主题句与扩展句

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Topic sentence:,(,主题句,),Developing sentence:,(,扩展句,),Topic sentence&developing sentence,段首，引领段落,围绕主题句展开,不得偏离主题句,Aims of the class,：,认识主题句和扩展句,明确主题句和扩展句的关系,学会在读写任务写作中运用主题句和扩展句,Topic Sentence&,Developing Sentences,The passage is about a 17-year-old student named Logan,Koshenka,.He liked to make money on his own and met with one failure after another,but finally he has become successful and gains a handsome income.,After reading the story,I am greatly touched by Logan.As a student,its hard to be economically independent,but he made it by never giving up and trying over and over again.,This reminds me of my experience of making money.Last summer holiday,my neighbor was about to have a one-month trip and wanted to hire someone to look after her dog.I took the job.I not only earned some pocket money,but also had a good time with my neighbors dog.That was the first sum of money I had ever made.,But in fact,I do not agree on students making money.I do believe that students first and most important task is to study.Without learning,one will not find a good job.So students should focus more on,learing,rather than on making money,for the reason that knowledge can benefit us much more than money.,Task,Please,underline the topic sentences of,paragraphy,2-4:,Developing,Sentences,（围绕主题句，不得偏离）,段首，引领段落,I took table tennis as my hobby for several reasons.The history of table tennis dates from the nineteenth century.It can not only build up our bodies but also help us study more efficiently.In the meantime,table tennis is an interesting sport in which we can relax ourselves and gain happiness.,Parents play an important role in our life.On the one hand,they teach us how to tell right from wrong and help us make progress in every field.On the other hand,they are willing to do everything for us without asking for anything in return.They work hard everyday from dawn till dark.,Task,Please underline the topic sentences and delete the irrelevant developing sentences of each paragraph:,reasons,role,1.As time goes by,more and more people consider that our earth is important.However,do you know our earth is our mother?Therefore,we should protect the environment.,2.Earth Day aims to improve our awareness of protecting the environment.It tells us the environment is becoming worse so we should protect the environment in no time.,Task,四区联考读写任务：,1,）世界地球日的设计意图：提高人们对地球环境的意识,topic,sentence=writing,requirement,no irrelevant sentence,Task Please write down the topic sentences:,1,）以你或他人的经历说明诚信的重要性,2,）与朋友分享的利弊,3,）你如何看待“行动胜于空谈”,It reminds me of my experience long ago.,Now I will share my own experience with you.,Sharing with friends has its own advantages and disadvantages.,Every coin has two sides.So does sharing.,As far as Im concerned,actions speak louder than words.,【,写作内容,】,1.,以约,30,个词概括以上短文内容。,2.,然后以,120,个词谈谈你的观点，并包括以下要点：,(1),现在的学生学习负担很重，压力也很大，可通过适量听音乐来缓解压力；,(2),举例说明音乐带给你或你同学的益处；,(3),呼吁中学生采用有效方式排解压力。,Task Please write a,paragraph according to information(2):,A,B,C,主题句,扩展句,句型结构,语言正确,Music,is of great benefit,not only to my life but also to my study.,After a week of study,I,look forward to good relaxation,in weekends.Music can satisfy me by easing my mind and comforting my body.In a meantime,as a Senior Three student,I,used to suffer from great pressure,which made me difficult to fall asleep.Luckily,my teacher advised me to,take listening to music as a way to relax myself,.,With the help of some peaceful music,I do feel in relief and sleep well now.,As my favorite hobby,music has indeed helped me a lot.,When Im,upset,by the tiring work,a piano sonata drives my bad mood away,gives me some rest and makes me energetic again.When Im,nervous,or,angry,a piece of Mozart calms me down.When Im,depressed,pop music cheers me up.And when Im all,alone,music is my best and loyal companion.,Topic sentence:,段首，引领段落,Developing sentences:,围绕主题句，不得偏离,