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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Why do Western women seldom marry Chinese men?,1.Chinese men are shy.,2.Chinese boys are spoiled.,3.Chinese men are racially insecure,especially when compared to Caucasians.,kken,4.Chinese men are traditional.,Why do Western women seldom ma,1,5.Chinese men cannot speak English well.,6.Chinese men love to save money.,Chinese people are inclined to save to buy a house.Foreign guys will spend most of what they earn and will go for top clothing brands or eat at fancy restaurants.That difference is huge in terms of romance.,7.Chinese boys are too busy studying and men are too busy working.,8.Chinese guys are relatively less social and out-going.,5.Chinese men cannot speak En,2,The Clinic of,sentence making,英语句子常见错误课件,3,Typical problems of spoken English常见的英语口语问题:,l Grammatically wrong;,l Poor pronunciation and intonation;,l Chinese English(Chinglish);,l Lack of vocabulary;,l Lack of fluency.,Typical problems of spoken Eng,4,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his,father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose,a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!,They put them in the corner of the sitting,room.Jim was covered it with a lot of,Christmas light.The sitting room looked,really beautifully at the moment.There was,a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas,tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and his,parents singing and dancing happily.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,At Christmas Eve,Jim went wit,5,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his,1._,father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose,2._,a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!,3._,They put them in the corner of the sitting,4._,_,on,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格,细领悟,At Christmas Eve,Jim went wit,6,room.Kate was covered it with a lot of,5._,Christmas light.The sitting room looked,6._,really beautifully at the moment.There was,7._,a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas,8._,tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and his,9._,parents singing and dancing happily.,10._,was,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词须关注,room.Kate was covered it with,7,英语,句子,常见错误与分析,英语句子常见错误与分析,8,一、不一致,Disagreements,所谓不一致,不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等,Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.,剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致,改为:,Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants to.,一、不一致 Disagreements所谓不一致,不光指,9,二、修饰语错位,MisplacedModifiers,英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解,IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.,分析:,better,位置不当,应置于句末,二、修饰语错位 MisplacedModifiers,10,三句子不完整,SentenceFragments,在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,又想加些补充说明时发生,Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.Forexample,byTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.,剖析:,“,forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.,”,不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句,改为:,Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio andnewspaper.,三句子不完整 SentenceFragments 在口,11,四悬垂修饰语,DanglingModifiers,所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清,例1:,Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.,这句中,“attheageoften”,只点出十岁时,但没有说明“谁”十岁时按一般推理不可能是,mygrandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了,改为,:WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.,例2,Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.,句中不定式短语,“todowellincollege”,的逻辑主语不清楚,改为:,Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.,四悬垂修饰语 DanglingModifiers 所,12,五词性误用,MisuseofPartsofSpeech,“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等,Nobodycannegativetheimportanceofmoney.,剖析:negative系形容词,误作动词。,改为:,Nobodycandenytheimportanceofmoney.,五词性误用 MisuseofPartsofSpe,13,六、指代不清,AmbiguousReferenceofPronouns,指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。,Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。,改为:,Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.,六、指代不清 AmbiguousReferenceof,14,七不间断句子,Run-onSentences,There are many ways we get to know the outside world.,剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整意思,Therearemanyways.,Wegettoknowtheoutsideworld.,简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。,改为:,Therearemanywaysforustolearnabout,theoutsideworld.,七不间断句子 Run-onSentencesThere,15,八措词毛病,TroublesinDiction,Diction,是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题,作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。,Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsomakespollution.,(,农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。,),The increasing useofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution.,八措词毛病 TroublesinDictionDic,16,九累赘,Redundancy,语,言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:,Inspiteofthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.,本句的,“thefactthatheislazy”,系同位语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”的规则,改为:,Inspiteofhislaziness,Ilikehim.,九累赘 Redundancy语言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一,17,十不连贯,Incoherence,不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是学生常犯的毛病。,Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.,剖析,:,Thefreshwater,与逗号后的,it,不连贯。,It,与,things,在数方面不一致。,改为:,Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.,十不连贯 Incoherence不连贯是指一个句子前言不,18,十一综合性语言错误,ComprehensiveMisusage,所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述十种错误以外,还有诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误。,Today,Moneytoeverybodyisveryimportance,ourseat,cloth,live,go,et
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