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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/10/29,#,Writing,中考作文指导,Writing 中考作文指导,1,Learning aims:,学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。,2.,能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3.,通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。,Learning aims:学会作文审题，根据所给要点构,2,中考英语写作评分标准,一档文（,17-20,分）,写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，,语言流畅，有句式变化，,有复杂结构，至少,2-3,个，,基本无语法错误，只有,1-2,个，,或有少量由于使用复杂结构,而引起的语法或拼写错误，,但不影响意义理解。,中考英语写作评分标准 一档文（17-20分）写出全部,3,英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是,10,句，很多考生的高分作文（,100,字左右）的句子数量都在,10,至,12,句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均,10-12,个单词计算，用,10-12,个句子便能完成一篇要求在,100,词左右的作文。其基本模式为：,十句作文法,英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高,4,第二段,（正文）,主题句,扩展句,（要视内容而决定扩,展句 的多少,并且加上关联词,）,扩展句,扩展句,扩展句,扩展句,第三段（结尾）,第一段（开头）,主题句,扩展句,结尾句,主题句,第二段主题句扩展句（要视内容而决,5,How,can we write a,good,composition(,作文,)?,How can we write a good compos,6,第一步：,都要,认真审题,，明确写作,体裁,、,要求,和提示,要点,How can we,write,a,good,composition?(Have a discussion!),具体做法：,用笔勾画,How can we write a good compos,7,假如你是李明，你的英国笔友,mike,给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。,Hello Li Ming,Im going to China as an exchange student this September.I will spend the,Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.What is a Mid-Autumn Festival?How do you celebrate it?What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?,Write soon.,假如你是李明，你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电子邮件，请认,8,假如你是李明，你的英国笔友,mike,给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。,Hello Li Ming,Im going to China as an exchange student this September.I will spend the,Mid-Autumn Festival,with a Chinese family.,What,is a Mid-Autumn Festival?,How do you celebrate it,?What,table manners,should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?,Write soon.,假如你是李明，你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电子邮件，请认,9,要求：,1.,表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；,2.,须回复所有问题,（问题,1,两点；问题,2,和问题,3,各三点）,，并适当发挥,3.,词数,100,词,左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总数）,4.,不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名。,要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；,10,第二步：,列出写作提纲（,Outline,）。,具体做法：,根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,第二步：具体做法：不要遗漏要点！,11,Write an,Outline,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,可以用英文或中文,September 15th,family members get together,have a big dinner,enjoy the full moon,guess the riddles,keep quite while eating or drinking,wait for the elder people to eat first,give gifts to important people,Write an OutlineIntroduction M,12,1)表层次:to begin with,then,finally;to start with,in addition,last but not least;,each/one coin has two sides.,On one hand.on the other hand,2)表转折；but,however,though,although,after all,in spite of，fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time,3)因果 thanks to,due to,for,since,owing to,as a result(of),hence,thus,4)例证 for example,for instance,such as,5)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb;affect;have an effect on sb.;,6)表示喜爱的：be fond of;be interested in;show great interest in;lose oneself in;put ones heart into;,7)总结 As I see,As for me,As we all know,in general,generally speaking,in a word,in brief,in conclusion,in short,in summary,to sum up,in my opinion,第三步：使用关联词,1)表层次:to begin with,then,fi,13,一、开头句型。,Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.,Itcanbesaidwithcertaintythat.,Astheproverbsays,Ithastobenoticedthat.,Itsgenerallyrecognizedthat.,Its likely that,What calls for special attention is that,Theres no denying the fact that,Nothing is more important than the fact that.,Whats far more important is that.,第四步：巧用经典句型,一、开头句型。Its likely that 第四步：巧用,14,二、结尾句型。,in my opinion,Therefore,we have the reason to believe that.,It may be safely said that.,As far as I am concerned/I can see/I know,It can be concluded from the discussion that,From my point of view,it would be better if,二、结尾句型。in my opinion,15,写作原则,一，主题句原则,most students like surfing the internet and watching TV.,on one hand,they can get a great deal of information and knowledge,that books cant provide,.,on the other hand,they can relax themselves well and communicate with classmates and strangers without going out.,写作原则一，主题句原则on one hand,they c,16,二、一，二，三原则,1）first,second,third,last,2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally,3）the first,the second,the third,the last,4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly,5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）,6）to start with,next,in addition,finally（强烈推荐）,7）first and foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）,8）most important of all,moreover,finally,9）on the one hand,on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）,10）for one thing,for another thing（适用于两点的情况）,二、一，二，三原则1）first,second,thir,17,三、多变句式原则,变形原则,1,：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！,普通级句型 Theenvironmentisbad.,比较级句型,Theenvironmentisgettingmuchworsethanbefore.,Theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse,.,最高级句型,Ihaveneverseentheworse environment.,三、多变句式原则变形原则1：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！,18,变形原则,2,：表达作用多用动名词句式,isawayto,阅读能帮助我放松自己。,Readingisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.,看电影能帮助我们学习英语。,WatchingmoviesisawonderfulwaytolearnEnglish.,变形原则2：表达作用多用动名词句式,19,变化原则,3,：make更有feel,Afterdoingsports,Ifeelrelaxed.,Itmakesmefeelrelaxedtodosports.,ImadeaprogressinEnglish.Ifeelproud.,ItmakesmefeelproudtomakeaprogressinEnglish.,变化原则3：make更有feel,20,变化原则,4,：喜欢不再like 用,be fond of,be crazy about,enjoy,等,I,amfondof,readingbooks.,Most boys,are crazy about,computer games.,变化原则4：喜欢不再like 用be fond of,be,21,变化原则,5,：凡是提出措施咱尽量不用should！,用“,be,suppose,d t
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