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01四步法审题审体裁：明确原文的体裁，从而明确续写的体裁审时态：确定原文的时态，从而明确续写的时态审原文本大意：找出原文本中的六要素(who, when, where, what, how, why)，了解大意。审所给提示语：仔细研读给的提示语02三步法解题第一步：理已知信息：主要人物之间的关系、主要人物的性格特点、故事发生的背景和线索等第二步：判未知走向，分析描写人物的形容词、人物发出的动作、文中的对话等第三步：斟词酌句，连句成文续写内容与所给段落提示语衔接自然；充分利用储备的语言知识，根据内容需要慎重选择词汇、语块和句式,尽量使用高级句式，使表达富有感染力；续写第二段应该对故事所蕴含的主题进行提炼和升华，以达到画龙点睛之效。03常用高级句式下面列出了读后续写中常用的句式结构，倘若灵活、恰当地加以运用，文章一定会锦上添花。句式1：句式分词短语作状语Having slept so poorly, Lucy was not ready for the day at allLucy.没有睡好觉，根本没有准备好迎接这一天。句式2：形容词(短语)作状语Excited and moved, he followed the sound and went out for help.他又激动又感动,顺着声音出去求助。句式3：with复合结构The house caught fire last night,with nothing left init.那座房子昨晚着火了，里面什么。句式4：独立主格结构The boy rushed to the old mans house,his face covered with sweat.男孩冲到那位老人的家，满脸是汗。句式5：强调句It was the whole situation that made her very depressed and upset.正是整个情况让她感到非常沮丧和失望。句式6：倒装句Cold and tired though we were, the kids smiling faces cheered us up.虽然我们又冷又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。句式7：虚拟语气Five feet to the right, he would have fallen down to the bottom of the hole.往右五英尺，他就会掉到洞底。04高分万能结尾句助人结尾句1.Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge dfference.有时候一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。2. Sometimes, a small gesture of care will possibly melt peoples loneliness.有时候一个小小的关爱举动也可能融化人们内心的孤单。3. Helping others to realize their dreams gave me more pleasure.帮助别人实现他们的梦想让我感觉更快乐。4. This kind act has a lasting infuence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible, even somany years later.这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。即使多年以后,我也总是尽可能地帮助别人。5. She felt warmth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner.她在寒冷的日子里感受到了温暖,相信每个角落都有善意。6.Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。感动感悟结尾句Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society.This is because giving is the source of happiness.无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。这是因为给予是幸福的源泉。脱险结尾句That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it. It turns out that theres always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，没有什么能够抹去它。事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境成长改变结尾句1.学习知识促“改变Its never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。2.发挥天赋促“改变”Actually, each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with. As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest, and also make efforts, we can create miracles in the end.事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不同的天赋，只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹 。3.追逐梦想促“改变”Its never too late to pursue your dream. As long as you seize every opportunity and take full advantage of it, and also make every effort, you are sure to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住并充分利用机会，加上努力，你就一定会实现梦想。4.克服困难促“改变”The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and hardships. We should be brave to face them. As long as we dont give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。5.战胜恐惧促“改变”Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear,build your confidence and reach your goal.战胜恐惧、建立自信和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。6.战胜自卑促“改变”I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like, because I have come to realize that it is your personality that decides who you really are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性.7.战胜消极促“改变”Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.对我们来说，态度比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去，我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。人生哲理1.1 is never too late to learm.活到老,学到老。2. Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。3. From small beginnings come great things.伟大始于渺小。4. The world makes way for the dreamer.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。5. Each man is the architect of his own fate.每个人都是自已命运的建筑师。6. We should enjoy every moment and never escape challenges.我们应该享受每一刻，永远不要逃避挑战。7. Dont take peoples concern for granted. No matter how much they love you, people get tiredeventually.不要把别人的关心当成理所当然。不管他们有多爱你,最终也会有疲惫的一天。8. He was delighted that it helped him realize onerequires more patience in anytask beingaccomplished.他很高兴,这帮助他认识到一个人在完成任何任务时都需要更多的耐心。9. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not cometrue in one or two days, but it will someday.只要你有梦想,就去追求,不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现,但总有一天会实现的。
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