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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,12/29/2019,#,书面表达,话题写作（七）,情感表达篇,书面表达话题写作（七）情感表达篇,1,【话题点睛】,话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。,典例分析,2018,衢州模拟,假如你是张凯,以下是你的加拿大笔友,Tony,发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根据该邮件内容给,Tony,回复并提出你自己的观点。,【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,2,From,Tony,To,Zhang Kai,Subject,How to get on with parents,Content,Dear Zhang Kai,How is it going?I am unhappy recently.My problem is my parents.They never stop talking about how I should keep my room clean,study harder or wear proper clothes.They even make me eat an egg and drink milk every morning.None of my friends has such terrible parents.,What should I do?How should I get on with my parents?,Looking forward to your reply.,Best wishes!Yours,Tony,FromTonyToZhang KaiSubjectHow,3,要求,(1),请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥,;,(2),文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息,;,(3),词数,:90,110,。,_,要求,4,【思路点拨】,1.,要点提炼,:,通过,Tony,向朋友抱怨父母对自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,从而提出主题“怎样和父母相处,?,”。要注意围绕主题以及真情实感的表达。本文可从以下方面展开,:,(1),提出观点,:,肯定父母的做法并非恶意,甚至应感到是幸运的,;,(2),具体论述,:,父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因,;,(3),提出建议,:,要理解父母,并注意怎样和父母相处,;,(4),本文涉及提建议,注意,should,can,try to do,等词的使用。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时,3.,确定人称,:,第二人称,【思路点拨】,5,【写作架构】,【写作架构】,6,【基础写作】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,拥有这样的父母你很幸运。,(lucky),Its,for you,such good parents.,2.,你应该理解并且尊重你的父母。,(understand),You,and respect them.,3.,如果你有任何问题,要和你的父母交谈并且和他们分享你的想法。,(talk;share),you have any problems,just,your parents and,your ideas with them.,4.,他们让你吃鸡蛋是为了你能有一个强壮的体魄。,(make;so that),They,you eat eggs,you can have a,body.,5.,我希望你能和你的父母相处得好。,(get on well with),I,you can,your parents.,lucky,to have,should understand,If,talk with,share,make,so that,strong,hope,get on well with,【基础写作】luckyto haveshould under,7,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求完成句子。,),1.They want you to work harder.They hope you can get a good job in the future.(,用,because,改为复合句,),2.You dont want to do like this.You should have a talk with them.(,改为用,if,引导的复合句,),3.They dont allow me to go out alone at night.(,改为被动语态,),4.Your parents are not terrible.I think.(,改为宾语从句,),They want you to work harder because they hope you can get a good job in the future.,If you dont want to do like this,you should have a talk with them.,I am not allowed to go out alone at night.,I dont think your parents are terrible.,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)They want,8,【连句成文】,【连句成文】,9,From,Zhang Kai,To,Tony,Subject,How to get on with parents,Content,Hi,Tony,I think its lucky for you to have such good parents.You should understand and respect them,and try to do what they ask you to.They have richer life experience and want you to be better.As your parents,they surely hope you become an excellent person.Their advice is helpful for your future.,Dont you find your parents are caring about you in many ways?They want you to keep your room clean because they hope you can get into good habits and live comfortably.They ask you to work harder so that you can get a good job in the future.They make you eat an egg and drink milk every morning in order that you can keep healthy.A good body is good for study.As a teenager,we need a lot of energy,so its important to eat well.,FromZhang KaiToTonySubjectHow,10,From,Zhang Kai,To,Tony,Subject,How to get on with parents,Content,Whats more,every member should be responsible and do something for the family.So you should do what you can do,such as keeping your room clean and wearing proper clothes.,Anyway,if you have any problems,just talk with your parents and share your ideas with them.I hope you can get on well with your parents.,Best wishes!,Yours,Zhang Kai,FromZhang KaiToTonySubjectHow,11,拓展积累,【相关短语】,thanks for,因感谢,;make new friends,结交新朋友,;look after/take care of,照顾,;keep in touch,保持联系,;be friendly to,对友好,;bring back,带回,【参考谚语】,1.A smile makes you ten years younger.,笑一笑,十年少。,2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors.,悲喜常相伴。,3.Laughter is the best medicine.,笑是最好的药。,4.Worry kills more men than work.,忧虑比劳累更伤人。,拓展积累【相关短语】,12,【亮点句型】,学校的感受,1.Id like to thank you for giving me,unselfish love and help,.,2.You always,encouraged me to,study harder.,3.Although you,were,very,strict with,me,I understood what you said in the end.,4.Im so thankful to,you for your kind help,that,Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.,家庭的感受,1.,Id like to,show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years.,2.We should have good habits and,try our best to take exercise,every day.,3.Ill,spend,more,time,staying and communicating with you.,4.When I failed an exam and felt stressed,you were,the one to encourage me,.,【亮点句型】,13,实战演练,A,在你的生活或学习中,你认为快乐是什么,?,也许是拥有一位慈母、一位良师、一位挚友、一本好书、一只宠物、一个梦想珍惜眼前的快乐,快乐就在身边。请以“,Happiness Around Me,”为题,选取一个角度,用英语写一篇短文,以表达你的真情实感。,主要内容,(1)What is happiness in your opinion?,(2)As a student,how can you get happiness?Give an example or tell a story.,要求,(1),词数,:100,左右,;,(2),文中不得出现真实的学校名称和姓名,;,(3),语言力求准确,书写美观,卷面整洁。,Happiness Around Me,_,实战演练A,14,One,possible,version,:,Happiness Around Me,Happiness is different to different people.But it is important in our daily life.It is always around you if you put your heart into it.Most students think happiness is to ge
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