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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,What makes,a good essay?,英语作文写作,观点类,作文写作,基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析,话题词汇、短语错误,2.,词汇、短语、句型贫乏,3.,句子语法错误,4.,连贯性差,积累少,语法不扎实,篇章意识不足,考场作文,TIPS,1.,取悦评卷人,:,有清晰的整体脉络,有自然的段间衔接,.,经典的用词用句,有整齐美观的书写,.,2.,经典的用句：,感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，,名人名言,。,写作基本步骤,1.,仔细审题，列举大纲。,2,围绕要点，写出句子。,3.,添加过度，确保连贯。,4.,先求正确，再求灵活。,5.,认真眷写，卷面整洁。,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,的学生认为,的学生认为,应该春游,不应该春游,接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,高考临近，没有心情玩,活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,春游耽误学习,观点类,作文写作,The outline of the writing,Conclusion paragraph:,结尾,Introduction paragraph:,开头引出话题,Point 2,Body,Point 1,supporting idea 1,supporting idea 2,supporting idea 1,supporting idea 2,高三学生,_,春游,_,讨论,_,高考临近,_,接触自然,_,精神放松,_,呼吸新鲜空气,_,大脑休息,_,没心情玩,_,耽误学习,_,_,相关词汇短语默写,1.introduction(topic):,2.body(supporting ideas):,3.conclusion:,senior 3 students,go spring outing,discussion,with college entrance examination drawing near,be,close to nature,relax themselves,breathe some fresh air,rest their brains,（,dont feel like going,）,(waste the time),in my opinion,主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?,We have had a heated discussion.,1.introduction(topic):,巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Opinions are divided on this question.,Different people hold different/opposite opinions.,People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards,People have different opinions on this problem.,People take different views on this question.,The body part,Point1:,65%,的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）,翻译：,Most students,about 65%,are,in favor of,the idea that Senior 3 students should,go spring outing,.,The body part,point 1,：,表达观点一,句型：,of them hold the opinion that.,of them are,in favor of the idea,that,People who are for the idea think,Reason1,：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,They think it good to do sth,sth do good to sth,In their opinion,it is of great benefit to do sth,翻译,:They,think it good for their health to,be close to,nature and breathe some fresh air,Reason1,：,表列举说明的关联词,:,Firstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly Thirdly,In the first place In the second place,In the third place,Finally/Last but not least/,.,Reason 2:,活动是精神放松,/,大脑休息,/,有利于学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）,翻译,:,Whats more,，,they can,relax,themselves for a while and,rest,their brains,so that,they will be more energetic.,表示递进、强调的关联词,.Besides/Apart from/,Whats more/,In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/worse still/to make matters worse,Reason2,：,Conclusion:,小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应,。,Eg,:They think it will,do good to,their students.,Conclusion,However,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.,People who are against it dont think so.,Different from those.,people think.,On the other hand,some people are against,the idea.,Point 2:,的学生认为不应该 春,游（亮明观点）,翻译,:On the other hand,about 35%students are,against,the idea.,使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）,point 2,：,表列举说明的关联词,:,Firstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly Thirdly,In the first place In the second place,In the third place,Finally/Last but not least/,.,Reason 1:,高考临近，没有心情玩,翻译,:,They say that with college entrance examination,drawing near,they dont,feel like going,anywhere,.,They say/believe/hold the opinion that.,Reason1,：,Reason 2:,春游耽误学习,翻译,:,Besides,they think,going spring outing,will,take at least,a day,off.,They cant,afford,the time.They think they should,fix their attention on,their studies.,表示递进、强调的关联词,.Besides/Apart from/Whats more/In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/worse still/to make matters worse,Reason2,：,结尾常用,句型,In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,Conclusion paragraph:,结尾,Homework:,Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.,Thank you!,
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