续写《林中莺歌课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,A Sweet Song,林中莺歌,A Sweet Song,1,读原文,Characters Plots,Ally;her father(dead);her mom,What happened to Allys father?,How did Ally feel?,What did Ally and her father used to do weekends?,What did Ally decide to do?,Her father died suddenly.,Creating Your Story 创意续写,Section I,读原文 Characters Plots Ally;her,2,2,）,How did,Ally feel?,She felt angry and very sad.,She missed her father very much.,It wasnt fair,Ally,thought,frowning,.,Ally,curled herself up,in her fathers favorite chair and,looked at his picture,on the bookcase.It was one of her favorite shots.Ally,smiled,.,“I miss you,Dad,”she said softly,.,Ally,leaned her head back and closed her eyes,letting her mind wander,.She,loved thinking about,the times that she and Dad had spent searching the woods for the little bird.,If only,I could get that good feeling back,she,thought,sighing,.,心理活动,+,面部表情,动作,+,语言,动作,+,心理活动,心理活动,+,动作,2）How did She felt angry and v,3,3What did Ally and her father used to do at weekends?,4,）,What did Ally decide to do?,They used,to search the woods for the special warbler,but without success.,She decided,to go to the woods alone and search for the wood special warbler.,Theme,Love between Father and Daughter.Try to cheer up when our beloved ones died.We can miss them but never drown ourselves in sorrow.,3What did Ally and her father,4,读划线关键词语,人物,Dad,事物,birds,pictures,warbler,the woods,camera,动作行为,search,believe,spot,描述性词语,favorite,Tips:,不改变所给词的词性和在句中的语意,动词可以变换时态或非谓语动词,-ing/done,名词可以改变单复数，但不能用所有格,s,读划线关键词语人物Dad 事物birds,pictures,5,读段首句,Paragraph 1:,Familiar smells of fresh earth rose up to greet her the moment Ally stepped into the woods.,Paragraph2:,All too soon the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds and Ally was about to go back home when suddenly,What did she see or hear in the woods?,How did she feel in the woods?(How to show her feelings),What did she do in the woods?,Did she find the warbler?Feeling?,beautiful scenery;birds flying or singing,relaxed/upset/miss her father,借景抒情,心理活动（回忆）,动作、表情、语言等,searched for the warbler,No.Disappointed.,读段首句Paragraph 1:What did she,6,读段首句,Paragraph2:,All too soon the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds and Ally was about to go back home when suddenly,What happened when she was about to go home?,Did she spot the warbler?,How did she feel?,What would she do if she saw the warbler?,Show the theme:,delighted/excited/cheer up,Description of the warbler(appearance,flying,singing.),原文参考：,a tiny bird,the color of a bright orange,with blue-gray wings and sharp black eyes,原文参考：,If only I could get that good feeling back,take pictures of the warbler,Attention,：不要神话动物,读段首句Paragraph2:What happened,7,Para 1:,Familiar smells of fresh earth rose up to greet her the moment Ally stepped into the woods.,Some things never change,Ally thought.,Quickening,her pace,she hurried to the rock by the stream where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch.She sat on it,with her face toward the sun.Overhead the sky was filled with,birds,whose sweet songs echoed throughout the,woods,.Ally felt content for the first time in a long while.She could almost hear her fathers laughter in the gentle breeze.“I know,Dad,will send the,warbler,to me.And I wont stop,searching,until I,spot,it,”she promised herself,settling comfortably,on the rock and waiting patiently.But without luck,the pretty bird didnt appear.,Possible Version,Para 1:Familiar smells of fre,8,Para 2:,All too soon the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds and Ally was about to go back home when suddenly,she heard a ringing birdsong and saw a flash of fiery orange,swooped(,俯冲,)down,and,perched(,栖息,),on a nearby branch.,An excited feeling bubbled up inside of Ally,.For a moment she couldnt,believe,her eyes,but it was true.The tiny wood warbler just sat there,looking around,as if it were waiting for something.“I knew it!”she,exclaimed,leaping to her feet,.Ally,blinked back tears,.“Thanks,Dad.Ill always miss our times together,but I feel better now,”she whispered,slowly lifting,her,camera,and,taking,pictures,.,Para 2:All too soon the sun d,9,Unit 1,A Sweet Song,林中莺歌,Unit 1,10,Comprehending(,怡情悦读,),Read the passage and answer the following questions in complete sentences.,1.When did Allys father die?Did she miss her father?Find evidence,to prove that.,Her father died last summer.She missed her father very much.,Comprehending(怡情悦读)Read the p,11,She missed her father very much.,She sank slowly into her fathers favorite chair and stared at,on his desk.,Ally,looked at her fathers picture on the bookcase.,Ally smiled.“I miss you,Dad,”she said softly.,After her mother left,Ally reached for the first photo album she and Dad had put together.,Ally smiled,remembering the excited look on his face,Ally leaned her head back and closed her eyes,letting her mind wander.She loved thinking about the times she and Dad,evidence,She missed her father very muc,12,2.What did Allys mother advise her to do?Why?,She advised Ally to go outside and ta