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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,writing,steps and skills,Binxian,No.1 middle school,Yuan,Xiuying,六步法,书面,表达,审,抓,扩,连,查,抄,examine,Key points,into sentences,into paragraphs,check,copy,假如你是张华，住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔友,Bob,来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封,email,。,Email,须包括下表中的内容：,Person:,first person,Style:email,Tense,：,present tense,An example,自然情况,位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住,成就,经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等,存在问恶,水、空气污染,交通拥挤,对哈尔滨发展的看法,内容由考生自定,注意：词数,100,左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：经济,economy,The style,Main person,Main tense,Think,about,审题,examining,key points,抓要点,假如你是张华，住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔友,Bob,来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封,email,。,Email,须包括下表中的内容：,An example,自然情况,位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住,成就,经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等,存在问恶,水、空气污染,交通拥挤,对哈尔滨发展的看法,内容由考生自定,注意：词数,100,左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：经济,economy,Be located/,stand;scenery;pleasant,to live,Develop,rapidly;build,Pollute;,traffic;heavy,In my opinion/As far as Im concerned,扩词成句,Expand key points to sentences,1.,位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住,Be located/,stand;scenery;pleasant,to live,2.,经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等,Develop,rapidly;build,It is located/stands on the Songhua River.,The scenery of the city is beautiful.,It is pleasant to live in.,Its economy develops rapidly.,Many,factories,houses,and roads have been built.,3.,水、空气污染,交通拥挤,Pollute;,traffic;heavy,4.,对哈尔滨发展的看法,In my opinion,/As far as Im concerned,Water and air are polluted.,The traffic is heavy in rush hours.,Your plan your hope your advice,连句成篇,The sentences into paragraphs,It is located/stands on the Songhua River.,The scenery of the city is beautiful.,It is pleasant to live in.,Its economy develops rapidly.,Many factories,houses and roads have been built.,Water and air are polluted.,The traffic is heavy in rush hours.,In my opinion,/As far as Im concerned,How to expand,sentences into,paragraphs?,Combine the sentences using good sentence structures,Add some information or transitional words,to make a good passage,Combine the sentences,using good sentence structures,书面表达,评分标准,“最高档”要求,应用了,较多的语法结构或词汇,；,语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力,使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,独立主格和分词结构,倒装句,强调句,各种从句,独立主格和分词结构,Advanced grammar(,高级语法结构,),Combine the sentences,using good sentence structures,一去,二看,三改,连词,主语是否一致,谓语动词,非谓语动词,When he was walking on the street,he met Mary.,If weather permits,we will go camping tomorrow.,Walking on the street,Weather permitting,状语从句变独立主格或分词,Because I am a student,Id like to know the price for students.,If such is the case,you should apologize to her.,Being a student,Such being the case,practice,常用倒装句,1.,否定词位于句首：,我们不会放弃,2.Only,短语或从句位于句首：,只有通过锻炼我们才能保持健康,只有努力学习你才能通过考试,Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.,Only if you study hard will you pass the exam,.,天空中繁星点点。,In the sky hang little stars.,Never will we give up.,3.,地点状语开头：,1.,强调谓语动词,：,可能的话，希望你能来。,强调句式,：,就是这个年轻人帮助了老奶奶。,他直到昨天才来这的。,强调句,I do hope you can come if possible.,It was this young boy,who(that,)helped the old granny.,It was not until yesterday,that he came here.,主,宾,表,同,各种从句,定语从句,状语从句,名词性从句,It is located on the Songhua River with,beautiful scenery so that it is pleasant to live in.,It is located/stands on the Songhua River.,The scenery of the city is beautiful.,It is pleasant to live in.,Located/standing on the Songhua River,the city is,pleasant to live in,whose scenery is so beautiful.,Have a try!,On the Songhua River stands the city,which is pleasant to live in with beautiful scenery.,2.,Its economy develops rapidly.,Many,factories,houses,and roads have been built.,(,With)Its,economy developing rapidly,many,factories,houses and roads have been built.,So rapidly does its economy develop that,many factories,houses and roads have been,built in the past few years.,Due to t,he fact that,its economy develops rapidly,many,factories,houses,and roads have been built.,3.,Water and air are polluted.,The traffic is heavy in rush hours,Water and air are so badly polluted and,meanwhile traffic is heavy in rush hours.,Water and air are badly polluted and,traffic is heavy in rush hours,which lead to,serious environmental problems.,So,badly,are water and air polluted,and,so heavy is traffic that people suffer a lot.,4.,In my opinion,/As far as,Imconcerned,(,对哈尔滨发展的看法,),time.,logical,relationshion,Develop the,passage,in order of,Ten days after that/Several days ago,Then,Later,To begin with,Besides /Whats more/In addition/Furthermore,/Moreover/Whats worse/Even worse,/Worse still/To make matters worse,/As a result/Therefore,Develop the passage by adding some,information or transitional words.,Please refer to,the,studentspage,恰当的过渡词,Proper,transitional,words,one possible version,Dear Bob,Its very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now Id,like to tell you something about my hometown,Harbin.,The city stands on the bank of Songhua River.It is,a beautiful place to live and its economy has been,developing rapidly,in the past ten years.,New,factories,houses and roads have been built.More,schools and hospitals are available for its people.,However,there are still some problems,