to promote the so-called,“,happy education,”,trying to reduce students,burden in school.However,in these schools,there exists an obvious paradox(,自相矛盾,).,On the one hand,the official education system is attempting to reduce the burden of schoolwork on students.On the other hand,more and more time students spend outside the classroom is being devoted to educational training organizations.Many students are almost taking part in every kind of competition,from nationwide tournaments like the International Mathematical Olympiad to all manner of local competitions,.,So is this,“,happy education,”,practical or just failing the students?,Key points,Detailed information,.Against this background,man,10,Step 2:Try to paraphrase the key points in English.,vast population and the limited resources of elite(,出类拔萃的,)scho,ols,not only is there,fierce competition,in entrance exams,but there are also top colleges putting students,unique abilities,China,s large population and,fewer top schools,mean more fierce competitions and,individual compete