《复习比较作》PPT课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,比较型作文,一、运用比较手法来阐明自己的观点,对于这类作文，要求在比较所讨论的两个事物优缺点的同时，阐述自己的观点与倾向。在具体写作时，对赞成的事物要多写优点，缺点则一笔带过，而对反对的事物，则要大写特写其缺点，优点一笔带过。这样处理，作者的观点才能得以体现。这类作文通常有两种写法，即：,整体比较法和分项比较法。,Comparison and Contrast,A VS B,1)One-Side-at-a-Time,（整体比较法）,A:a b c,B:a b c,2)Point-by-Point,（分项比较法）,a:A&B,b:A&B,c:A&B,e.g.To Live in The City Or The Countryside,1.One-Side-at-a-Time,（整体比较法）,:,A:live in the cityB:live in the countryside,a.convenient life a.inconvenient life,b.good education b.poor education,c.pollution c.close to nature,2.Point-by-Point,（分项比较法）,a.life,A:live in the city B:in the countryside,(convenient)(inconvenient),b.education,A:live in the city B:in the countryside,(good)(poor),c.environment,A:live in the city B:in the countryside,(pollution)(fresh air),十句作文模式,整体比较法,City Life,，,Your Best Choice,Part I,S1:Topic:why do we talk about the subject,what are the subject you are going to talk about,S2:Thesis:your preference for A or B,S1,：如今越来越多的人渴望改变自己目前的生活方式，有的选择大城市，有的选择农村,S2,：我的选择,城市生活,Part II,S3:Concede Bs advantages,S4:But Bs disadvantage 1,S5:2,S6:3,S7:As corresponding advantage1,S8:2,S9:3,S3,：让步承认农村生活的优点，比如安静、贴近自然、污染少等,S4,：农村生活缺点,1,S5,：农村生活缺点,2,S6,：农村生活缺点,3,S7,：城市生活相对应的优点,1,S8,：城市生活相对应的优点,2,S9,：城市生活相对应的优点,3,Part III,S10:Conclusion:restate your choice,S10：结论：城市生活，你最佳选择,Exercise1：,Please analyze the situation if you choose B:country life.,How to write the essay in 10 sentences?,附：十句作文句型：,S1:,With the arrival of information age,the wide use of computers/the internet,the development of science and technology,the improved standard of living ,plays an important role/part in our daily life,increasing attention is drawn to .,S2:,While it is commonly believed that A,widely accepted,I believe B.,S3:,It is true that A.,To be sure,S4:,But the chief faults are,obvious defects,S5:,Studies shows,Researches demonstrate that,Experiments reveal,S6:,On the contrary,On the other hand,the advantage of B,far outweigh,carry more weight than advantages of A,S7:,For one thing,B,S8:,For another,B also,S9:,Although B fails to ,few things can,can not,be compared with,match B in terms of,equal,S10:,Therefore,I think the advantage,the significance,of B is more than,十句作文模式,分项比较法,Newspapers as a Better Source of News,Part I,S1:Topic:why do we talk about the subject,what are the subject you are going to talk about,S2:Thesis:your preference for A or B,S1,：如今有很多渠道可以获取知识，比如报刊杂志、电视、网络等,其其中最为常见的是电视和报纸,S2,：我的选择,报纸,Part II,S3:Concede Bs advantages,S4:But Bs disadvantage 1,S5:As corresponding advantage1,S6:Bs disadvantage 2,S7:As corresponding advantage2,S8:Bs disadvantage 3,S9:As corresponding advantage3,S3,：让步承认电视获取知识的优点，比如生动、形象等,S4,：电视的缺点,1,S5,：报纸对应的优点,1,S6,：电视的缺点,2,S7,：报纸对应的优点,2,S8,：电视的缺点,3,S9,：报纸对应的优点,3,Part III,S10:Conclusion:restate viewpoints,S10,：结论：,报纸,更好的消息来源,Exercise2：,Please analyze the situation if you choose B:TV.,How to write the essay in 10 sentences?,二、通过比较来说明两个事物的性质，不阐明自己的观点，不作选择，在分别阐述两个事物的优缺点之后，提出一种均衡的观点。,十句作文模式,How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic,Part I,S1:put forward the topic,S2:general view on this problem,S1:,现在城市交通问题越来越突出,S2,：对这个问题人们一般有以下两种解决方法,Part II,S3:solution A,S4:As advantage,S5:As disadvantage1,S6:As disadvantage2,S3:,第一种解决办法：多建马路,S4:,可以减轻车流密度,S5:,成本高,S6:,过多占用空间,S7:solution B,S8:Bs advantage,S9:Bs disadvantage,S7:,第二种解决办法：发展公交,S8:,公交容纳更多人，缓解交通阻塞,S9:,公交不方便，同时这样做不利于汽车工业发展,Part III,S10:a balanced view,S10,：均衡观点，多管齐下，集思广益，解决问题,Exercise3：,Please analyze the situation about:How to solve Energy Problem?”,How to write the essay in 10 sentences?,附：十句作文句型：,S1:,To most people,are the two basic,common,ways in which,means to,S2:,There are both advantages and disadvantages to,strengths and weaknesses,merits and limits,the two ways,systems .,S3:,The most obvious advantage of is,S4:,For example,S5:,Another advantage is,benefit,S6:,The defect ,however,is that,fault,problem,S7:,By contrast,On the contrary ,B,S8:,In addition to,B also,Besides,S9:,There is again a fault :it,defect,danger,S10:,Anyway,both the ways have their merits,Anyhow strengths,and their faults,imperfections,but both must be improved in order to achieve the best possible result/effect,a combination of their merits might be a step in the right direction .,Homework:,Choose one of the following topics and write an essay of 120 words with the help of what we have learned about the comparison and contrast composition.,City life and Country Life,Newspaper and Internet,Package Tours and Traveling on Ones Own,Bicycle and Bus,Train and Plane,6.Large Companies and Small Companies,7.Going into Business and Teaching,8.How to Solve the Energy Problem,9.How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic,10.How to solve the Housing Problem in City,