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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/8/25,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/8/25,#,读后续,写专题一,浙江新高考,英语,Continuation Writing,读后续写,提供一段,350,词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料所给段落,开头语,和所标示,关键词,进行续写（,150,词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。,-,考试说明,01,读后续写高考评分标准,一,.,评分原则：,1.,本题总分为,25,分，按,5,个档次给分。,2.,评分时，先根据所续写短文的,内容,和,语言,初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。,3.,评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：,（,1,）与所给,短文及段落开头语的衔接程度,；,（,2,）内容的,丰富性,和对所标出,关键词语,的应用情况；,（,3,）应用语法结构和词汇的,丰富性和准确性,；,（,4,）上下文的,连贯性,；,4.,拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,5.,如书写较差，以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次,。,6.,词数少于,130,的，从总分中减去,2,分。,第五档,（,21,25,）,与所给短文,融洽度高,，与所提供各段落开头语,衔接合理,。,内容丰富,，应用了,5,个以上短文中标出的关键词语。,所使用,语法结构和词汇,丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。,有效使用了,语句间的连接成分,，使所续写短文,结构紧凑,。,二,.,评分标准,内容（丰富合理）,语言（准确生动）,思维（严密连贯）,02,续写体裁：记叙文,记叙文怎么读,一,.,读记叙文要素,5W,和,1H,“,who,what,where,when,why,how”,Who,is it about?,What,happens?,Where,does it happen?,When,does it happen?,Why,does it happen?,How,does it happen?,案例,1,：,2019,期末考读后续写,5W,和,1H,A light drizzle(,毛毛雨,)was falling as my sister Jill and I ran out of the Church,eager to get home and play with the,presents,that Santa Claus had left for us and our baby sister,Sharon.Across the street was a gas station where the bus would stop.It was closed for Christmas,but I noticed a family standing in the rain,huddled(,挤,)together.I wondered briefly why they were there,but soon forgot about them.,When we got home,there was hardly time to,enjoy,our presents because we had to go off to our grandparents house for our big dinner.As we drove by the closed gas station,I noticed the family were still there.,My father,was driving very slowly.Suddenly,he U-turned in the middle of the road and said,“Those people at the gas station have got children.Its,Christmas,!I cant stand it!”When my father pulled into the gas station,I saw there were five of them:the parents and three children-two girls and a small boy.Jill,Sharon,and I stared at the children.and they stared back at us.,“You waiting for the bus?”my father asked.,The man,said that they were going to,Birmingham,where he had a brother and prospects(,希望,)of a,job,.“Well,youre getting wet.There is a cover and some benches(,长凳,)in the next bus stop in Winborn,”my father said,“Ill drive you up there.”,They climbed into the car.They had no luggage,only the clothes they were wearing.My father asked the children if Santa Claus had found them yet.Three,sad,faces gave him the answer.“Well,”my father said,winking(,眨眼,)at my mother,“when I saw Santa this morning,he told me he was having trouble finding all kids and he asked me if he could,leave,your presents at my house.Well just go and get them before I take you to Winborn.”,Who,When,Where,What,Why,How,案例,1,：,2019,期末考读后续写,5W,和,1H,We&a family,-My father&the man,Christmas,at the gas station;at our house;in the car,stopped to help the family,Paragraph 1:,When we stopped at our house,the three children ran through the front door.,Paragraph 2:,Back in the car,on the way to Winborn,my father asked the man if he had money for the bus to Birmingham.,theme,?,02,续写体裁：记叙文,二,.,读情节,Beginning,Climax,Ending,Development,Inciting incident,：,引起故事矛盾或冲突,(conflict),的事件,;,Rising action,：,围绕冲突故事主人公采取一系列的行动,;,Falling action,：,冲突向得以解决的方向发展,;,Resolution,：,冲突得到了解决,;,Development:,案例,2,：,During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaware of the danger.The bull was busy with the matador at the time,but it suddenly caught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,however,seemed quite sure of himself.When the bull got close to him,he clumsily stepped aside to let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of the way before once more turning its attention to the matador.,During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.,The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaware of the danger.The bull was busy with the matador at the time,but it suddenly caught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,however,seemed quite sure of himself.When the bull got close to him,he clumsily stepped aside to let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of the way before once more turning its attention to the matador.,Beginning,During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of th
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