U3作文延展Howtowriteastory

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How can we write a good story?,Writing:,Check:Did you make the following mistakes in your story?,你审好题了吗？,1.,你的作文离题了吗？,2.,你有遗漏题目中给你的任何一个信息吗,？,你的句子写对了吗？,1.,你的句子时态用对了吗？,2.,你的短语结构用对了吗？,3.,你的句子是否完整了呢（主,+,谓,+,宾）？,你的文章是否流畅呢？,1.,你的故事逻辑是否理顺了呢？,2.,你的句子是否够简洁清晰呢？,你的书写是否整洁呢？,1.,你的文章是否没那么多改错点呢？,2.,你的字写得够漂亮整洁呢？,T/F,Last week,a exciting thing happen to near my home.,I/Me and my friend were going shopping.,A man behind us.,My friend was walking in the rode/on the street.,I saw a thief went after my friend.,I saw the man stole his purse.,an,happened to me,My friend and I went,went after/followed,on,in,go,steal,T/F,7.I quickly to on the other side of the road the telephone booth.Pick up the phone and call 110.,8.Then the thief were ran away.,9.Just at that moment,the police was there and catch the thief.,10.The police let me to the police office.,11.The thief held the purse and in handcuffs.,I hurried to the telephone booth on the other side of the road.Then I picked up the phone and called 110.,ran away,were/came,caught,Asked me to go to,held out,was,T/F,12.I helped my friend to find out the purse.,13.We find the purse at last.,14.My friend found out the purse at last.,15.We are very happy.,16.My friend was very exciting.,17.The thief stole my friends purse.And ran away.,18.The policemen returned the purse for my,good friend.,find,found,found,were,excited,and,to,How to write a good,story,?,When:,Who:,Where:,What:,Why:,How:,Emotion/Reflection(,一两句感受,):,Can you find name,conjunctions(,连接词,)?,Just at that moment;at the same time;as soon as possible;5 minutes later;a moment later;,last week,;first;then;later;after that;after a while;,at last;finally,;soon;in the end;while,during;,when,;,as soon as,;before,Last week,a theft took place near my house.A thief stole my friends purse when we walked around on the road.She was worried and I quickly rushed to the telephone booth on the other side of the road and called the police to report the theft.A moment later,the police came.With the help of the police,my friend finally found the purse.We were very excited about that.,