-人教版[整理]书面表达指导教学课件

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,-人教版整理书面表达指导,46、法律有权打破平静。马格林,47、在一千磅法律里，没有一盎司仁爱。英国,48、法律一多，公正就少。托富勒,49、犯罪总是以惩罚相补偿；只有处罚才能使犯罪得到偿还。达雷尔,50、弱者比强者更能得到法律的保护。威厄尔,-人教版整理书面表达指导-人教版整理书面表达指导46、法律有权打破平静。马格林,47、在一千磅法律里，没有一盎司仁爱。英国,48、法律一多，公正就少。托富勒,49、犯罪总是以惩罚相补偿；只有处罚才能使犯罪得到偿还。达雷尔,50、弱者比强者更能得到法律的保护。威厄尔高 考 英 语,书 面 表 达 讲 座,2009.3高考英语书面表达讲座 专家指出:1999年到2003年,英语试卷的信度和效度在各门学科中都是最高的。但2003年高考英语（全国卷）的书面表达试题偏容易，区分度也不太明显，今年高考英语书面表达方面的难度将有所增加。,英语书面表达的解题要领（二）,把握时态 语言得当,正确使用动词的时态、语态是书面表达的重点。,在高考阅卷中，对时态、语态的错误扣分是很重的！,尽量多用习语,忌用中式英语,常见错误举例分析,一、动词错误,There were hundreds of students couldnt go to school because they were poor.,He wouldnt able to work out the problem.,He managed to swim across the river,but failed.,Wei Fang fell from the tree and her leg hurt.,He was put into prison for three years in his thirties though he hasnt done anything wrong.,Ive delayed to return you the book English Usage,which you borrowed me two days before.,常见错误举例分析(续),二、中式英语,He cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary.,Recently our village has taken place great changes.,The factory broke out a big fire last Sunday.,Mr Li praised Li Pings rapid progress in English study.,Chinese population is many,but your friends are few.,I was very difficult to refuse and had to receive her invitation.,常见错误举例分析（续）,三、结构错误,Being a young man,he worked in a bank and a newspaper.,He wrote about 300 stories,some of them had been translated into Chinese.,Well organize to visit Dafeng Milu Deer Centre this Saturday morning,November 27.,Well invite American students,our English teachers and students from other classes to take part in our party.,Each year many people die and are hurt on road accidents.,We should teach children dont play and ride bikes on the road.,While riding a bike,keep the right of the road.,英语书面表达的解题要领（三）,紧扣要点 条理清楚,可先在认真审题的基础上尽量用英语列,出提纲。这样就不容易遗漏要点。,叙述时，我们一般地可按照揭示语的先,后，参照时间、事件、图画逐一叙述(如句,式需要，也可适当调整语序)，就比较容易,地达到“条理清楚”的要求。,英语书面表达的解题要领（四）,连贯流畅 书写规范,确当地使用关联词语，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅，例如：,句子连贯的相互关系举例,He was interested in English,and,in maths,as well,.(,递进),Hurry up,or else,youll miss the last bus for the school.(转折),Wed like a single small house,whereas,they would rather live in a flat.(对比),Either,you must improve your work,or,Ill fire you.(选择),It must have been raining all night,for,all the roads are wet.(解释),There seemed to be no chances of success,therefore,all of them went away.(结果),To sum up,all your efforts will be highly paid.(总结),First of all,you should dig a hole;,secondly,put a young tree in it;,then,cover the tree with some earth and press it;,and fourthly and lastly,pour some water in it.(顺序),常用关联词语举例,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;,2.表示选择:or,eitheror;,3.表示转折:but,however,nevertheless（然而）,although,though,or else,otherwise,after all,by the way,incidentally（换言之）;,4.表示因果:because,as,since,for,for this reason,so,as a result,thus,hence,therefore,accordingly(因此);,5.表示条件:if so,unless,provided that（假如）on condition that（如若）;,6.表示对比:while,whereas,instead,notbut,on the contrary,on the one handon the other hand;,7.表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,e.g.,that is,that is to say,namely,viz,ie,in other words;,8.表示顺序:to begin with,for one thing,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,soon afterwards,since then,from then on,lastly,finally,in the end;,9.表示强调:also,besides,furthermore,moreover,whats more,certainly,actually,in fact,as a matter of fact;,10.表示结论:to sum up,in all,altogether,in a word,in short,generally speaking,as is known to all.,英语书面表达的解题要领（五）,注意文采 妙用结构,一、变化开头,A group of children with beautiful flowers in their hands were marching in front of the parade.,Marching in front of the parade were,a group of children with beautiful flowers in their hands.,二、,巧用构词法,He drove the car back out of the garage,then drove away with great speed.,He,backed,the car out of the garage and,sped,away.(转化法),Just like a bird in the sky,he could over look the whole city from the TV tower,which was 218 metres tall.,From the,218-metre-tall,tower,he could have,a birds-eye view,of the whole city.(合成法),英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）,注意文采 妙用结构,三、运用分词或介词结构,When she heard the news,she began to cry.,Hearing,the news,she,burst out crying,At,the news,she,burst into tears,.,The woman carried a baby in her arms and got on the bus.,With,/,Carrying,a baby in her arms,the woman,stepped onto,the bus.,Mr Smith was invited by Nanjing University,Mr Smith went to make a speech on DNA.,Invited by,Nanjing University,Mr Smith went to,give a lecture,on DNA.,At the invitation of,Nanjing University,Mr Smith went to,deliver a lecture,on DNA,英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）,注意文采 妙用结构,四、注意变化词语,When he was a child,Thomson was interested in maths,and when he grew up,he was very interested in computers.,As a child,Thomson,showed his strong interest,in maths,and when he grew up,computers,aroused his great curiosity.,英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）,注意文采 妙用结构,五、注意变化结构,There are,great changes that have happened here.,There is,a new cla