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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,议论文（观点对比型、各抒己见型）,观点对比型,1.,提纲式作文：按照表格或提示,言之有序,，老师是找点给分的。,2.,开放式作文：找到,最本质,的特征。,思维训练,模式：,a.listing;,b.reasoning;,c.brain storm.,作文常用关联词,表示时间关系：,first,second,then,finally/at last,in the end,soon,，,immediately,suddenly,at the same time,meanwhile,recently,表示对称顺序关系：,for one thing.for the other thing,on one hand,.on the other hand,，,above all,first of all,firstly,secondly,next,finally,，,the former.the latter,表示递进关系：,what is more,as well,moreover,besides,furthermore,in addition,，,whats worse,表示换一种方式表达：,in other words,that is to say,表示举例说明：,for example,like,such as,for instance,表示陈述事实：,in fact,actually,as a matter of fact,to tell you the truth,表示总结：,on the whole,in a word,to sum up,in short,in conclusion,from what I have said above,表示因果关系：,as a result,thus,therefore,so that,as,because,consequently,表示转折：,but,however,while,instead,although,different from,not only.but also,表达自己的观点：,in my opinion,personally,as far as I know,I believe,I think,as we all know,It is known to us all that.,范例,1,：假如你事实李华，你班同学最近开长了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点,比例,你的观点,观点,支持,反对,主要理由,应该明天进行体育锻炼做早操，打乒乓球，打篮球，但时间不要过锻炼能增强质减少疾病锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好,锻炼浪费时间锻炼使人疲劳锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习锻炼中可能受伤,1.,关键词语,体育锻炼,做早操,增强体质,减少疾病,休息,学习有效果,浪费时间,投入学习,受伤,take exercises,do morning exercises,build up the body,reduce the disease,have a rest,study more effectively,a waste of time,pay attention to study,be hurt,2.,作文结构,1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises.As we know,every coin,has two coins./Different students have different ideas.,2.55%of the students think.such as(,举例,).,（原因）,.,3.On the other hand,45%of the students believe.(,原因）,.,4.In my opinion,I prefer to,3.,范文：,Recently,we have had a discussion about,whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises.,As we know,every coin has two coins.,55%of the students think,they,should,take all kinds of exercises every day,such as,doing morning exercises,playing table tennis and playing basketball,but not spend too much time on them.,As a proverb says,”all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.,Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases.Sports let them have a good rest,so that,their study will be more effective.,On the other hand,45%of the students believe,taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring.,After,taking exercise,they are,too,excited for a long time,to,pay attention to their lessons.,And its possible to,be hurt in sports.,In my opinion,I,prefer to,take proper exercises in my spare time.,练习：“你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗？”请根据下面提供的信息写一偏短文，客观的介绍下讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点,比例,观点,上大学,无所谓,不上大学,理由,增长知识，提高素养，利于择业,成功的路不只一条,学费高，就业难,我的看法,关键词语：,widen knowledge,improve qualities,high tuition,senior students,关键句子：,of us consider it necessary to go to college,10%of students think it no use going to college,30%believe “All roads lead to Rome.”,范例,2,：,某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“,Young teachers or elderly teachers,，,which do you prefer?”,请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。,老年教师,青年教师,教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富,精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新,你的观点,?,注意：,1,词数,100,左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；,2,短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯,学生作品,1,：,Compare with,young teachers,I,prefer,elderly teachers,.There are some reasons below.,For one thing,most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching.,They,not only,spare no effort,to teach the students,but also,give classes carefully,.,They will,do all they can to make the students understand,the teaching,content.,What good teachers!For another thing,elderly teachers are full of teaching experience.,This is also the most important,especially for us senior students.,This is only my opinion.I think young teachers are also good,.,点评：,亮点：,1,、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用,比较灵活,2,、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。,2,、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。,1),2),3),1)Compared,2)more,3)try to make the classes,lively and interesting,不足之处：,1,、个别地方的表达需,要改进。,学生作品,2:,Opinions are divided on this question.,Some students,who like the elderly,teachers more than the young ones,think that,the elderly ones are more patient in teaching,more careful in explaining and also have a,lot of experience.,However,the others have a different,opinion.They think the teachers who are,young are full of energy.,Besides,their,teaching is lively and they dare to bring in,the new ideas.,Well,in my opinion,I like both the elderly,teachers and the young ones because from,them we both can learn a lot.,点评：,亮点：,1,、段落清楚，要点齐,全，句式表达比较灵,活，能适当运用复句。,2,、过渡词运用也比较,熟练。,需要改进的地方：,1,）,2),3),4),1)prefer the elderly,teachers to the,young ones,2)with explanations,3)the,去掉,4)The young,teachers,One possible version:,Opinions are divided on this question,.Some students may like elderly teachers teaching,because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they,tend to,be patient and careful with explanations.,However,I prefer to be taught,by young teachers.,Firstly,we students,have much in common with,them.,So,they are our friends,as well as,our teachers.,Secondly,they are more.,energe
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