小学英语作文指导课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,小学英语作文指导,小学英语作文指导,1,一、作文类型：,1、看图作文,2、图表作文,3、书信或电子邮件,4、命题作文,不管是什么类型的作文都会提供一定的信息。如：文字说明、图画、图表、单词及短语等。我们都要正确处理好给出这些信息。同时还要理清用第几人称来写，按什么顺序来写，用什么时态来表达等。,一、作文类型：1、看图作文,2,二、开头句,1、Look at the picture/photo.,2、天气句(主语要学会用it 来表达),（1）Its sunny today.The sun is shining.Its very hot.,It will be sunny this weekend/tomorrow.,（2）Its rainy today.Its raining now.,（3）Its snowy today.Its snowing now.Its very cold.,（4）It was sunny,yesterday,/last weekend.,（5）It,will be,sunny tomorrow.,（6）It will rain/snow tomorrow.,3.I had a good time,last weekend,/,yesterday,.,二、开头句1、Look at the picture/pho,3,三、结尾句：,升华主题（表达的内容：感情句、感叹句、邀请句、看法句、问句等）,三、结尾句：升华主题（表达的内容：感情句、感叹句、邀请句,4,1.I,like,/love my father and mother very much.,2.What a beautiful,picture,!I like it very much.,3.How,nice,she is!I like her very much.,4.Do you want to go to Hainan with me?,5.,Lets,go to Hainan together.,6.,I think,we will have a great/good time.,7.,I think,I will have a good time,this weekend,.,8.,I think,I will be very happy,this summer holiday,.,7、We are having a great/good time.,8、Do you like me?,9.What do you want to do this weekend?,9.What will you do this weekend?,10.What did you do last weekend?,1.I like/love my father and m,5,四、正文句,1.能用简单句表达，也能用丰富句表达。,2.能正确表达时态。（四种时态）,3.能正确安排词序，时间放句末，地点又放时间的前面。,4.能用一些句型正确表达句子。,如：There be 句型介绍,This is句型介绍,I want to 动词原形句型,I like ing 动词句型等,四、正文句 1.能用简单句表达，也能用丰富句表达。,6,简单句,丰富句（加时间，加地点）,1、He played football.,He played football,yesterday,.,He played football,on the playground,yesterday.,2、She flew a kite.,She flew a kite,yesterday,.,She flew a kite,in the park,yesterday.,陈述句：主语动词（时态体现）（宾语）地点时间,简单句丰富句（加时间，加地点）陈述句：主语动词（时态体现,7,3、Lingling is flying a kite.,Lingling is flying a kite now.,Lingling is flying a kite in the park now.,4、Tom is reading a book.,Tom is reading a book now.,Tom is reading a book in the classroom now.,3、Lingling is flying a kite.,8,5、Lingling is going to fly a kite.,Lingling is going to fly a kite tomorrow.,Lingling is going to fly a kite in the park tomorrow.,Lingling will fly a kite.,Lingling will fly a kite tomorrow.,Lingling will fly a kite in the park tomorrow.,5、Lingling is going to fly a k,9,6、We are going to have a picnic.,We are going to have a picnic next Sunday.,We are going to have a picnic in the park next Sunday.,We will have a picnic.,We will have a picnic next Sunday.,We will have a picnic in the park next Sunday.,6、We are going to have a picni,10,7.I want to go to Hainan this Summer holiday.,Daming want,s,to go to Hainan this Summer holiday.,8.I ride my bike every day.,Tom rides his bike every day.,9.I read a book every morning.,She read,s,a book every morning.,We read book,s,every morning.,7.I want to go to Hainan this,11,8、There be 结构表达（它有There is 和There are）,There is 单数名词或不可数名词in/on/under/behind的地点短语,There are 复数名词in/on/under/behind的地点短语,There is a book on the desk.,There is some water in the bottle.,There are some books on the desk.,There is,a pen,two pencil and some books on the desk.,8、There be 结构表达（它有There is 和Th,12,五、内容安排,（内容顺序）,遵循几个原则：,看图作文（从上到下，从左到右）,再就是按照时间的先后顺序和动作的先后来写。,一天安排,一周安排,暑假安排,野餐活动安排，参加生日聚会，人物介绍等,五、内容安排（内容顺序）遵循几个原则：,13,六、人称确定与时态的表达,1、每写一篇作文，首先你要根据信息确定好用第一人称来写，还是用第三人称来写。,2、根据信息确定好用什么时态来表达。一般介绍性作文用,一般现在时,，谈论过去发生的事要用,一般过去时,，表达正在发生的事要用,现在进行时,，表达计划或打算要去做的事要用,一般将来时,。并且你所用的时态一定要正确体现出来。,六、人称确定与时态的表达1、每写一篇作文，首先你要根据信息确,14,七、信息处理,1、要正确分析所给出的信息。,2、给出的信息一般有文字信息，图画信息，单词和短语信息和表格中的单词和短语信息等，对于给出的单词，要灵活处理，学会变通使用。,3、根据这些信息确定好用第几人称来写，按什么顺序来写，同时确定好用什么时态来表达，并能正确写出所表达的时态结构，再就是要能用英语的表达习惯来写。如：时间、地点在句中的位置，at in on的区别及它们所组成的一系列短语等，要能正确地表达出来。,七、信息处理1、要正确分析所给出的信息。,15,八、关于时间的表达,要掌握好一些常见的时间短语。（,时间可放句首或句末,）,1、at时间短语:at eight oclock,at half pat eight,at 8:30,at the weekend,2、in时间短语:in 2017,in spring,in May,in the morning(afternoon/evening),3、on时间短语:on Sunday,on,Saturday,morning,on May 1st,on Childrens Day,4、yesterday时间短语:yesterday morning(afternoon/evening),5、last时间短语:last night,last month,last year,last week,last weekend,6、this时间短语:this morning(afternoon/evening),this weekend,this week,this month,this year,this summer holiday,this winter holiday,7、next时间短语:next week,next month,next year,8、tomorrow时间短语:tomorrow morning(afternoon/evening),八、关于时间的表达要掌握好一些常见的时间短语。（时间可放句首,16,九、关于地点的表达,要掌握好一些常见的地点短语。(,地点一般放句尾，但有时间时，则放于时间之前,。),1.in地点短语:in the classroom,in the park,in the river,in the sea,in the desk,in the library,2.on地点短语:on the desk,on the wall,on the floor,on the blackboard,on the lake,on the playground,3.at地点短语:at home,at school,at the zoo,at the supermarket,at the station,4.under地点短语:under the tree,5.behind地点短语:behind the door,九、关于地点的表达要掌握好一些常见的地点短语。(地点一般放句,17,本次英语作文信息分析：,1、首先弄清你以第几人称来写，是第一人称，还是第三人称。大明就是我，还是,大明是你的朋友或同学。根据给出的标题My weekend，,应该用第一人称来写,。,2、时间定位：是上周末，还是这个周末，这决定表达的时态。,last weekend 就用一般过去时来表达，,this weekend就用一般将来时来表达。,3、表中信息需要仔细分析，我们应该怎样用这些信息，有些需要变通来用。,如:reading books,，,它的原形是read books；do homework 可为do my homework,;,visit his grandparents可为visit my grandparents.,本次英语作文信息分析：,18,My weekend,(一),选择用一般将来时来表达作文,：,Hello,My name is Daming.,This weekend,is coming.It,wil