学会写段落主题句

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,如何写主题句,评分标准及解题要求,读写任务写作（,25,分）,概括（,5,分）,概括全面，表述清晰,写作内容（,20,分）,:,主题明确，内容丰富,五年来的写作内容,2,都是三个要点,三个要点最好依次用三个段落来写,每个段落前最好用一个主题句,这样做既不会漏掉要点,又层次清楚,能让阅卷老师一目了然,1,、举例说明中学生在日常安全方面应该注意的事项,.,As middle school students,we should gain some knowledge about safety.,To begin with,we should always obey the traffic rules.When we go to school or go home by bike,we should go along the right side and should not ride at a high speed.,Whats more,in order to avoid fire in our dormitory,we should not use any electric device without permission.,In addition,we should not climb the fence of the school in case that we might hurt ourselves,.,2,、叙述你在学习或生活上帮助别人或接受别人帮助的一次经历,.,It reminds me of my personal experience when I performed badly in my,maths,.It seemed that no matter how hard I tried,I still failed.Upset and disappointed,I fell ill and had to be in hospital for a couple of days.Having heard what had happened to me,Lily,my monitor,came to hospital,helping me with my schoolwork.With the help of Lily,surprisingly,I made fantastic progress in my final exam after 3 months.I felt really grateful for what she had done,.,如何写好主题句？,2.,表明立场,1.,回答要点,3.,重述要点,4.,总述原因,5.,引出建议、原因、,方法、措施、步骤等,6.,引出经历,.,直接回答要点,读完此文章后，你有何感想？,After reading this passage,I,find myself,lost in deep thought,.,写作要点是询问考生的,看法,时，对提问直接作出回答,。,常用词组,：,In my opinion/As for me/As far as I am concerned,模式,1,Task 1:,finish the following exercises.,1.,你心中的英雄是谁,?,The hero in my heart,is_.,2.,你愿意与人分享吗,?,Personally,_ to share with others.,3.,你看完这个故事的感受,。,After reading the story,_by Alan,whose behavior is worth praising,.,my Chinese teacher,I,am,too,willing,I,am,so,touched,你与你的朋友出现矛盾后给你的学习或生活带来的影响。,I felt sad and even couldnt concentrate on my study.,表明立场,Model:,你赞成早起还是晚起及理由,I totally,agree,with the idea to get up early in the morning.,明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。,模式,2.,Discuss the expressions of,supporting and objecting,表示支持或赞同的句型：,表示反对或不赞同的句型：,I,agree with,the statement that,I,am in favor of,I appreciate that,I,approve of,the idea that,I,believe,that,I,agree,with what the writer said/says,表示支持或赞同的句型：,I,disagree with,the idea that,I,am opposed to,the idea that,I,disapprove of,the idea that,In some way,I agree with,but,What the writer said sounds reasonable,but,表示反对或不赞同的句型：,表明立场,1.,你对中学生博客的态度。,As for myself,I _ student-blogging.,support,2.,你是否赞成推迟高中早上的上课时间,In my view,_with the idea to delay the opening of the school day of Senior School.,I cant agree more,Task 1:,finish the following exercises.,你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法,。,I am not in favor of,encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks.,重述要点,Model,：,道歉的作用,From the story I know that learning how to make a sincere apology is an important skill.,不直接回答写作要点，而是,翻译,要点作为段落主题句。,模式,3.,重述要点,1.,想家给学生或生活带来的影响,.,Being homesick _my life,.,2.,同学们对周末补课的不同看法,.,Students,_,on taking classes at weekends,.,3.,健康的生活方式的重要性,.,It,_,for us to,lead a healthy life,.,affected,have their own different opinions,is very important,Task 1:finish the following exercises.,重述要点,have a close relation/connection,play an important role/part,have a bad/good influence/effect,do harm to,词组积累,be different from,模式,3,.,中学生活和大学生活的差别,.,From my point of view,college life will be different from the life in high school.,总述原因,Model:,使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因,？,There are three reasons for,the changes that have taken place in our life.,模式,4.,总述原因,.,There are several reasons,that contribute to,.The reasons for this are,obvious,.,for reasons as follows,.,The reason why,is that,Useful expressions for reasons:,模式,4.,的原因显而易见,的原因有多种,的原因如下,句型提示,总述原因,模式,4,.,有些人不愿意主动道歉的原因,。,The reason why some people dont want to apologize actively is that,引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等,Model:,说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施,。,Luckily,more and more measures are being taken,to protect the environment,.,模式,5,.,常用句型,：,We,should take,some effective measures,.,We,should try,our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.,We,should solve,the problems that we are faced with,.,It is necessary that proper actions/steps,should be,taken,to end the phenomenon,.,引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等,模式,5,.,引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等,模式,5,.,如何道歉才能取得好的效果。,Here are three steps to making a good apology.,引出经历,简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。,It reminds me of my own experience when,用来引出记叙文的具体事例。,模式,6.,引出经历,1.,时间,地点和起因,【,讲述一次你与朋友出现矛盾的经历,】,Each pair of friends,may _ _,fighting,Li Xiao and I are no exception.,have the,experience of,Task 1:finish the following exercises.,引出经历,常用句型：,It reminds me of,the time,when,It reminds me of,an accident,which,happened several days ago.,After reading the story above,I recall,the experience of my friend who,The story above,reminds me of,one of my experiences,模式,6.,回答要点,段落主题句的模式,Conclusion,表明立场,重述要点,总述原因,引出建议、方法、措施、步骤,引出经历,Practice,Part 3,巩固练习,:,根据给出的要点写出主题句。,1.,你认为是否应该穿校服上学,。,2.,这个故事使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经历,。,3.,应该采取措施解决住房问题,。,4.,你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质,。,5.,简述你支持拆旧图书馆的理由,。,6.,分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊,。,表明立场,引出经历,引出建议,方法、措施,步骤,回答要点,总述原因,重述要点,1.,你认为是否应该穿校服上学,。,I approve of the requirement that students should wear school uniform on the campus,.,2.,这个故事使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经历,。,The sto