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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing Tips,-review and practice,The beauty of writing,“Reading makes a full man;,conference a ready man;,and writing an _ man.”,-Francis Bacon,exact,阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。,-培根,A.structure,B.connectives,C.word choice,A wonderful,essay,D.sentence variety,How to write well,A.structure,Sample A-1,As you know,my predecessors crossed the Pacific Ocean at a time when such a long journey seemed hardly possible.Actually,they made it with the help of a fairly big boat and a few canoes carried on it.When they finally found the suitable living place near Lake Titicaca,there was few edible food.But they did manage to make conditions better by hunting wild animals and planting seeds brought from China.Without doubts,we could not witness the prosperity of the South America if they failed to conquer the difficulties and adapt to the unfamiliar environment.The reason why my ancestors left China is that he and his brother were being persecuted by the emperor of Shang Dynasty.They travelled to Peru in order to avoid being killed.,Sample A-2,Dear friends,You mentioned in the latest letter that you were,curious about my ancestors anecdotes.Well,as,for me,it was a pure adventure which Ill always,take pride in.,Driven by the itch to explore the world,they,were determined to set their foot on every square,inch of earth.However,when they finally,struggled their way to what is now called Peru,the,amazing scenery of Amazon jungle touched strings,of their hearts.So not surprisingly,they settled there,making their livings on hunting and planting.,So this is all about their story.I hope youll be,satisfied with it.,Compare sample A with B,which is clearer?,Sample B-1,The clouds are floating in the sky,and the sun is shining.What a wonderful day for the sports meeting!The students are all excited and happy.The competitors try their best to run their races.“Come on!Run faster!”some students shout.Others are busying writing articles to encourage their classmates.,Sample B-2,There is no doubt that the students enjoy the sports meeting which was held last week.On the one hand,they had an amazing opportunity to show their talent and abilities.On the other hand,everyone works together to achieve a common goal.What fun they had that day!,Compare paragraph A and B and pay special attention to the beginning and ending.,Whose meaning is clearer?,analysis,e.gs,thesis statement,(主题句）,restate the thesis,(重申,主题句,Structure of the essay,opening,body,conclusion,The following is an outline.Put it in order.,My opinions on the Social Practice,Nowadays,more and more high schools begin to organize students to take part in the social practice.It is a hot topic and,Id like to talk about my opinions,.,In a word,the social practice is a meaningful activity.,thesis statement,There is no doubt that,Im in favor of taking part in the social practice.,Providing a chance for students to apply what they have learnt is,another benefit,.,Enriching the students experience is,one of the important benefits,.,Tips for arranging the structure,To make your essay clearer,you should,Divide your essay into paragraphs.,Write a topic sentence for each paragraph,“thesis-body-conclusion”structure,B.Connectives,Observe the words in red,Titanic sailed for New York on April 10th,1912.She was carrying 1316 passengers,and,a crew of 89l.,Even,by modern standards,the 46,000 ton Titanic was a colossal ship.At that time,she was,not only,the largest ship that had ever been built,but,was regarded as unsinkable,for,she had sixteen water-tight compartments.,Even if,two of these were flooded,she would still be able to float.The tragic sinking of Titanic will always be remembered,for,she went down on her first voyage with heavy loss of life.,New Concept English L.10 The loss of Titanic,The use of connectives can make you essay smooth and organized.,Fun time!,Pick a picture and finish the task,and then you can win a gift!,好好学习，天天向上。,Study hard,_make progress everyday.,_ you study hard,you,will make progress every day.,and,If,除了时尚的外观以外，ipad 还有很多实用的功能。,_ its fashionable design,ipad also has a good many useful functions.,Apart from/Besides/In addition to,尽管是周末，同学们还在努力学习。,_,it is weekend,the students are studying hard.,Although/Despite the fact that,发工资了，我们决定去看,泰坦尼克号,。,_ I got my salary,we decided to go and watch the“Titanic”movie.,食品安全问题越来越多，人们不知道该吃什么了。,There are more and more problems on food safety and _,we have no idea what to eat.,Because/As/Since/After,so/as a result/therefore/thus,Connectives,并列,先后,因果,递进,假设,转折,and,or,but,both and,either or,so that,neither nor,not only but also,as well as,to begin with,first,second,later,finally,afterwards,in the end,last but not the least,because of,due to,since,as;thus,so,as a result,as a consequence,in addition,as well,also,secondly,apart,from that,if/on condition that/as long as/unless/in case,however,though/although(yet)/even if/,no matter/in spite of/despite,C.Word Choice,“Advanced”expressions,我认为,I think,重要,importa
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