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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2012/7/28,#,TOEFL,WRITING,Skills .,Unity&,Coherence,托福写作技巧,-,整体性和连贯性,TOEFLUnity&Coherence,1,Unity,整体性,Topic,Topic Sentence,Supporting Sentence,Supporting Sentence,Example,Example,Toefl writing skills .,Unity 整体性TopicTopic Sentence,2,Unity,整体性,Independent Writing:,Do you agree or disagree that fast,food has bettered peoples life?,Toefl writing skills .,Unity 整体性Independent Writing:,3,反例,：,Food is an indispensible part of peoples life.Even the way of cooking could impact,Peoples physical health,and then influence their mental status.Based on the analysis on the real changes fast food has made to our life,it has obviously worsened the status of peoples living quality,.,Fast food weakens our body.,Fast food chain stores is booming everyday.A recent survey found that 70%of adults order fast food instead of cooking by themselves and 80%of teenagers choose fast food chain stores as their eating place.Another survey shows that McDonalds is becoming a huge business which worthes billions of dollars.More and more people choose fast food as their regular meal but their body is weakened.,Despite of physical unhealthy,with more and more people eating fast food outside,they barely have time spending with their family on dinner table.In this case,the bond between family members may be weakened day by day.,影响家庭关系不属于,速食影响生理健康,这一论点,速食很流行证明不了,速食影响身体健康,反例：影响家庭关系不属于速食很流行证明不了,4,On the contrary,fast food sometimes make our life easier.,For example,I have a meeting at 12 oclock sharp but I still havent finish my presentation.Such a tight deadline makes me decided to order take-away food for lunch so that I could spare more time for the presentation.Instead of spending time going to a decent restaurant and wasting time for each course serve,I could finish my presentation in my office,and at the same time finish my lunch.,Fast food saves time and offers convenience.,Fast food changed our life,speeding up the pace of life and make it easy.,However,as I have stated,too much fast food may weaken our physical health.Thus,even if it is convenient,people should eat less fast food.,与主论题相悖,偏离主题,On the contrary,fast food som,5,正例：,Food is an indispensible part of peoples life.Even the way of cooking could impact,Peoples physical health,and then influence their mental status.Based on the analysis on the real changes fast food has made to our life,it has obviously worsened the status of peoples living quality,.,Fast food weakens our body.,Fast food chain stores is booming everyday.Time-saving and energy saving make them first choices for people with busy schedules.Special flavor and multiple choices make them popular among teenagers.,However,a recent survey investigated the health status of selected groups of adults and teenagers who eat fast food,surprisingly finding that of the adults are troubled by stomach problems and half of the teenagers show the sign of prematurity.,In fact,fast food contains rather high degree of protein,fat and calorie.Since those substances keep cells growing faster and faster,the body will be overwhelmed and gradually give signs of sickness.,速食流行,受到速食不良影响,产生影响的原因,正例：速食流行受到速食不良影响产生影响的原因,6,In addition,fast food minishes bond with family.,I remember how many time my mom called me when I work late,telling me that she cooked my favorite and asking me whether I could come home for dinner.However,I disappointed her by saying that I had already ordered fast food.When it comes to the morning,instead of eating the tasty toast mom prepared for me,I go out in a hurry saying that I will grab a hotdog on my way,.It makes my mom feel like I need fast food store rather than a mother.Also,I could sense how little time I spent with my family on dinner table.,Fast food might make my life easier,but on a larger extent,it weakened the bond between my family and me.,Fast food do have its attractions,however,I still hold that it surely hasnt bettered our life.,It makes people sick and ignore accompany with family.Thus people should actually avoid fast food as possible as s/he can.,详细的亲身例证,例证的影响,产生影响的原因,总结共性 强调主题,In addition,fast food minishe,7,Topic Sentence,Supporting Sentence,Supporting Sentence,Example,Example,Toefl writing skills .,Coherence,连贯,性,Topic Sentence Supporting Sent,8,Coherence,连贯,性,Toefl writing skills .,连接,词和,词组,固定句型,简单句复合句,Coherence 连贯性Toefl writing,9,Coherence,连贯,性,Toefl writing skills .,连接词和词组,表示罗列增加,First,second,third,First,then/next,after that/next,finally,For one thing,for another,on,(the)one hand,on the other hand,besides/whats,more/in addition/furthermore/moreover,/,another/also,especially,/In,particular,Coherence 连贯性Toefl writing,10,表示因果关系,because,because of,since,now that,as,thanks to,due to,therefore,as a result(of),otherwise,so,that,such,that,表示让步关系,though,although,as,even if,even though,whether,or,however,whoever,whatever,whichever,wherever,whenever,no matter how(who,what,which,where,when,whom,),Coherence,连贯,性,Toefl writing skills .,表示因果关系because,because of,11,Cohere
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